英语写作课件.ppt

1、writing,1.Chinglish,Question: What difficulties have you found in Writing?,Correct the following sentences,1.I very like studying English. 2 Write English composition is very difficult for most of us. 3.There have 5 people sit in the classroom. 4.Because he was ill, so he was absent from school.,ver

2、y much,Writing,sitting,are,5.,1.I want to see you.,look forward to seeing,3.It is a hard job.,tough/challenging,2.She cant correctly pronounce words.,2.Advanced vocabulary（高级词汇）,has trouble in pronouncing,4.The plan was a failure .,turns out to be,3.Various sentence structures,The girl is spoken hig

3、hly of. Her composition was well written. (一般),_,-,The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of. (高级),She walked out of the room and many students followed her. (一般),Followed by many students, she walked out of the room. (高级),4.Fluency（流畅）,Linking words,因果： 转折: 列举: 递进: 目的: 总结:,be

4、cause, so, as a result ,therefore, owing to,however, on the contrary, otherwise,first(ly), second(ly), such as,whats more, besides, in addition, ,so that, in order to, so as to,in a word, on the whole, in general, in short, in brief, as far as I know,高分作文的标准（分）： 完全完成了规定任务； 覆盖所有内容要点； 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇; 语

5、法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使用较复杂或较高级词汇所致，具备了较强的语言运用能力； 有效的使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑； 完全达到了预期的写作目的,writing,图表类 图表类基础写作是以图表的形式呈现内容要点的,要点明确,范围具体。写作时要结合写作内容中的提示确定需要表达的内容要点,有时还要留意前面的文字说明部分。此类作文多以说明文和议论文为主,根据所给的图表、数据及标题进行分析、研究,弄清信息点之间的关系,提炼出中心思想,然后进行分析、概括和归纳写作时要注意： (1)图表和数据内容不必全部描述；善于抓住总的规律、趋势,归纳增减率；过去特定的时间用过去时,经常出现的情况或自己

6、的评述用一般现在时；(2)切忌写成“填表题”,“一对一直译”,“句式单一”,遗漏“间接要点”,应巧妙组合信息。,右图的饼状图(pie chart)显示了你对你校学生兴趣爱好的调查结果。请你用英语给English Weekly写一篇短文,报道你的调查结果,并对此结果发表你的看法或建议。词数120左右。,A recent survey shows 图表的内容. As is shown in the pie chart,表中的内容1,这一现象说明的问题表中的内容2.表中内容3 and表中内容4.In my point of view,自己的观点如何解决问题,A recent survey shows

7、 what the students of our school like to do in their spare time. As is shown in the pie chart, 53% of the students like sports, so doing sports is the most popular activity in our school. Surfing the Internet is the second popular activity among the students and about 36% of the students have intere

8、st in it. Only 8% of the students take reading as a hobby and even fewer,about 3%, are fond of playing musical instruments. In my point of view, our school should have more sports facilities built to satisfy the need of the students. Guidance should be given to students on surfing the Internet and w

9、ays must be found to arouse students interests in reading and music.,议论文模板,1.正反观点式议论文模板 导入: 第1段：Recently weve had a discussion about whether we should. （导入话题）Our opinions are divided on this topic.（观点有分歧） 正文: 第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方观点）Here are the reasons. First. Second. Fin

10、ally.(列出23个赞成的理由) 第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. （反方观点）Their reasons are as follows. In the first place. Whats more. In addition.(列出23个反对的理由) 结论：Personally seaking,你校同学进行了一场有关高考英语听力测试的讨论。讨论的主题是：高考英语测试中的听力部分该不该取消?请你根据表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。,The students of our school had a discussion ab

11、out whether listening test in the National Matriculation English Test should be kept or canceled.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,The students of our school had a discussion about whether listening test in the National Matriculation English Test should be kept or canceled. Some students think that listening test should

12、 not be canceled. They insist listening is among the four basic skills. We therefore can not ignore it. Besides, listening is one of the important channels for us to get information from the outside world. So it should be strengthened today when international cooperation is becoming more and more frequent. But others don t agree. They think not everyone has to communicate with foreigners in the future. Moreover, listening test is unfair to the stu