40分写作规范练(一)

40分写作规范练(一)写作(共两节，满分40分)第一节(满分15分)(2025·安徽示范高中联考)假定你是李华，上周五你们班参加了学校组织的“美丽试验田(BeautifulExperimentalField)”劳动实践活动。请你给你的英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：1．活动介绍；2.你的感想。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearChris，__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua参考范文：Dear

Chris，Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.I'mexcitedtoshareourBeautifulExperimentalFieldlaborpracticelastFriday.Theactivity,aimingtoraisetheawarenessoflaborandgetusclosetonature,wasquiteengaging.Onarrival,weweredividedintogroups,eachresponsibleforaspecificarea．Someremovedweeds,someloosenedthesoil,andothersfetchedwater.Tiredaswewere,wethoughtthisactivitywasquiterewarding.Wenotonlyrelaxedourselvesbutalsohadabetterunderstandingofthevalueoflabor.Yours，Li

Hua第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2025·“皖南八校”高三联考)ForaslongasIcouldremember,myrelationshipwithmyparentsfeltstrained(紧张的).Itwasn'tthattheywerecruelorneglectful,buttherewasalwaysthisdistance,likeaninvisiblewallseparatingus.Conversationswereshort,usuallyaboutchoresorschool.WheneverItriedtoopenupaboutmyfeelingsormystruggles,they'dbrushitoffwithanunconcerned“You'llbefine.”or“Focusonyourstudies.”Overtime,Istoppedtrying.Inmymind,theywerecold,unfeelingpeoplewhoonlycaredaboutrulesandresponsibilities.Theyworkedlonghours,andwhentheywerehome,theyseemedverytired.Ispentmostofmytimeeitherinmyroomoroutwithfriends,seekingthewarmthandunderstandingIdidn'tgetathome.Then,oneday,everythingshifted.ItwasaregularFridayafternoon,andIhadstayedlateatschooltoworkonagroupproject.BythetimeIleft,thesunwasalreadysetting.Idecidedtotakeashortcutthroughaquietalley(小巷)nearmyneighborhoodtosavetime.AsIwalked,lostinthought,Iheardfootstepsbehindme.Atfirst,Iignoredthem,buttheygotfasterandcloser.BeforeIcouldreact,amangrabbedmybackpackandtriedtoyank(猛拽)itoffme.MyheartpoundedasIstruggledtopullaway,buthewasstronger.Ishoutedforhelp,butthestreetwasdeserted.JustasIthoughtIwascompletelyhelpless,Iheardaloud,familiarvoice,“Lethimgo！”Itwasmydad.Outofnowhere,hetackledthemantotheground.Mymomwasrightbehindhim,callingthepoliceimmediately.Themanran,butnotbeforemydadgavechaseforafewfeettomakesurehedidn'tdoubleback.Whenmydadturnedaround,Isawtheangerinhiseyesgivewaytosomethingelse—pure,rawconcern.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2．请按如下格式作答。“Areyouokay？”heasked,tappingonmyshoulders.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thatnight,sittingonthesofa,mymomheldmyhandlikeshehadn'tinyears.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：“Are

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shoulders.Inodded,stilltooshockedtospeak.MompulledmeintoahugsotightthatIcouldbarelybreathe.Whenthepolicearrived,myparentsexplainedeverythingwhileIstoodsilently,mymindreeling.HowhadtheyevenknownwhereIwas?Itturnedoutthey'dgottenworriedwhenIhadn'tcomehomeontimeandhaddecidedtolookforme.Theyhadcheckedmyusualroutefirst,thentheshortcutwhentheydidn'tfindme.That

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years.“You'reourson，”shesaidsoftly.“Wemaynotalwaysshowit,butyou'reeverythingtous.”Forthefirsttime,Isawthemnotasdistantfigures,butaspeoplewholovedmeintheirownimperfectway.Theyweren'tcold—theywerejusttryingtoholditalltogetherinawayIhadn'tunderstood.Sincethatnight，they'vebeenbetter.Italktothemmore,andtheymakeanefforttolisten.Myparentsshowedmethatloveisthere,asrealasanything.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者与父母之间关系的变化，特别是从感到疏远到经历一次意外事件后重新理解父母的爱，展现了作者内心的成长和对家庭关系的深刻认识。【详解】1．段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“‘你没事吧？’他拍了拍我的肩膀问道”