作文讲评1：ways of learning English in everyday life(普通班)

1、书面表达 Ways of Learning English in Everyday Life,浙江开化华埠中学 王东福,英语是当今世界上主要的通用语言之一，也是世界上使用最广泛的的语言。对于中学生而言，学好英语具有重要的现实意义。学完本单元之后，请你结合自己的实际，以“Ways of Learning English in Everyday Life”为题，写一篇100-120词的英语短文。,时态？,人称？,审题,谋篇布局,Para. 1,Para. 2,Para. 3,English is widely used around the world and is very important

2、in our everyday life.,My tips on learning English in our everyday life.,If you take my advice, Im sure you will improve your English soon.,过渡句,1. Here are some advice to help you.(徐振),2. Here are some advice for you.(叶红菲),3. There are many ways for us to learn English.(谭凯妮),4. There are some ways of

3、 learning English in everyday life.(颜浩),5. Here are some suggestions for you.(傅伶彦),过渡词,1. first, second, third / firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally,2. firstly, secondly, then, finally, whats more, last but not least，in a word, in my opinion(叶红菲),3. Above all, whats more, on the one hand, on the oth

4、er hand, last but not least(方铮),4. First of all, besides, whats more, above all, last but not least(经典词语),好词,1. As everyone knows / as is known to us all / as we know(蒋淑丽,张梅芳,余嘉),2. In brief(谭凯妮),3.Therefore（方慧妍）,4. In a word(赖晨菲，董文强),5. Believe it or not(张嘉琪，徐涛),6.Day by day, not only but also(周雅俊，

5、方智勤),7. Make big progress, set down, a series of, have a good command of(张梅芳),8. play an important in（周雅俊，郑鑫，方智勤）,9.for example, for instance（周雅俊，徐雅琪）,10. At present(郑鑫，余嘉，),11. Than ever before(柴丽君，),12. No such thing as(徐涛),好句,1. Here are some ways for the students who cant learn English well.(方铮)

6、,2. Why not speak English every morning?(叶红菲),3. How about taking part in English clubs?,4. Today, English have been a common language that have been widely spoken.(徐雅琪),7. Nowadays, most students think it difficult to learn English.(方铮),8. We should read more English books and magazines, if possibl

7、e（方铮）,6. Believe it or not, theres no such thing as luck in the world; success lies in hard work.（徐雅琪）,5. If you insist on speaking English every day, you will grow so crazy about everything to do with English learning, so that your English can become better.（徐雅琪）,9. The more you pay, the more you g

8、et.(方智勤),10. A good command of a foreign language is vey important.(方慧妍，王鸿宇),11. It is known to us all that English is the most widely used language in the world.(谭凯妮),As is know to us all, English is ,What is known to us all is that,好文章1,Today, English have been a common language that have been wid

9、ely spoken. Learn English well is helpful for us.,learning,If you insist on speaking English to every day, you will grow so crazy about everything to do with English learning, so that your English can become better. Learning English has many ways. For instance, you can communicate with each other in

10、 English, read more English newspapers and magazines. And when you have trouble in English, you can ask for help with teacher. Believe yourself, you can learn English well.,ask your teacher for help,Believe it or not, theres no such thing as luck in the world; success lies in hard work.,徐雅琪,好文章2,Now

11、adays, most students think it difficult to learn English. But I dont think so. In my opinion, they dont find correct ways to learn English, so they think it difficult to learn English. Here are some ways for the students who cant learn English well.,Above all, we should speak English loudly in the m

12、orning every day, because its good for our memory. Whats more, we shouldnt translate every word when we read English magazines. On the one hand, we should try our best to understand new words. On the other hand, we should read more English books and magazines, if possible. Last but not least, we sho

13、uld make a plan to learn English.,First of all,I hope these ways can help us learn English well.,方铮,my advice,you,病句修改,1. Its a good idea to read English newspaper, because its have lots of latest news.(徐振),2. I believe if you do it for a long time, and than you will be success.(周雅俊),3. We can throu

14、gh many ways to learn English.(蒋淑丽),it has,then,We can learn English in many ways.,successful,7. English is one of the most important languages and plays a important part in the world.(方智勤),6. You should recite words and reading books every morning.(徐涛),5. Dont afraid making mistakes.(郑鑫),4. We shou

15、ldnt afraid speak English.(徐涛),8. I have some advice for how to learn English well.(郑艳璐),be,to,be,of,read,an,on,9. Because of my learn English attitude change, my English has improved a lot(余嘉).,10. Many places we can use English.(柴丽君),11. English is most important language in the world.(余亚星),12.You

16、 can to read many English books.(吕孟睿),13. We learn English is good for us.(吴哲雯),changed,We can use English in many places.,the,It is good for us to learn English.,14.Why dont we to read some book about English?(余婷),15.Why not to try to the ways?(黄妃),16. I hope my English can better and better.(陈玥),1

17、7. If can do this ways, I believe you can learn English well.(郑益强),be,If you can do in this way,范文欣赏1,Today English, the most widely used language all over the world, is playing an increasingly important part in our life. Whatever we do and wherever we go, we can pick up English in some way.,When we

18、 enjoy some delicious food, take in the English words along with the food. On our way to school, remember the English on traffic signs like “No parking”. While listening to music, we hear English songs. Turn on TV and English TV programs are also helpful to our English learning. When meeting native

19、English speakers, dont be shy; go ahead and communicate with them.,Please look around carefully, listen to and speak English actively outside class and we will certainly improve our English.,范文欣赏2,As is known to us all, English is the most widely used language in the world. It is playing an increasingly important part in our daily life. Therefore, it is of great importance to learn English well. But how can we have a good command of it