高一英语基础写作―学会用复合句和非谓语动词

1、基础写作训练,_ 学会运用 复合句和非谓语动词,2008年广东高考英语作文基础写作,你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。 写作内容请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍： 背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。 1896：第一次成为奥运项目 1904：中断 1928：中断 1932：重回奥运会 1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛 现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。 写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容 评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。, Shooting, origin

2、ated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. However, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete

3、 in the Olympic shooting. With the sport becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.,广东08高考基础写作范文：,句子表达有何亮点？,写作中复合句常见的错误,1.只有从句，没有主句,The keeper who had lived in the light tower for a long time, so he could keep calm in the

4、storm.,2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子, The old man thought of his son, tears came down from his face., The hall is different from all other buildings , it is made of glass.,3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然,There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.,Over fifty stude

5、nts in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.,4.过多地使用并列句组合信息, We were driving out into the country, and we saw our English teacher riding in a bus, and the bus was crowded., It is a beautiful day, and the sun is shining and a breeze is blowing., It is a beautiful day with

6、 the sun shining and a breeze blowing., As we were driving out into the country, we saw our English teacher riding in a crowded bus.,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词, Kate is a new student. She comes from a northern province. She speaks a dialect. We find it hard to understand her dialect.,Kate, a new student from a n

7、orthern province, speaks a dialect which we find hard to understand.,用一句话表达,不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词,第一步：拆分成几个简单句,不是人人都能学好英语。 小学生同时学汉语和英语。 这会影响汉语学习。,第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句, Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school learn English and Chinese at the same tim

8、e., This will affect their Chinese study., Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time., This will affect their Chinese study.,第三步：合并句子,That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same tim

9、e will affect their Chinese study,because not everyone is good at learning English., Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time., This will affect their Chinese study.,第三步：合并句子,If children from primary school start to l

10、earn English and Chinese at the same time, this will affect their Chinese study,方法2：,because not everyone is good at learning English.,学会使用复合句和非谓语动词,你来试试,参考词汇： 错别字: wrongly-written characters 网络语言：web language,要求：1. 用两句话表达表格内容 2. 两句话要有连贯性,第一句（两个信息点）： 1. 学生作文中出现很多错别字 2.（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。, There are m

11、any wrongly-written characters in students compositions.,The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line.,合并句子：, They often use web languages when chatting on line.,1. They have so much homework to do every d

12、ay that they fail to memorize the new characters,第二句: 1. 每天有很多作业做 2. 没有记住生字。, They have much homework to do every day.,2. With so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.,3. Because they have so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.,合并句子：, They fail to

13、memorize the new characters.,连接两句话： The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line. Moreover, they have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters.,以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道,基本信息：

14、 书名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother 作者：Amy Chua，美籍华人，耶鲁*大学教授 出版时间：2010年 内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事 效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论 相关报道： 中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售 意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法 最新消息：17岁的大女儿已被哈佛*和耶鲁录取 *耶鲁：Yale 哈佛：Harvard 写作内容 根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍，内容包括： 1.图书的基本信息 2.图书的相关报道 写作要求 只能用5个句子表达全部内容,A newly-published book, Battle Hymn

15、of the Tiger Mother, written by an Chinese American, Amy Chau in 2010, has been sold in China from the beginning of 2011. Ms. Amy, who is professor in Yale University, deals with the stories of her educating her two daughters in the Traditional Chinese ways. Her elder daughter has been admitted by b

16、oth the Yale and Harvard universities. This book caused heated discussion on the differences between the Chinese and American ways in educating Children successfully. The majority of Chinese mothers disapprove of Ms. Amys idea.,范文,A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother by Amy Chua was publi

17、shed in 2010. It tells how the author, a Chinese American and professor at Yale University, educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way. Its publication has started a debate as to which way of parenting is superior, the traditional Chinese way or the American way. It is reported that t

18、he Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011. Unexpectedly,the majority of mothers in China disagree with the author though her 17-year-old elder daughter was lately reported to have got offers from both Harvard and Yale.,A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother was publis

19、hed in 2010. Its author is Amy Chau, a Chinese American and professor at Yale, who tells stories in her book about how she educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way. Ever since its publication, a heated discussion has been around about whether the Chinese way of educating is better t

20、han the American way. The Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011, but surprisingly most Chinese mothers do not agree to Amy Chaus way of parenting. A recent report says that Amys elder daugther, 17, has been accepted by both Harvard and Yale.,一个乞丐在路边讨钱(ask for money)。李先生匆忙赶路上班，没有注意到那个乞丐。 乞丐很生气，伸出(stick out)拐杖，差点把李先生绊倒了(trip over)。 李先生意识到他是个残疾人，便在口袋里找钱给他。 李先生拿出了一张百元钞票(a 100-yuan note)。 突然一阵风把钞票吹到了空中。 乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票。 李先生站在那里，惊得合不拢嘴。,实战演练：以下是你根据图画内容和题目要求，经过观察、整理排列成的五个信息块，请分别用一个句子表达出来，并组成一篇连贯性的短文。,A beggar,Exchange and discuss your partners composit