读后续写话题练(四)　成长篇

读后续写话题练(四)成长篇阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2025·河北高三下学期省级联测)ItwasasunnymorningwhenIpackedmybagsforabusinesstrip.Thehousewasfilledwiththeusualhustleandbustle(忙忙碌碌),buttodaytherewasasenseofexcitementmixedwithabitofanxiety.ThiswouldbethefirsttimeIwouldbeleavingmyson,Max,behindforafewdays.Max,fiveyearsold,wasusedtohavingmearound.Littledidheknow,todaywasgoingtobeadayofnewexperiencesandemotions.AsItookoutmysuitcase,Maxenteredtheroom,hiseyeswidewithcuriosity.“Mom,whereareyougoing？”heasked,hisvoicecarryinginnocenceandsomeconcern.Ismiled,“I'vetogoonatripforwork,Max.I'llbebackinafewdays.”Max'seyesgrewevenwider,andIcouldseethelookofshockonhisface.Hehadneverbeenapartfrommeformorethanaday,andtheconceptofmebeingawaywascompletelynewtohim.“But,Mom,whowilltakecareofme？”heasked,hisvoicetrembling(颤抖)slightly.Ihuggedhimtightly,saying,“Dadwillbeherewithyou,andGrandmaiscomingovertohelp.You'llhavesomuchfunwiththem,andI'llcallyoueveryday，”Isaid,hopingtoeasehisworries.Maxnoddedslowly,butIcouldtellhewasstillunsure.Asthedaywenton,InoticedMaxstayingclosetome,watchingmyeverymove.Hehelpedmepack,andbroughtmeitemshethoughtImightneed,likehisfavoritetoycarandadrawinghemadeforme.Hissmallgesturestouchedmyheart,andIrealizedhowmuchhecared.Whenitwasfinallytimeformetoleave,Maxstoodbythedoor,hisexpressionamixofbraveryandsadness.Ihuggedhimonelasttimeandwhispered,“I'llbebackbeforeyouknowit,Max.BegoodandrememberthatIloveyou.”Henodded,withtearsinhiseyes.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2．请按如下格式作答。AsIdroveaway,Icouldn'thelpbutglancebackatthehouse._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WhenIfinallyreturnedhome,Maxgreetedmewiththebiggesthugever.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：As

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house.Therehewas,standingatthewindow,wavingwithasmallsmileonhisface.Itwasamomentthattouchedmyheart,butIknewthisexperiencewouldbevaluableforbothofus.Duringmytrip,IcalledMaxeveryevening.Wetalkedabouthisday,thefunhewashavingwithDadandGrandma,andthenewthingshewaslearning.Eachcallseemedtoeasehisworriesalittlemore,andbythethirdday,hesoundedmoreconfidentandhappier.When

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ever.“Mom!You'reback！”heexclaimed,hisfacelightingupwithjoy.Atthatmoment,Irealizedhowmuchhehadgrowninjustafewdays.Hehadfacedhisfearsandcomeoutstronger.ThisexperiencetaughtMaxanimportantlessonaboutresilienceandindependence.Itshowedhimthatevenwhenthingschange,hecanadaptandthrive.Italsoremindedmeoftheimportanceofdevelopingthesequalitiesinhimandhelpinghimbecomeastrongandconfidentindividual.【导语】本文以母子情为线索展开，讲述了作者因工作原因第一次离开五岁的儿子Max几天，儿子从最初的不舍、担忧到后来逐渐适应并成长的故事，展现了孩子在面对分离时的脆弱以及独立成长的过程。【详解】1．段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“