40分写作规范练(三)

40分写作规范练(三)写作(共两节，满分40分)第一节(满分15分)(2025·河南名校学术联盟模拟冲刺)假定你是李华，看到一位名叫Mark的高三学生在博客上求助，他制订了周密的学习计划，然而却总是因为完不成计划而沮丧。请根据以下提示给他回信，内容包括：1．具体建议；2．给予鼓励。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMark，__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestregards，LiHua参考范文：Dear

Mark，Iunderstandyourfrustrationwithnotcompletingyourstudyplans.Myadviceistostartbysettingsmaller,moremanageablegoals.Breakyourtasksintosmall,specificpartsthatareeasytocarryout,andbesuretotakebreakstoavoidburnout.Also,don'tbetoohardonyourself.It'sokayifyoudon'talwaysmeetyourtargets.What'simportantisyourprogress,notperfection.Staypositive!Remember,smallconsistenteffortswillleadtobigresults.Keepgoing,anddon'tgiveup!Best

regards，Li

Hua第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ABirthdaySurpriseIstoodatthekitchenwindowwatchingPapaashesatintheold,woodenlawnchairstaringoutatthelake.Ralph,hisoldblackdog,layonthegroundathisside.Papa'shandabsentlystroked(抚摩)theheadofhisoldcompanionastheydreamedthedreamsofoldmenandolddogsintheeveningsun.“Hedoesthisdayafterday？”IaskedMama．Shenodded,sadnessfillinghereyes.“Idon'tknowwhattodoforhim.ThereisastrongdesireinhiseyesthatIcan'tsatisfy—adesireforthepast.Thepastcan'tbebroughtbacktothepresent.Oncedaysaregone,theyaregoneforever，”Mamasighed.“I'mgoingdowntotalktohim，”Isaid.IcalledouttoPapaandhandedhimacupofcoffee.“WhatareyouandRalphthinkingaboutallthesehoursyouspendouthere？”Iasked.“We'renotthinking，”hesaidsoftly.“We'rewishing.”Isatonthegrassbesidehischair.“Wishingforwhat？”“Fortheimpossible,Isuppose，”hesighed.“Youalwaystoldmethatnothingwasimpossibleifyouwanteditbadlyenoughandwerewillingtoworkhardforit，”Iremindedhim.Helaughedsoftly,buttherewasnoamusementinthesound.“ButRalphandIhavecometolearnthatwhenyoureachourage,somethingsareactuallyimpossible.”“MaybeIcanhelpyou.Whatdoyouwantsobadly？”Iasked.Papagrinned(咧嘴大笑),andhiseyesshonebrightlyatthethoughtofhisdreambecomingareality.“RalphandIwanttofixuptheoldboatandgooutonthelakeagain.Weusedtospendalldayoutonthelake,fishing,drinkingbeerandeatingsandwiches，”Papasaid.Yes,Iremember.WhenIwasyoung,PapaandRalphoftenenjoyedthemselvesonthelakeonweekends.They'dstartforhomewhenthesunwentdown,totallysatisfiedwiththemselvesandwithlife.Now,Papawasalmosteighty-fiveyearsoldandhadaheartcondition,soMamawashorrifiedbytheideaofhimgoingoutonthelakeagainatfirst.ButeventuallyImanagedtoconvinceher.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2．请按如下格式作答。AfterMamaagreed,Ipersuadedmyfriendstojoininmysecretplan.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OnthedayofPapa'sbirthday,wewerealleagertogivehimasurprise.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：After

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plan.Idecidedtofixuptheoldboat.Theboatdidn'tfallapart,andthepainthadfadedandcracked.Wespentseveralweekendsrepairingandpaintingtheboat.Ireplacedthefadedandcrackedseatcushionswhilemyfriendsrepairedthemotor.WeexpectedPapatobeproudoftheboatasheandRalphwentoutonthelakeagain.Tiredaswewere,wewerehappytocompletetherestoration.Iwouldn'tletoffthesecretuntilPapa'sbirthday.On

the

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birthday,we

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surprise.Hecouldhardlybelievehiseyeswhenweshowedhimthenewboat.Thenwesaid“Happybirthday”tohiminchorus,andhewassotouchedthattearsblurredhiseyes.Afterthat,weputsandwichesanddogbiscuitsonitwhileMamaalsoboughtPapaanewhat.Soon,weallstoodbythelakeandwatchedasPapaandRalphsailedaway,Papawavingandlaughing.Seeinghimsohappy,IfeltthateverythingIdidforhimwasrewarding