高中英语读后续写；难忘回忆类

难忘回忆类

（2018年6月浙江卷）

Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.He

decidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcity

inthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthela（cafternoon.UnclePaul,

mydad'sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.

HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanand

Kyle.MydadandIspent（henightin（heguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothe

frogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearbv.Veryearlyinthemorning.UnclePaulwoke

usuptohavebreakfast,"Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfaim,“hesaid.Afterbreakfast,I

wenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotake

thesheepouttograze（吃草）.IwasimpressedtosecmydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.

Theylookedreallycool.

Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcould（akeahorseride,andhesaidyes,as

longasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn'tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,

mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowards

themountains."Don'tbelateforsupper/'UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothat

youdon'tgetlost!""OK!"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarm

housewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,the

deepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlooked

likeabeautifulwoven（编织的）blanketspreadoutupon（hegroundjustforus.

Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

Paragraph?:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

2.1整体把握:

主题语境人与自我-生活与学习-个人、家庭、料区及学校生活

本篇读后续写为记叙文，文章大意为爸爸带我去西部叔叔家度假时，

语篇话题

我和爸爸去骑马遇到的趣事，令我终身难忘。

故事要素

when：onesummerholiday

where：themountainsintheWildWest,inNewMexico

情节梳理

who：mydadandI

what：Mydadtookmetotakeahorseride,andduringtheridewemeta

littlerabbit.Whenwechaseaftertherabbit,wegotlost.

通过第一段首句"Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmy

horse.”可预测，续写思路为：兔子什么样-骑马追兔-兔子不见-我

们迷路。

情节走向

通过第二段首句“Wehadnoideawherewcwereanditgotdark."可预

测，续写思路为：天色渐黑-害怕惊恐-借助大自然知识找到方向-成

功找到家。

2.2逐句写作：

第一段：

1.它毛茸茸的，有一身漂亮的棕色头发。

Ilwasfurrywithacoatofgorgeousbrownhair.

2.它用它的一对红眼睛看着我，然后开始在前面疾驰。

Afterlookingupatmewithitspairofredbulbs,itbegantoscurryahead.

3.“为什么不把它抓回来交给保罗叔叔呢？他们一定很高兴。”想到这一点，我拼命地

骑着马去寻找它。

“WhynolcalchitandbringitbackloUnclePaul?Tkeymustbeveryhappy."Withthis

ihought.Irodehardlohunlforit

4.爸爸看到了，只好跟着我。兔子非常敏捷，很快就进入了一片山林。

Dadsawitandhadtofollowme.Therabbitwasveryagile,soonenteringamountain

forest.

5.我们不得不下马，继续追赶，完全忘记了后面的赛道。

WchadlogetdownihcTorses,continuingthechaseandlotallyforgettingthetrackback.

6.尽管我们拼命尝试，但兔子最终还是看不见了。

Eventhoughweirieddesperalely.(herabbitwasoulofsighlintheend.

7.然后我们意识到我们在森林深处。

Thenwerealizedwewereinthedeeppartofaforest.

第二段：

8.乌云似乎在天空聚集。

Anddarkcloudsseemediobegaiheringinihesky.

9.拿出手机，我们很快就发现出了问题：没有信号。

Takingoutthecellphone、wesoonfoundsomethingwaswrone：nosignal.

10.没有指南针。我吓坏了，盯着爸爸，试图从他那里寻求解决问题的办法。

Andnocoinpass.Frighlcncd,IslarcdalDad、trying2seekasolutionfur(lie〔roublefruin

him.

11.“也许你在地理课上学到的东西管用，”他指着天上的星星说。

“Maybewha」youhavelearnedingeographyclassworks」'hesaid、pointingloIheslars

inihesky.

12.我知道他指的是北极星。很快我们找到了正确的方向。

1knewhemeanttheNorthStar.Soonwefoundtherisktdirection.

13.我们赶紧回去找马。河又出现了。

WehurriedbackfindingIhehorses.Andtheriverwasinsightagain.

14.家人很担心,准备报警。

Thefamilywasworriedandaboultocallthepolice.

15.一看到我们，他们松了一口气，紧紧地拥抱着我们。

A」ihesigh〔ofus.」heywererelievedandhuggedusligMly.

16.在我的一生中，没有什么比这次猎兔更令人难忘的了！

Therewasnolhingmorememorable(han(hisrabbilhuntinginmylife!

2.3范文赏析

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Itwasfurrywithacoatof

gorgeousbrownhair.Afterlookingupatmewithitspairofredbulbs,itbeganto

scurryahead."WhynotcatchitandbringitbacktoUnclePaul?Theymustbevery

happy."Withthisthought,Irodehardtohuntforit.Dadsawitandhad(ofollowme.The

rabbitwasveryagile,soonenteringamountainforest.Wehadtogetdownthehorses,

continuingthechaseandtotallyforgettingthe【rackback.Eventhoughwetried

desperately,therabbitwasoutofsightintheend.Thenwerealizedwewereinthedeep

partofaforest.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Anddarkcloudsseemedtobe

gatheringinthesky.Takingoutthecellphone,wcsoonfoundsomethingwaswrong:no

signal.Andnocompass.Frightened,IstaredatDad,tryingtoseekasolutionforthe

troublefromhim."Maybewhatyouhavelearnedingeographyclassworks/'hesaid,

pointingtothestarsinthesky.IknewhemeanttheNorthStar.Soonwefoundthe

rightdirection.Wehurriedbackfindingthehorses.Andtheriverwasinsightagain.The

familywasworriedandabuullucallthepolice.Alllicsightofus,llicywererelievedand

huggedustightly.Therewasnothingmorememorablethanthisrabbithuntinginmylife!

三、素材积累

高级句型素材积累(非谓语动词/倒装句/比较级的否定表示最高级)

3.1非谓语动词

1＞在家整整复习了一个周末，他满怀信心地期待即将到来的考试。

Havingreviewedhislessonsforawholeweekendathome,heexpectedthecomingexamwith

confidence.

2＞她接连经历了那么多次失败后，终于振作起来了。

Havingexperiencedsomanyfailuresoneafteranother,shefinallypickedherselfup.

3＞因为被老师责骂，他大哭起来。

Scoldedbytheteacher,hebursiinto〔cars.

4＞他的爸爸去世了，留给他一大笔钱。

Hisfalherdied,leavinghimagrealdealofmoney.

5＞女孩微笑着，长发在微风中飘动。

Thegirlsmiledwithherlonghairflowinginthebreeze.

6＞他的妻子伤心极了，眼里满是泪水。

Hiswifewasindeepsorrowwithhereyesfilledwithtears.

3.2倒装句

l＞他太激动了以致于无法入睡。

Soexciledwasheihalhecouldn'igolosleep.

2＞这就是“有志者事竟成”这个真理。

Suchisthetruththatwherethereisawill,」hereisaway.

3＞直到失去所有的财产，他才意识到自己被骗了。

Notuntilhehadlostallhispossessionsdidherealizethathewascheated.

4＞山顶上坐着一个巨人。

on(helopofmouniainsilsagianlman.

5＞沉默之后，响起一阵掌声。

Aftersilencecamearoundofapplause.

3.3否定+比较级表示最高级

1＞没有什么比这更令人沮丧了。

Nothingismorefrustrating【hanthis.

2＞我非常赞同你的观点。

Ican'tagreewilhyoumore.

3＞在我的一生中，没有什么比这次猎兔更令人难忘的了！

Therewasnothingmorememorablethanthisrabbithuntinginmylife!

四、模拟演练

练习（一）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。

MyDad'sBestFlower

Iremembermyfirsthomewasasmallapartmentonthesecondfloorwithalovelyand

spaciousbalcony（阳台）.Whenmymomwasbusyinthekiuhen,sheletmestayonthebalcony

watchingthekidsplayinginthesireet.On（hatbalconyIplayedsometimeswithmyeldersister,

Maria.Shewassevenyearsoldandwhenmymonwasabsentshewaslikeamothertome.The

balconywasagreathobbyplacefbrmyfather.Afterhisworkheusedtogrowcarnations（康乃馨）

intheflowerboxes.Hiscarnationswerered.pinkandwhite,andeven-oneappreciatedthemfor

theirbeauty.

Hetookcareofthemv/ithsomuchloveanddevotion.Hedealtcarefullywithhisflowers

likeamothertakingcareofherbaby.ManytimesIsatonthefloorofthebalconyforhours

observinghimandhislovelyflowerswithpatience.Hewasalwaysdoingsomethingon（hat

balcony.Hewaswateringthemeveryday,cleaning（hebalconyfloor,changingthepollingsoil

andwhenthestems（茎）werethick,strongandhighenough,hestartedhisimprovementoperation

likeadoctor.

Mydadtookatinyknifeandwithhislefthandheheldthestemofthecarnationand

measuredtheheight.Thenhemadeasmallmarkonthestemwithhisfinger.Afterwardshemade

asharpcutwiththeknife,justenoughtofitinagrainofbarley（插穗的芽）.Thenhebandagedthe

stemwithasmallbandage.Hisjobwasthentowatertheplantsandtotakecareofthem.44Noone

shouldtouchthem^^,hesaidtomom.Everyday,whenhecamehomefromworkhewentstraight

tothebalcony.

Momusedtotellus:"Donottouchdaddy'sflowers."Forusitwasafascinatingexperience

luwaluhhowthesmallslcmsweregrowingandmakingflowers.Whendiecanialionshadgrown

bigenough,mydadenjoyedwatchingthemeveryday.Wcthekidsdidtoo.

ParaI:

Oneday,myeldersister,wholoveddadverymuch,hadagreatidea.

_______________________________________________________Para2:

Whenmydadarrived,hewentasusual,straighttothebalconyandsawhisflowerslyingcnthe

floorlikedeadanimals.

练习(二)

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。

ItwasFebruary8th.Iwascorrectingstudents'homeworkwhenIheardaknockattheofficedoor.

TherestoodmyhusbandMichaelwithalonggoldbox.Thetophadaclear,plasticwindow.

Insidewereahalf-dozenyellowroses,thesameastheflowersIhadcarriedinmyweddingparty.

“HappyfirsthalRanniversary,“Michaelsaidwithahugesmile.

IwassosurprisedthatIcouldn'tevenanswer.Theflowerswerebeautifillandwentwellwiththe

goldbox.Istoodthereinfrontofmycolleaguesandsomeofmystudentswithmyheartbeating

veryfast.

Thefirstsixmonthofourmarriagehadpassedby.Wetaughtatthesamemiddleschool,sowc

alwayshadplentytotalkabout.Weenjoyeddoingthingstogether,including(ravelling,cooking,

andgoingto(hetheatre.IknewfromthebeginningthatMichaelwasthoughtful,buttheseflowers

wereaboveandbeyond.Hewasnotonlythoughtfulbutsoromantic.

MichaelandIhadmetayearandhalfearlierwhenweappliedforthesameteachingjob.We

hadn'lknowntherewereIwoleachingpositionsavailablewhenwuhadihcinterviews.His

interviewwasfirst,andminefollowed.Whenwchadfinishedit,wefoundourselvesseatednext

toeachotherintheheadmaster'soffice.

Smilingshylyateachother,westartedchatting.t4Howdidyougo?”Michaelasked.“Oh,fine,"I

replied.<4Itturnsoutthatthereisatypingteacherpositionopen.ItoldthemIwouldtakeitifthey

neededme.”"Doyouknowhowtoteachtyping?^^ThoughIfeltveryangry,Iansweredcalmly,

"Otcourse,yes.Butdoyouknowhowtoteach?"Then,therewasaperiodofsilencebetweenus.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

3.Paragraph1：

Luckily,beforewehadanargument,theheadmasterappeared.

_______________________________________________________Paragraph?:

Michaelwasagreathusbandwhoalwaysrememberedmywords.

练习（三）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Overtheyears,I'vebeenguiltyofhurriedlyshuttingthefrontdoortomanystrangerswhen

theycametomyhomeknockingwiththeintentionofsellingthings.Ihateditwhentheytried

theirbesttopersuademetobuythethingstheypromoted.Butearlierthisyear,aroundEastertime,

adearfriendofmine,Linda,hadanexperiencethatchangedmymindandattitudetowardsthese

"intruders".

Lastwinter,Lindawentthroughaverymessydivorceandwasverydepressed.Soshequit

herjobandleftLosAngeles,wheresheencounteredherex-husbandincollege.Sheflewto

BostonontheeastcoastoftheUS.Later,shesettledinanewneighborhoodinEastBoston.

However,shortlyafterwards,thecompanywheresheworkedwentbankrupt（破产）.Sufferinga

seriesofbitterblows,shefellill,aseverecaseofflu.Shehadtostayathomeforthewholeweek,

feelingextremelybadandhopeless.

Earlyonemorning,Lindalayinbed,feelingpainfulallover.Thenallofasudden,therewas

anupsettingknockonherfrontdoor.Strugglingoutofthebed,shedraggedherselftothewir.dow.

There,outside,shesawayoungladycarefullyholdingsomeleaflets（传单）andaTVsetmodel.

SheknewofalargeTVsetestablishmentnearbyandassumedamessagewasabouttobegently

delivered."ThisisthelastthingIneedtoday."Shemutteredtoherselfandhesitantlyopenedthe

door.

Coughingbitterly,Lindastuckherheadout."Excusems,madam...Htheyoungladysaic

withasmile."I'msorrybutIamnottheslightestbitinterestedinanyTVwhatever."Linda

interruptedherimpatiently."Asamatteroffact.Iamfeelingterriblyawful.""IsthereanythingI

candofbryou,madam?"theyoungladyaskedwithconcern."NothanksJustleavemealone."

Lindathenshutthedoorinherface.Theyoungladypolitelyturnedandleftinsilence.

注意：

I.续写词数应为15()左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卜£勺相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:Afewhourslater,anotherknock.

Paragraph2:Lindawassurprisedbythislovelyaction.

范文赏析

练习(一)

Oneday,myeldersister,wholoveddadverymuch,hadagreatidea.Wantingtohelpdad,she

cuttheflowersfromtheirstemsandarrangedthemonthefloor.Shebelievedthatdadwouldbe

verypleasedtosecihcmliiatway.Wheniliumrealizedwhalinysisterhaddone,shedidiflsaya

word.Mysisterdidn'tunderstandwhywcweresoquietwithoutawordofappreciation.

Whenmydadarrived,hewentasusual,straighttothebalconyandsawhisflowerslyingon

thefloorlikedeadanimals.Helookedtowardstheslreetloseeiftherewasonefromthe

neighborschildrenwhocouldhavedoneit.ThenheenteredIhelivingroomandlookedatmcmin

silence.

Weailwaitedforapunishment.Mom,whoalwaystaughtustotellthetruthlookedatdad

andsaid."Wehavenobadneighborsinourarea."Thenwithanicetoneshecontinued,"No

outsiderdidthisgreatjob.onlyourlovelydaughter,Maria”.Dad'sfacechangedfromtensetoa

smileandthenhesaid“DoIhaveabetterflowerthanmylovelydaughter?”Mysistersmiledand

gavedadabighug.

练习（二）

Luckily,beforewehadanargument,theheadmasterappeared.Theheadmaster'sarrival

relievedourembarrassment.Thenhetoldustheresultoftheinterview:^Congratulations,youtwo

guyswerewelcometoourschool!”Whenhearingthenews,Iwasshockedanddelighted.It

turnedoutthatthereweretwoteachingpositionsavailable.Thus,webecamecolleaguesatone

school.ThenIfoundthatthetwoofussharedmanysimilarhobbiesandalwayshadalottota