英语开放作文.ppt

1、高考英语书面表达写作指导,Tasks:,1. To deal with difficulty in writing about cartoons 2. To learn the basic structure of cartoon writing 3. To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writing,议论类,Group work （1）:,1. share your essay with your group members 2. raise the difficulties you had when writing it,读图,1.漫画

2、的画面 细节 2.漫画的文字 观点 3. 漫画的夸张 寓意,读图,画面 文字 夸张,读图,The underwear ( shorts for men and panties for ladies) is a funny way to look at how desperate parents get - trying to prevent children from seeing things they should not - and maybe underwear isnt a good thing to see either but a lot better than some of

3、the materials on the Internet!,夸张,解意,1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度,夸奖褒扬 or 批评讽喻？,解意,. 联系生活，明晰主旨,Imagination!,解意,注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切记要认真阅读！,夸张,寓意,The students as well as their parents only focus on their academic achievements, neglecting psychological quality and moral standards.,Dont be too confident in rea

4、l life. Be honest and modest. Dont judge a book by its cover.,谋篇,3 parts: 1) describe the picture 2) interpret its meaning 3) give your opinions about the phenomenon,Part 1 Describe the picture,We can see in the picture The picture is talking about/shows As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be

5、 seen in the picture In the picture, there are/is (are) doing Let look at the picture above first.,1. In the picture we can see a bottle of less water whose label is written full.,2. From the picture we can see that there is a bottle. It has two hands and tries to put an label written “full”on its b

6、ody. A smile is on the neck of the bottle. Inside the bottle is there a little water.,Lets practise!,Describe the picture,The picture is talking about a story about neighborhood. Two ladies living in the opposite apartments say “hello” when they happen to meet each other in the corridor. One of them

7、 says, “I moved here 5 years ago, but I never met you before. Could I ask your name please?” The other says,” I have been here for 6 years. How should I call you?”,Lets practise!,Describe the picture,We can see in the picture that a child is burdened with heavy schoolbags as well as huge mental pres

8、sure. When he was a kid, he was expected to be able to go to a key elementary school, and later a key high school. And now he is expected to be admitted to a key university.,Part 2 Interpret the picture,It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere. The picture sho

9、ws thatIt is the exact reflection of The picture indicate that weNowadays, it is a common phenomenon that This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among,Part 3 Give your opinions,I think/believe that As far as Im concerned, In my opinion, From my point of

10、 view,should It is better/advisable to I consider it necessary,Only in this way can.,2/3,must have to Do/Dont,Group work （2）:,Join your group and rewrite the essay together, using the expressions youve learned.,Polish up your article!,1. To use linking words if necessary 2. To use complicated struct

11、ures if possible,1. To use linking words,表示平行、对等或选择关系 and, as well as, together with, not onlybut also. 表示转折关系 but, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, while 表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one handon the other hand. 表示因果关系 so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, th

12、anks to.,表示时间、顺序关系 first, second , then, next, finally, for one thing . for another, in the end, 表示递进、强调关系 besides, whats more, in addition, worse still, above all 表示解释、说明关系 such as, for example, for instance(例如), in other words, and so on 表示结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole

13、, in conclusion,1. To use linking words,(五三),2. To use complicated structures,People suggest that the conference be put off.,It is suggested that the conference be put off.,She walked out of the room and many students followed her.,Followed by many students, she walked out of the room,To his surpris

14、e, the little girl knew so many things.,What surprised him was that the little girl knew so many things.,被动语态,非谓语动词,从句,The couple was so curious about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest.,倒装,So curious was the couple about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest.,Regu

15、lar radio broadcasts began in 1920.,强调句,It was not until in 1920 that regular radio broadcasts began.,Many lives were saved because there were the efforts of firefighters.,虚拟语气,But for the efforts of firefighters, many lives would not have been saved.,My version: For most of the parents, its no easy

16、 job to keep their children away from the PC monitor. Lets look at the picture above. Two people are standing in front of a computer, whose monitor is wearing underwear. The woman is staring at the computer, thinking while the man is telling him that there are three ways to make the Internet safer f

17、or her children-hardware, software and underwear.,It may be ridiculous to cover the PC monitor with someones underwear, but it describes vividly parents distress and feelings of helplessness when they are faced with the problem. Concerned about their childrens security, some of them just cut off the

18、 access to the Internet at home -“the hardware solution”; some choose to use a certain software program to prevent their kids from getting on line “the software solution”; others may make some rules to limit the time their children spend on the Internet -“the underwear solution”!,From my point of vi

19、ew, this phenomenon calls for the attention of the whole society. On one hand, the government should make laws to censor the Internet and block inappropriate sites, making it a safer place for all teenagers. On the other hand, it is better for parents to give their children a proper guide instead of

20、 just prevention. Teenagers need to be taught how to tell and resist bad information consciously. Only in this way can the Internet be made safer for the children.,再叮嘱几句：,1. 保证三要素体裁、时态、人称正确,体裁：议论文 时态：一般现在时 人称：第三人称,你不是父母！,人称混乱！,再叮嘱几句：,1. 保证三要素体裁、时态、人称正确,体裁：议论文 时态：一般现在时 人称：第三人称,. 避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误,1)误解图意

21、 大忌！,2) 企图幽默 可笑！,3)不明寓意 白写！,4)中心不明 混乱！,再叮嘱几句：,1. 保证三要素体裁、人称、时态正确,体裁：议论文 人称：第三人称 时态：一般现在时,. 避免漫画类作文的一些常见错误,. 控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆）,. 搞一精辟的结尾！,Too short!,Too long!,Enjoy this excellent ending!,In my view, this phenomenon is no good to us, nor to our society. Its time that we took some measures to improve it.

22、 People living in the same zone can be organized to have some activities together. We should call on people to be friendly to each other. As a popular song says, “ If everybody gives a little love to each other, the world will become the sea of love.”,Enjoy this excellent ending!,From my point of vi

23、ew, reducing the childrens heavy burden requires efforts from the schools, the society as well as the parents. Education that breaks the rules of childrens development in body and mind is bound to fail. Thus, parents together with teachers should become active supporters of all-around character educ

24、ation and work closely with each other in guiding the students towards a balanced development.,一篇好的英语漫画作文,仔细审题 准确立义 规范行文 整洁书写,Not good!,Worse!,Neat!,一篇好的英语漫画作文,仔细审题 准确立义 规范行文 整洁书写,In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you this picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how

25、 you understand it.,Description: As is vividly shown in the picture, 2. As can be seen in the picture 3. In the picture, there are/is (are) doing,Transition sentences: The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of 2. It seems very ridiculous that However, this kind of story is performed everyw

26、here.,Opinion/suggestion/solution: As far as Im concerned,/ From my point of view, It is better/advisable to I consider it necessary,In the picture a boy with a heavy bag is typing quickly on a computer which hangs over his chest.Though it seems convenient since he can use the computer wherever he w

27、ants, there is no doubt that he cant get rid of the attraction of the computer. The funny picture is the exact reflection of the kids in modern society, that is the addiction to the electronic products. Some kids rely on them so much that they can hardly keep their hands off them. Benefits as the ad

28、vanced products have brought, being addicted to them does no good to the kids. Actually a waste of time in playing them will have a bad effect on kids health and study, worse still lead to committing crimes.,Possible version: (negative),As far as Im concerned, it is acceptable to spend proper time i

29、n playing the electronic products. However, overdoing is to spoil the future. Instead, the kids should join in some other meaningful activities to enrich their life.,In the picture we can see clearly a boy playing happily with a computer, which hangs over his chest. I guess he is walking on the way

30、home after school, with a schoolbag on his back. It is obvious that he is enjoying something interesting like watching a TV program through the powerful Internet. As is known to all, with the rapid development of science and technology, advanced electric products like computers are becoming smaller

31、and lighter. Thus it is more convenient for the students to carry wherever they go. You may take it for granted that the boy is too addicted to computer games. But I adopt a positive attitude. For one reason, young people including students are always the first to try new products.,Possible version:

32、 (positive),Another reason is that the students burden is so heavy that they have little time to relax themselves. Personally, in their spare time, as long as they use computers properly without interfering with learning, they can have fun with computers, like the boy in the picture.,评分标准： 文章是否扣题-描述

33、与主题一致，自圆其说 结构是否完整-三部分 内容是否健康-乐观向上 逻辑是否清晰-议论要有逻辑性 语言是否准确-用词恰当，无语法错误 交际是否得体-情境，身份等,Thank you!,In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students. They might do better when they show interest in what they are learning. Please dont force these students to do what they are n

34、ot willing to, and when learning is fun, surely they will do better than we expect!,Enjoy this excellent ending!,Lets try it!,下图描绘的是中国当前教育中存在的问题。请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述一下造成这种现象的原因并发表你的看法。,Lets practise!,The picture shows some problems in the present education system in China. In the poor countrysi

35、de, there are no buildings for classrooms, let alone good teachers. They are sometimes forced to leave their studies because their families cannot afford the necessary fees. However, the situation is totally different in the cities. Almost all the children in the cities can have regular education. B

36、ut they have their own problems. What they face is the endless homework, which puts so much pressure on them that some students dont want to continue their studies.,How to describe a person,ABC on character descriptions,achievements,family & education background,career,The structure,details,brief in

37、troduction,big events in his/her life,evaluation,Para 1,Para 2,Para 3,your opinion,欧.亨利（1862-1910）出生于美国卡罗莱 纳州（North Carolina）,他是美国最著 名的短篇小说家之一。请结合下列要点所 提供的信息写一篇词数120左右的文章， 简单介绍。 1. 他所受教育不多，15岁就步入社会，20岁在德克萨 斯州(Texas)做过不同的工作； 2. 30多岁时，他因金融交易坐牢，在狱中开始写作； 3. 出狱后，他定居纽约继续写作； 4. 一生写了300多篇小说，其中一些被译成多国文字，深受世界

38、读者喜爱。 参考词汇：金融交易 financial dealing,Paragraph 1,.,O. Henry was one of the best-known American short-story writer. He was born in North Carolina in 1862 and died in 1910.,writers,O. Henry (1862 1910), one of the best-known American short-story writers, was born in North Carolina.,Born in North Carolina

39、, O. Henry (1862 1910), was one of the best-known American short-story writers.,He didnt receive much education, he left the school at 15 years old fifteen. At the age of 20, he went to Texas and he tried different jobs there. When he was thirties he was put into prison because of some financial dea

40、lings. In prison, he started to write short stories. After he got out of prison, he went to New York and continued writing.,He didnt receive much education, and he Left the school at 15. At the age of 20, he went to Texas and tried different jobs there. In his thirties, he was put into prison becaus

41、e of some financial dealings. In prison, he started to write short stories. After getting out of prison, he went to New York and continued writing.,Para 2,He didnt receive much education, because he left the school at the age of fifteen. When he was about 20 years old, he went to Texas, where he tri

42、ed different jobs. Unfortunately, in his thirties he was put into prison because of some financial dealings. While in prison, he started to write short stories. After getting out of prison, he went to New York and continued writing.,He didnt receive much education, because he left the school at the

43、age of 15. When he was about 20 years old, he went to Texas, where he tried different jobs. Unfortunately, in his thirties he was put into prison because of some financial dealings. While in prison, he started to write short stories. After getting out of prison, he went to New York and continued wri

44、ting.,He wrote more than 300 short stories during his lifetime. Some of his writings have translated into many languages. O. Henry and his works are deeply loved by readers throughout the world.,have been translated,Para 3,conclusion,Language: No Chinglish No Grammatical mistakes With exactly used w

45、ords and relatively changed sentence patterns,Mei Langfang,请根据所给信息，用英语写一篇介绍京剧艺术大师梅兰芳的文章。 梅兰芳（1894.10.221961.8.7）是我国最杰出的京剧表演艺术家、 梅派代表。他出生于北京一个梨园世家，8岁开始学京剧，11岁首 次登台演出，把毕生精力献给了京剧艺术事业。在半个多世纪的舞 台实践中，他创作了众多优美而令人难忘的艺术形象，形成了独特 的表演风格。同时，他在促进我国与国际间文化交流方面作出了卓 越的贡献，是我国向海外传播京剧艺术的先驱。 注意： 1. 词数：不少于120。开头已给出，不计入总词数

46、； 2. 不要逐条翻译；可适当增加内容及个人评论，使文章连贯。 参考词汇：梅派Mei school Mei Lanfang was the most famous Peking Opera artist, master of the Mei school in China.,Writing task,She was born in Poland on Nov. 7 , 1867 .,1)她于1867年11月7日出生于波兰。 2)亚伯拉汗林肯，一个贫苦家庭的儿子, 于1809年2月12日 出生于肯他基州(Kentucky)。 3) 出生在一个贫困的小职员家庭中，狄更斯（Charles Dicke

47、ns）接受了很少学校教育。,Abraham Lincoln , the son of a poor family , was born in Kentucky on Feb. 12th, 1809 .,Born in a poor clerks family, Charles Dickens had little schooling .,Mei Lanfang was the most famous Peking Opera artist, master of the Mei school in China. Born in the family of famous Peking Opera actors in Beijing on October 22