2026-2027学年外研版英语九上 Unit 5A fine balance 4.写作指导

如何写与保护生态相关的文章

本单元的主题是“生态保护”，围绕自然生态、生态危机与保护行动展开。与此相关的写作维度有：①描述当下存在的某种生态问题；②介绍某种濒危动物面临的困境；③讲述保护自然、守护物种的相关行动；④提出对人与自然和谐相处的建议。#1

在写保护某种濒危动物的相关内容时，通常先介绍其生存现状（如数量、栖息地情况、面临的生存威胁等），然后介绍保护措施，最后表达对保护濒危动物的看法并呼吁大家保护。#1.1典例

假定你是李华，最近参加了一次难忘的自然生态之旅，幸运地近距离观察了老虎，并从志愿者口中了解到老虎的生存现状。请你根据下面提示，以“Tigers

are

in

danger”为题写一篇英语短文，向校英语报投稿，呼吁大家保护老虎。#2

要求：

1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；

2.词数100左右。审主题：保护老虎审体裁：应用文审人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主审时态：一般现在时审要点：基本信息、老虎的生存现状、老虎对自然生态的重要性、保护老虎的措施写作框架词句积累词汇外形特征orange

fur

橙色皮毛

dark

stripes

深色条纹a

strong

body

强壮的身躯

sharp

teeth

and

claws

锋利的牙齿和爪子词汇生存现状in

great

danger

处于极大的危险中endangered

animals

濒危动物illegal

hunting

非法捕猎

cut

down

trees

砍伐树木lose

their

habitats

失去栖息地

hunt

and

kill

tigers

for

...

为了……猎杀老虎词汇保护措施build

nature

reserves

建立自然保护区plant

more

trees

种更多树protect

forests

保护森林

stop

hunting

停止猎杀increase

public

education加强公共教育let

people

know

the

importance

of

tigers

让人们了解老虎的重要性句子开头句①I

recently

took

an

unforgettable

ecological

trip

and

luckily

saw

tigers

up

close.我最近参加了一次难忘的生态之旅，有幸近距离见到了老虎。②As

one

of

the

strongest

wild

animals,

tigers

mostly

live

in

forests.作为最强壮的野生动物之一，老虎主要生活在森林里。句子中间句①Tigers

are

now

in

great

danger

mainly

because

of

human

activities.

老虎现在处于极大的危险中，主要是因为人类活动。②Cutting

down

trees

makes

tigers

lose

their

habitats.砍伐树木导致老虎失去了栖息地。句子③Hunting

tigers

illegally

makes

their

number

get

smaller

and

smaller.非法猎杀老虎使得它们的数量越来越少。④Tigers

are

important

to

nature

because

they

help

keep

the

number

of

other

wild

animals

in

balance.老虎对大自然很重要，因为它们有助于维持其他野生动物数量的平衡。句子结尾句①Let’s

work

together

to

save

tigers.让我们一起拯救老虎吧。②I

sincerely

hope

humans

and

tigers

can

live

together

in

harmony

forever.我真心希望人类和老虎能永远和谐共处。佳作展示Tigers

are

in

danger

Tigers,

one

of

the

most

charming

wild

animals,

have

orange

fur

and

unique

dark

stripes.①Now

they

are

crying

out

for

help.

②It

is

no

surprise

that

tigers

are

in

danger

due

to

human

activities.

③With

human

society’s

rapid

development,

forests

are

cut

down,

making

tigers

lose

habitats.

Some

people

even

hunt

and

kill

tigers

illegally

for

money.教材原句Itisnosurprisethatanimalssoonincreaseinnumber.（教材P68）

④Tigers

are

vital

to

nature

as

they

help

keep

the

number

of

other

wild

animals

in

balance.

If

they

disappear

from

the

earth,

many

other

species

will

be

greatly

affected.

⑤To

save

them,

we

should

not

only

build

more

nature

reserves

and

plant

more

trees

but

also

strictly

stop

illegal

hunting.

What’s

more,

everyone

should

raise

environmental

protection

awareness.

Let’s

take

action

now!

I

hope

humans

and

tigers

can

get

along

well

forever.名师点评

本篇习作结构清晰、内容完整，涵盖所有要点并进行了适当的补充。①巧用短语cry

out

for

help拟人化表达，把老虎濒危的处境比作“呼喊求救”，增强感染力。②It

is

no

surprise

that...和due