作文：高三英语新高考复习：读后续写如何写记叙文 (共20张)

1、.,How to complete a narrative article (记叙文),.,英语科考试说明,读后续写： 提供一篇350词以内的语言材料，原文多是情节丰富的记叙文，偶有少量的议论文，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。,.,After class, you will be able to,Read for the main idea/plot Write the end according to the given information Polish your writing,.

2、,Reading,Whats the style of the passage? A. Narration 记叙文 B. Exposition 说明文 C. Argumentation 议论文,.,Who? When? Where? What? Why? How?,Reading,Style - Narration 记叙文,.,Basic forms of the 6 questions,Who is the main character? When did the story happen? Where did the story happen? What happened in the s

3、tory? Why was the matter caused? How was the matter solved/ended?,.,Who? When? Where? What? Why? How?,Arthur,one day; when he was on the way to work,Park Avenue, near the First National Bank,A bank robbery; Arthur helped a young man.but .was mistaken for the bank thief.,the suitcase in his hand,.,Ma

4、in Idea,One day, at Park Avenue, Arthur helped a young man carry a _when he was on the way to work. Suddenly, he heard the sound of an alarm and found that a _ which was happening in the bank. When a young woman looked at his suitcase, he thought he might be _for the bank thief. ,suitcase,mistaken,r

5、obbery,.,第二节：读后续写（满分25分） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 注意： 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 How to choose the underlined key words in your writing? How to make full use of the given sentences and the plot? How to make the story coherent and logica

6、l?,若词数少于130，从总分中扣去2分。,.,The underlined key words: Park Avenue The young man suitcase in the back seat loud noise of an alarm the bank robbery the shouts people the bank thief,Tip1: The key words that respectively stand for the most important information, the main character and the main object should

7、 be chosen in your writing.,.,Given-New Strategy Paragraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ” Paragraph 2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur.,Tip2: Focus on the given sentence of paragraph2 first. And some information in it must

8、be mentioned in paragraph 1.,Tip3. Use the key nouns in the given sentences to infer more information.,.,Paragraph 2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur. Arthur took a taxi and went to the police station. In Paragraph1, Arthur might have said something to the taxi driver. For

9、 example, “Sir, please take me to the police station quickly. I have something important to report to the policeman.” What will Arthur do in the police station? In Paragraph2, there may be a conversation between Arthur and the policeman. Who else may go to the police station? (a surprising end),Tip4

10、. Write proper conversations between the related characters in each paragraph.,.,Key Words: Park Avenue The young man suitcase in the back seat loud noise of an alarm the bank robbery the shouts people the bank thief Paragraph1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, s

11、top! ” Two characters：Arthur and the young man Arthur might realize that the young man was the bank thief. Arthur took a taxi and went to the police station. The young man wanted to get his suitcase back. There may be some money or something else in the suitcase. The young man may (not) be the bank

12、thief. Paragraph2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur.,Para 1,Para 2,Para 1&2,Tip5. Use the characters and their actions to infer more information.,Main Idea,.,Have a try!,Paragraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”_ Arthur might

13、realize that the young man was the bank thief. Arthur took a taxi and went to the police station. Arthur might have said something to the taxi driver. For example, “Sir, please take me to the police station quickly. I have something important to report to the policeman.”,coherent, correct, logical,

14、reasonable, rich in vocabulary and sentence pattern Underline the key words,.,Polish your writing Paragraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ” Arthur realized that the young man was the bank thief. He continued running, stopped a taxi and got into it. He

15、 said to the taxi driver, “Please go to the Police Station as soon as possible. I have a robbery to report to the policeman.” Then the taxi went away. Which kind is more suitable? -therefore, however, in addition/besides, whats more/furthermore, on the contrary, on the other hand. -unfortunately, su

16、ddenly(all of a sudden), to his joy, worried about., with the help of.,add some details,Use different structures,coherence, content, language, key words,Use transitional words (衔接词),.,Paragraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ” Arthur realized that the

17、young man was the bank thief. He continued running, stopped a taxi and got into it. He said to the taxi driver, “Please go to the Police Station as soon as possible. I have a robbery to report to the policeman.” Then the taxi went away.,add some details,Use different structures,Use transitional word

18、s,“Give my suitcase back to me!” Hearing this, Arthur immediately realized that the young man was the bank thief.,So he continued running until he stopped a taxi. Then he quickly got into it and sat in the back seat .,Out of breath/breathlessly, Arthur said to the taxi driver, “.”,The moment the tax

19、i driver got the request, he drove straight to the police station without hesitation.,like an arrow/straight to the police station.,.,Paragraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ” “Give my suitcase back to me!” Hearing this, Arthur immediately realized th

20、at the young man was the bank thief. So he continued running until he stopped a taxi. Then he quickly got into it and sat in the back seat. Out of breath, Arthur said to the taxi driver, “Please go to the Police Station as soon as possible. I have a robbery to report to the policeman.” The moment th

21、e taxi driver got the request, he drove straight to the police station without hesitation.,add some details,Use different structures,Proper transition,.,Have a try!,Paragraph 2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur_ _ In Paragraph2, there may be a conversation between Arthur and the policeman. The young man wanted to get his suitcase back. There may be some money or something else in the suitcase. The young man may (not) be the bank thief.,coherent, cor