全国卷高考英语写作之求职信写作指导(作文评讲)

1、Writing: A Letter of Job Application,2016届全市调研作文,假如你是李华，从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构Mid Senior ESCH 面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员，负责学院课间服务事项，请根据以下内容用英语写一份求职信，要点包括： 你的英语水平； 你的工作经验； 你做好这份工作的信心,Type of writing: A letter of job application Purpose of writing: to apply for a job to c_ the employer to hire you Language : polite co

2、nvincing/persuasive, logical Tense: The simple present tense (introduction), The present perfect tense/The simple past tense (experience),convince,II Structure of the letter 求职信结构,Para.1：the opening paragraph: purpose of the letter How do you know about the recruitment? Which position are you applyi

3、ng for? Para.2: the body: detailed introduction about yourself (Your name) a high school graduate your English proficiency(水平) your working experience Para.3: the closing paragraph conclusion, hope, thanks your confidence (conclusion) your hope to be interviewed Thank you for your time and considera

4、tion.,III The content,Purpose of the letter: to convince the employer to hire you So you should write something that highlights your advantages avoids your shortcomings is relevant/related to the position !,My English is not so good, but I will try my best.,Secondly, I have worked in other companies

5、 before, where I have gotten enough working experience.,Supporting ideas in Para.2,Your English proficiency: 英语很好 have a good command of English 口头、笔头英语流利 be fluent in both spoken and written English 令人满意的阅读技能 satisfactory reading skills 在高考中取得好成绩 got good grades in the college entrance examination

6、在演讲比赛中屡获佳绩 received a good many awards in speech contests,中老年英语培训机构; 暑期兼职辅导员; 负责学院课间服务事项 Your experience 社区志愿者，定期为老人提供服务 和老人相处得好，沟通容易 a community volunteer; offer services to the old regularly; get along well develop my patience and sense of responsibility,Supporting ideas in Para.2,Example 1 (Score

7、: 20),Example 2 (Score: 22.5),How to get a satisfactory score?,a right structure (3-4 paragraphs, purposeintroductionhopethanks) relevant content (highlight the advantages) correct & advanced vocabulary good linkings proper length (80-120) beautiful handwriting,Rewriting,我从报纸得贵机构正在招聘 暑期兼职辅导员，我对此非常感兴

8、趣。 （or：我写信来是想申请您在报纸上广告的暑期兼职辅导员的职位。） 作为一名高中毕业生，我熟练掌握英语。我不仅口头和笔头英语都很流利，而且我的阅读技能也是令人满意的。此外，我在服务老人方面有丰富的经验。在我的社区做志愿者已经三年了，我经常因我的周到服务、耐心和强烈的责任感受到赞赏。 因此，我很有信心我能胜任这份工作。如果您能给我面试的机会，我将非常感激。 感谢您的时间和考虑。,我从报纸得贵机构正在招聘 暑期兼职辅导员，我对此非常感兴趣。 （or：我写信来是想申请您在报纸上广告的暑期兼职辅导员的职位。） I have learned from the newspaper that you a

9、re recruiting part-time instructors/assistants during the summer vacation, which appeals to me greatly. Im writing to apply for the position of part-time instructor/ assistant, which you advertised in the newspaper.,作为一名高中毕业生，我熟练掌握 英语。我不仅口头和笔头英语都很流利， 而且我的阅读技能也是令人满意的。此外，我在服务老人方面有丰富的经验。在我的社区做志愿者已经三年了，

10、我经常因我的周到服务、耐心、强责任感受到赞赏。 As a high school graduate, I have a good command of English. Not only am I fluent in both written and spoken English, but also my reading skills are satisfactory. In addition, I have rich experience in serving the elderly. Having been a volunteer in our community for three ye

11、ars, Im frequently praised for my good service, great patience and a strong sense of responsibility.,因此，我很有信心我能胜任 这份工作。如果您能给我面试的机会，我将非常感激。 感谢您的时间和考虑。 Therefore, Im confident that Im qualified for the job/ Im competent at the job/ Im equal to the job. I would appreciate it if I could get a chance to

12、be interviewed. / It would be appreciated if you could give me a chance of an interview. Thank you for your time and consideration.,Dear Sir/Madam, I have learned from the newspaper that you are recruiting part-time assistants during the summer vacation, which appeals to me greatly. As a high school

13、 graduate, I have a good command of English. Not only am I fluent in both written and spoken English, but also my reading skills are satisfactory. In addition, I have rich experience in serving the elderly. Having been a volunteer in our community for three years, Im frequently praised for my good service, great patience and a strong sense of responsibility. Therefore, Im confident that Im qualified for the job. I would appreciate it if I could get a chance