英语人教版八年级下册英语写作

1、英语写作 -写人篇 Lets go for it!,蠡县蠡吾镇三中 白桂香,写人篇: 写一篇描述人的外貌 (look)、性格（characters）、爱好 （hobbies）的文章,1. What does he / she look like?,thin,heavy/ fat,What does he look like?,short hair,long hair,What does he look like?,Word collection:,描述外貌的单词： short , tall, thin ，be of medium height ，strong, good-looking, ni

2、ce, slim 苗条 描述穿着的短语： wear a T-shirt, wear a pair of glasses 描述性格的单词： lazy, quiet, friendly, shy, kind-hearted 善良的, polite 有礼貌的，strict 严厉的, out-going 外向的 描述爱好的短语： like reading, like to help others, like eating, like playing soccer 描述爱好的句型： I like doing My hobby is doing ,Task1: 根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述你的笔友

3、马小跳，80个左右的单词, 开头已经给出。,开头： Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He,例文: Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He is a 15-year-old boy. He is tall and thin. He has black hair and he likes wearing shorts and T-shirts. He looks very cute. He likes hamburgers and fried chicken best. His favorite classes are science, art and P

4、.E. He likes little animals. He often plays with his good friends at school and helps others. He is very polite and kind-hearted. He is a good boy. I like him very much.,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,方法一:善用词汇 尤其高级词汇,Which is better?,最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。,A His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised. B To

5、 his surprise, his dog was saved at last.,A I think learning English is interesting. B I find it really fun to learn English .,我认为学英语很有趣。,我们应该保护环境。,A We should protect the environment. B Its our duty to protect the environment.,方法二:活用多种句型,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。,A She is very young. Sh

6、e cant carry the heavy box. B She is too young to carry the heavy box. C She is so young that she cant carry the D She is not old enough to carry the,方法三:妙用关联词,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,1.表示并列或递进: and, bothand, whats more not onlybut also, neithernor 2.表示选择: or, eitheror 3.表示转折: but,however,althoughtho

7、ugh,after all 4.表示因果: because, so, as a result 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, notbut, on the one handon the other hand 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, to tell the truth 8.表示顺序: first, second, next, then, finally, to begin with, first (of all), later, since from then on, in the end

8、9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, in fact 10.表示结论: all in all, in a word, in short,关联词(connection words),Lets try,_ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got

9、 out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.,ThoughAlthough,instead,like,First,Next,FinallyAt last,方法四：巧加谚语(Proverb/saying) 可用于”开头“和”结尾“，多用后者。,锻炼对学生有好处,It is good for us students to take exercise,As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise.,集

10、中注意力于学习,We should concentrate on our studies.,As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies.,加谚语(Proverb/saying),加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法,Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.,As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a g

11、ood way to learn English.,加谚语(Proverb/saying) 可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。,加谚语(Proverb/saying),Enjoy some sayings谚语分享,1.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧 2.Think twice before you do.三思而后行。 3.Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。 4.Do as the Romans do.入乡随俗。 5.The early bird catches the worm.早起的鸟儿有虫吃。 6.Failure

12、 is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。,方法五:妙用例子（多用于“the body”）,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。,We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.,For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water

13、and energy.,加例子,加例子,在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。,I often help my parents do housework,such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.,为文章润色： Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He is a 15-year-old boy. He is tall and thin. He has black hair and he likes wearing shorts and T-shirts. He looks very cute. He likes hamburgers and fried chicken best. His favorite classes are science, art and P.E. He likes little anima