Unit 4 Natural Disasters Reading for writing公开课课件 2022-2023学年高中英语人教版必修第一册

2019新人教高中英语必修一

Unit4NaturalDisasters

ReadingforWritingTsunamiTsunamiWhatis“tsunami”?Thegreatwaves“tsunami”

isaseriesoftravelingoceanwavesofextremelylonglengthgeneratedbyearthquakesoccurringbloworneartheocean,submarinelandslidesanderuptions.DamageAPacific-widetsunamigeneratedbythe1960ChileEarthquake.TheGreatAlaskanEarthquakeof1964produceddeadlytsunamiwavesinAlaska,OregonandCalifornia.Damage

In1992and1993over2,000peoplewerekilledbytsunamisoccurringinNicaragua,IndonesiaandJapan.2019IndianOceantsunamithe,killingaround230,000people.WarmingupAfterscanningthematerials,answerthequestions.1.Whatisatsunami?Whatcausesit?Harborwave.Itiscausedbytheearthquake.

2.Whatdamagecanitcause?Itcancrashovereverythinginitsway,buildingsandevenawholecity.Besides,itcancausemanydeathstoo.

Lookatthepictureandtitle,inferthetypeofthetextandpredictwhatthetextmightbeabout.

PredictionItisanewsreport.Itmightbeaboutthebigdamagethetsunamicaused.FastReadingReadthenewsreportreleasedthedayafteratsunamiandanswerthequestions1.Whendidthetsunamihappen?2.Whatcausedthetsunami?3.Whywoulditbedifficulttodeliverfoodandsupplies?Ithappenedon26December,2004Averypowerfulearthquakeof9.0-magnitudewhichhappenedundertheseaoffthewestcoastofSumatraIslandinIndonesia.Dangerousconditionsanddamagedroadswillmakeitdifficulttodeliverfoodandsupplies.ReadthesummaryofthenewsreportandcheckthemainpointsitincludeMainpointsinanewsreportWhat:

When:

Why:

Where:How:Thetsunamicausedover6500peopledeathsandcausedgreatdamagetobuildings,carsandroads.On26December,2004,Thetsunamiwascausedbyapowerfulearthquake.InIndonesia,India,Thailand,Malaysia,andatleastfourothercountries.Foreignaidisorganized,butsuppliesaredifficulttodeliverbecauseofthedamagedroads.On26December2004,atsunamikilledmorethan6500tourists,fishermenandotherlocalsinSoutheastAsia.Thousandsofpeoplearemissingandthenumberofdeathsisexpectedtogrow.Thedamagecausedbythetsunamiismakingitdifficultforrescueworkerstohelpthesurvivors.MainpointsinsamplesummaryWhatmainpointsdoesitinclude?(Ex.2onpage55)dateeventplaceeffectcauseWhatmakesthenewsreportbelievable?WritingstyleThespotpicture,theserioustitle,thenumberscited,andthefactreportedinanobjectivemannerareallwhatmakethenewsreportmorebelievable.1.Asummaryisashortstatement.2.Ittellsthemainideasandonlyliststhemostimportantinformation.3.Itdoesn’tliterallycopytheoriginaltext,whichrequiresustowriteinourownwords.FeaturesofsummarySummary

概要是一篇较长文章本质思想的简洁重述，它要求用尽量少的语言对原文的主旨进行复述。概要不是简单的换句话说，更不是评论，而是作者思想中最基本部分的准确再现。《考试说明》中规定概要写作阅卷时按5个档次给分，其中最高档次第五档(21-25points)的评分标准是：1.理解准确，涵盖全部要点；2.能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇；3.完全使用自己的语言；4.有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使完成的概要结构紧凑。

写作方法:1.定位——查找核心信息

通过阅读定位语篇的核心信息，包括核心单词，核心短语和核心句子。(句子为主，以单词和短语为辅)2.改写——用自己的语言改写信息

在核心信息的基础上进行语言表达形式的改写，对原文的语言表达形式尽可能实现大规模的改变。改写过程中，原则上字数不超过原句，不改变原文的逻辑结构，充分考虑语句压缩。3.核查——添加关联词，检查句子的连贯性

核查句子的连贯性。核查标点、语法、连接词及字数，优先考虑使用较短的连接词，如：but，then，later等。

writeasummaryforthetextonpage50.StepI.Readthetextandwritealistofthemaindetails.◎Strangethingshappenedinthecountrysidebeforetheearthquake;◎Anearthquakehit

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Chinaon28July1976;◎________________________________________________________________________◎________________________________________________________________________◎____________________________________________________________________________________◎_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WritingasummaryTangshanThenumberofpeoplewhowerekilledorbadlyinjuredinthequakewasmorethan400,000;Nearlyeverythinginthecitywasdestroyed;Soldiersandmedicalworkerscametohelpthepeoplewhohadgreatlossandtotryandfindsurvivors;Withstrongsupportfromthegovernmentandthetirelesseffortsofthecity'speople,anewTangshanwasbuiltupontheearthquakeruins.StepII.Writedownthemainideaofeachparagraphbasedonthedetailsabove.

Para1:Para2:Para3:Para4:Para5:StrangethingshappenedinthecountrysideofHebei,China.AstrongearthquakehitTangshan,andmanypeoplewerekilledorinjured.Thecitywasgreatlyaffectedandnearlydestroyed.Therescueworkbegansoonafterthequake.Withstrongsupportfromthegovernmentandthecity'speople,thenewcityofTangshanwasbuilt.StepIII.Organisetheideasanddraftyoursummary.SampleWritingForseveraldays,strangethingsoccurredinthecountrysideofnortheasternHebei.Then,on28July1976,anearthquakehitTangshancity.Thecitywasgreatlyaffectedandnearlydestroyed.Manypeoplewerekilledorinjured.Therescueworkbegansoonafterthequakes.Soldiersandmedicalworkersarrivedtofindsurvivorsandhelpthepeoplewhohadlosteverything.Withstrongsupportfromthegovernmentandthetirelesseffortsofthepeople,anewTangshanwasbuilt.StepIV.Exchangedrafts.Usethechecklisttogivefeedbackonyourpartner'sdraftandfurtherpolishyourwork.√Doesthesummarygiveyouacleari