高一英语叙事类写作.ppt

1、,One evening I went out with my friend Neil for a quiet meal in a country pub. We left at 9:30 and I offered to take Neil home. We were driving along when, suddenly, a car drove past us out of control. The car crashed and after that it burst into flames.,Setting the Scene,What should be written when

2、 setting the scene for a story?,time,Main character,place,First we ran to the burning car. When we got there, we saw three people trapped inside. They were screaming and we knew we had to get them out. It was incredibly hot as we opened the doors. The driver was sitting inside, unconscious. We got h

3、im out and then went back for the other two people. I had to climb over the front seats to get to them. Surprisingly, they were able to walk away from the car. Meanwhile, some people who were watching from a nearby campsite, called the emergency services.,Development of narrative,drawing a timeline

4、Shifting space,In the end, I was standing there in a state of shock when a policeman asked me for my name and address. I couldnt remember! I dont think we did anything extraordinary but the police presented us with certificates for our bravery. Its a nice feeling to know youve helped to save someone

5、s life.,Conclusion,describe the result,The feelings,Layout of writing a story,Setting the scene,Development of narrative,Conclusion,Writing Task Pick up your pen, follow the steps and write a story about your hero.,（2011 北京）假设你是红星中学高二（1）班李华。下面四幅图表述了近期发生在你们班的一个真实故事。请根据图片的先后顺序，写一篇短文，词数不少于60.,Word bank

6、,People: emergency services, fire fighter, nurse, police officer General: ambulance, bravery, certificates, crash, fire, flames, smoke, state of shock Adj: afraid, brave, desperate, frightened, injured, trapped, unconscious Verbs: to burn, to blow up, to climb, to commend, to crash, to drown, to exp

7、lode, to reach, to rescue, to save, to scream, to shout,Sentence pool,Setting/ development 1. Last week/month/, I/we took part in a contest. 2. One evening, I was walking home when . 3. As soon as he arrived at home, he . 4. After arriving in/ When we arrived at/ Once we arrived at/ The moment we re

8、ached, we began to 5. Suddenly, I realized that there was someone following me. 6. Meanwhile, one of the neighbors called 7. In the end, a fireman came up to me and ,Endings and Feelings,1. Although/though we were exhausted, we felt that what we did is meaningful. 2. As the result, the injured was sent to the hospital and the robb