基础写作训练(教学课件).ppt

1、基础写作训练课 (注重过程，评改作文）,Presented by :Dennis Ho March 29,2007,Task 1: Go through the two passages and have a discussion, then talk about the problems about them.,情景内容： 假如你是个中学生， 你发现大街上随地吐痰的情况很严重。请你就此事用英文给某报社编辑写一封信，信的开头及结尾署名已给出。信的内容要点如下： 1. 随地吐痰传播疾病，有害健康，污染环境； 2. 政府应该采取措施，对在公共场所随地吐痰者处以从重罚款并加强教育； 3. 希望人人都

2、关心爱护环境，使城市更加美丽。 写作要求：请根据以上文字提示，用5个句子来表达所有的信息，注意连贯性。,Task 2:,Dear editor, I am a middle school student. I often see some people spitting in the street. _ _. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,审题抓纲弄清必须要写的要点的能力,速读写作材料，准确归纳出文体及大意能力,注意能力一,注意培养基础写作的细微能力,本文可以抓住以下几个要点：,Topic: problems,Suggestion sentences :,1、随地吐痰的情况很

3、严重,2、随地吐痰有害,3、政府应该采取措施。,4、对随地吐痰重罚款并教育。,5、希望人人关爱环境,假如你是个中学生， 你发现大街上随地吐痰的情况很严重。(请你就此事用英文给某报社编辑写一封信，信的开头及结尾署名已给出。信的内容要点如下： ) 1. 随地吐痰传播疾病，有害健康，污染环境； 2. 政府应该采取措施，对在公共场所随地吐痰者处以从重罚款并加强教育； 3. 希望人人都关心爱护环境，使城市更加美丽。,况很严重,随地吐痰,有害,政府应该采取措施,随地吐痰者,重罚,并,教育,希望人人,关心爱,环境,对,随地吐痰的情,_,_,_,_,_,.比较准确的遣词造句能力,.运用恰当功能词、连接词去整合

4、语篇的能力,.运用熟悉的词汇、句型 “转个弯” 地去表达 某一含义的能力,注意能力二,(1)你发现大街上随地吐痰的情况很严重。 (2) 随地吐痰传播疾病，有害健康，污染环境； (3) 政府应该采取措施， (4)对在公共场所随地吐痰者处以从重罚款并加强教育； (5) 希望人人都关心爱护环境，使城市更加美丽。,care about（take care of protect ）;,become beautiful ；,spread diseases；,pollute our environment；,do harm to；,take some measures to；,protect the env

5、ironment；,spit in the street,_,be fined,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,in a public place,.运用一些较有把握的复杂结构的能力,.正确使用大小写、标点符号的能力,.保证字体工整、书写速度较快的能力,注意能力三,.运用人称、时态、内容三要素的能力,(1)你发现大街上随地吐痰的情况很严重。 (2) 随地吐痰传播疾病，有害健康，污染环境； (3) 政府应该采取措施， (4)对在公共场所随地吐痰者处以从重罚款并加强教育； (5) 希望人人都关心爱护环境，使城市更加美丽。,care about（take care of protect ）;,bec

6、ome beautiful ；,spread diseases；,pollute our environment；,do harm to；,take some measures to；,protect the environment；,spit in the street,_,be fined,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,in a public place,Task 3:,Try to finish your passage in 5 minutes and exchange your work with your partner and correct it.,Dear editor,

7、I am a middle school student. I often see some people spitting in the street. I think its a bad habit to spit on the ground. As we all know, spitting carries and spreads diseases, pollutes our environment and does harm to our health. Our government should take some measures to protect the environmen

8、t. If someone spits in a public place, he or she will be fined heavily and educated. For my part, our city will become more beautiful if all the people care about the environment. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,Dear editor, I am a middle school student. I often see some people spitting in

9、 the street. I think its a bad habit to spit on the ground. As we all know, spitting carries and spreads diseases, pollutes our environment and does harm to our health. Our government should take some measures to protect the environment. If someone spits in a public place, he or she will be fined heavily and educated. For my part, our city will become more beautiful if all the people care about the environment. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,.审题抓纲弄清必须要写的要点的能力,.比较准确的遣词造句能力,.运用恰当功能词、连接词去整合语篇的能力,.快读材料，准确归纳出文章大意能力,.运用熟悉