【曹军喜】读后续写指导课.pptx

1、WelcometoEricsclass!,Astory,when,where,who,what,how,why,ReadingforWriting,anoldman,alittleboy,sellmagazines,ReadingforWriting,hardlyevercameout,notsayhelloto,simplyjustglaredat,Tip1:Bydescribingwhatacharacterdoesindetailinsteadoftellingthereadersdirectly,youcanshowhispersonalitiesorfeelingsvividly.,

2、unfriendly,ReadingforWriting,openedslowly,saidimpatiently,unwilling,knockedonthedoor,triedtosellmagazines,staredwithoutaword,uninterested,askedaboutthedogfigurines,ReadingforWriting,“Yes,Ihavemanycollectionsinmyhouse.TheyaremyfamilyhereandtheyareallIhave.”,Tip2:Bydescribingwhatacharactersays,youcanp

3、icturehispersonalitiesorfeelingsvividly.,lonely,myfamily,allIhave,ReadingforWriting,slowly,impatiently,unwilling,knockedonthedoor,triedtosellmagazines,staredwithoutaword,uninterested,askedaboutthedogfigurines,myfamilyallIhave,interested,triedagaintosellmagazines,closedthedoor,No,goodbye,impatient,Re

4、adingforWriting,Whatwouldtheboydonext?,hadanideahadalittledogfigurinedidnotmeannearlyasmuchtohim,givethedogfigurinetotheoldman,Tip3:Thedevelopmentofthestorycanbeinferredfromthegiveninformation.,ReadingforWriting,Inferthedevelopmentfromthegivensentences,Para.1Thelittleboyheadedbackdowntotheoldmanshou

5、se.,Para.2Fromthatdayonsomethingchangedinsidetheoldman.,Time:inoneday,What?,Place:attheoldmanshouse,Inferringthedevelopment,Raisequestionsaboutthedevelopment,Tip4:Byraisingquestionsonyourown,youcanproducemoredetailsofthedevelopmentofthestory.,Para.1Thelittleboyheadedbackdowntotheoldmanshouse.,Para.2

6、Fromthatdayonsomethingchangedinsidetheoldman.,Inferringthedevelopment,Para.1Thelittleboyheadedbackdowntotheoldmanshouse.,Q2:Howwouldtheoldmanreacttotheboysvisitandoffer?,Q1:Whatwouldthelittleboysayanddo?,explainedwhyhecameagain,askedwhytheboycameagain,feltsurprisedandmoved,acceptedthedogfigurine,gav

7、ethedogfigurine,Inferringthedevelopment,Para.2Fromthatdayonsomethingchangedinsidetheoldman.,Q1:Whatchangedinsidetheoldman?,Q2:Whatwouldtheboydofortheoldman?,Q3:Howwouldtheoldmanfeelintheend?,Inferringthedevelopment,hardlyevercameout,notsayhelloto,simplyjustglaredat,onlyhaddogfigurinesashisfamily,Unf

8、riendly:,Lonely:,cameout,communicatewith,becamehisfriend,Notunfriendly:,Notlonely:,Q1:Whatchangeinsidetheoldman?,Inferringthedevelopment,Q2:Whatwouldtheboydofortheoldman?,Q3:Howwouldtheoldmanfeelintheend?,oftenvisited,RequirementsforWriting,第二节：读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。注意：所续写短文的词数应为1

9、50左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。,Choosetheunderlinedkeywords,magazines,neighbors,thedoor,theoldman,thelittleboy,quota,dogfigurines,collections,lonelysoul,reallivedog,Tip5:Choosethekeywordscoveringthemostimportantinformation,suchasthemaincharacter(s)andthemainobj

10、ect(s).,RequirementsforWriting,Tip1:_youcanshowhispersonalitiesorfeelingsvividly.,Tip2:_youcanpicturehispersonalitiesorfeelingsvividly.,TipsforWriting,Bydescribingwhatacharacterdoesindetailinsteadoftellingthereadersdirectly,Bydescribingwhatacharactersays,AssessmentCriteriaforWriting,Content:cohesive

11、(wellconnected),rich,Language:accurate,rich,coherent,morethan5underlinedkeywords,reasonable,logical,Continuingthestory,Para.1Thelittleboyheadedbackdowntotheoldmanshouse.,explainedwhyhecameagain,gavethedogfigurine,askedwhytheboycameagain,feltsurprisedandmoved,acceptedthedogfigurine,Para.2Fromthatdayo

12、nsomethingchangedinsidetheoldman.,cameout,communicated,becamefriends,feltnolongerlonely,oftenvisited,Assessingstudentswork,Tip1:Bydescribingwhatacharacterdoesindetailinsteadoftellingthereadersdirectly,youcanshowhispersonalitiesorfeelingsvividly.,Tip2:Bydescribingwhatacharactersays,youcanpicturehispe

13、rsonalitiesorfeelingsvividly.,Content:cohesive(wellconnected),rich,reasonable,logical,Language:accurate,rich,coherent,morethan5underlinedkeywords,Para.1:Theboyheadedbackdowntotheoldmanshouse.Heknockedonthedooragainandthistimetheoldmancamerighttothedoor.“Boy,IthoughtItoldyounomagazines!”Theoldmanstar

14、edathimangrily.“Iknowthat,sir.Ijustwantedtobringyouagift.”Thelittleboyhandedhimthedogfigurine.Lookingattheboy,theoldmanwastoosurprisedtosayanythingandsimplysmiledintears,asnoonehadevershownhimsomuchkindness.,Appreciatingapossibleversion,Para.2:Fromthatdayonsomethingchangedinsidetheoldman.Hestartedco

15、mingoutofthehouseandtalkingtohisneighbors.Soon,heandtheboybecamefriends.Theboyvisitedtheoldmanfrequentlyandbroughthisreallivedogtohishouseonceinawhile.HeeveninvitedtheoldmantojoinhisfamilyforChristmasdinner.Withtheboyscompany,theoldmanwasnolongeralonelysoul.,Appreciatingapossibleversion,Para.1:Thebo

16、yheadedbackdowntotheoldmanshouse.Heknockedonthedooragainandthistimetheoldmancamerighttothedoor.“Boy,IthoughtItoldyounomagazines!”Theoldmanstaredathimangrily.“Iknowthat,sir.Ijustwantedtobringyouagift.”Thelittleboyhandedhimthedogfigurine.Lookingattheboy,theoldmanwastoosurprisedtosayanythingandsimplysm

17、iledintears,asnoonehadevershownhimsomuchkindness.,Appreciatingapossibleversion,Para.2:Fromthatdayonsomethingchangedinsidetheoldman.Hestartedcomingoutofthehouseandtalkingtohisneighbors.Soon,heandtheboybecamefriends.Theboyvisitedtheoldmanfrequentlyandbroughthisreallivedogtohishouseonceinawhile.Heeveni

18、nvitedtheoldmantojoinhisfamilyforChristmasdinner.Withtheboyscompany,theoldmanwasnolongeralonelysoul.,Appreciatingapossibleversion,Para.1:Theboyheadedbackdowntotheoldmanshouse.Heknockedonthedooragainandthistimetheoldmancamerighttothedoor.“Boy,IthoughtItoldyounomagazines!”Theoldmanstaredathimangrily.“

19、Iknowthat,sir.Ijustwantedtobringyouagift.”Thelittleboyhandedhimthedogfigurine.Lookingattheboy,theoldmanwastoosurprisedtosayanythingandsimplysmiledintears,asnoonehadevershownhimsomuchkindness.,Appreciatingapossibleversion,Para.2:Fromthatdayonsomethingchangedinsidetheoldman.Hestartedcomingoutofthehous

20、eandtalkingtohisneighbors.Soon,heandtheboybecamefriends.Theboyvisitedtheoldmanfrequentlyandbroughthisreallivedogtohishouseonceinawhile.HeeveninvitedtheoldmantojoinhisfamilyforChristmasdinner.Withtheboyscompany,theoldmanwasnolongeralonelysoul.,Appreciatingapossibleversion,Para.1:Theboyheadedbackdownt

21、otheoldmanshouse.Heknockedonthedooragainandthistimetheoldmancamerighttothedoor.“Boy,IthoughtItoldyounomagazines!”Theoldmanstaredathimangrily.“Iknowthat,sir.Ijustwantedtobringyouagift.”Thelittleboyhandedhimthedogfigurine.Lookingattheboy,theoldmanwastoosurprisedtosayanythingandsimplysmiledintears,asnoonehadevershownhimsomuchkindness.,Appreciatingapossibleversion,staredat,handed,Lookingat,tooto,Para.2:Fromthatdayonsomethingchangedinsidetheoldman.Hestartedcomingoutofthehouseandtalkingtohisneighbors.Soon,heandtheboybecamefriends.Theboyvisit