ISSUE第一自然段写法.ppt

1、首段的写法,1.背景开头立场,Overwhelmingly/Increasingly influenced by soaring/booming/ballooning/ proceeding of the globalization /industrialization /civilization /science and technology /pragmatism and utilitarianism, the author asserts /some people /parents /scholars assert thatCritics of this idea argue thatH

2、owever, as for me, I would contend that regardless of /despite of /it is true that /no matter how /no matter what/,1.背景开头立场举例,1) With the advent of the information era, human beings are gradually submerged into the information ocean that a large amount of information is unceasingly pouring into our

3、minds at an unprecedented speed.,1.背景开头立场举例,2) In this era of rapid social and technological change leading to increasing life complexity and psychological displacement, both positive and negative effects among persons in Western society call for a balance in which there are both specialists and gen

4、eralists.,2.矛盾+阐述自己的观点,Determining whether something should or should not be done could be weighed in many aspects. Different people have different answers due to their respective point of view. On balance, my view is that_(should be done?) The issue of whether _ should be done is a complex one, sin

5、ce it involves a conflict between _. In my point of view, the final judgment should depend on a case-by-case analysis of the two situations.,2.矛盾+阐述自己的观点,There is much controversy over the issue ofOne of the universal issues that draw growing concern is Some people claim that，while others argue that

6、 In the last analysis，I believe that. There is much debate over the issue thatOn the one hand, some people believe that; On the other hand, others maintain thatIn my point of view, whether one has advantages over the other depends on the specific conditions. In the following discussion, I would like

7、 to present evidence favoring the former one and refuting the latter one to support my point of view.,3.提问回答+立场,就是把论题换成问句，然后给出自己的立场，可以肯定也可否定，例如： Is the surest indicator of a great nation not the achievements of its elites, say the political leaders, artists, or scientists, etc. but the general welfa

8、re of its people, as the speaker asserts? As far as I am concerned, the two facets are not mutually exclusive; what the achievements of the elites means is just the welfare of the people.,4.例子+立场,不提倡，会写得很啰嗦,5.立场（直接陈述观点）+理由,直接同意（不同意）作者的观点 I fundamentally/strongly agree/disagree with the speaker on th

9、e assertion/allegation/claim that 举例：I can agree with the statement above that, The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things. The statement is an accurate description of how many people form great ideas from ordinary things in life. Sports are all great ideas that are made f

10、rom commonplace things. What makes sports some of the best ideas is not what they began as but what they evolved into.,6.格言+立场,As one of the famous philosophers ever writes, “the dream leads our sights toward the future, and the practice make our sense recognize how far away we still have to strive

11、for.,7.新颖的开头,Even the most brilliant thinkers, from Socrates to Satre, live lives in time. A childhood, an adolescence, an adulthood; these are common to me and you as well as the greatest writers. Furthermore, many of the great thinkers we esteem in our Western culture lived somewhat uneventful liv

12、es. What distinguished their life from say a common laborer was their work. Therefore, what provided the grist for their work? One might say that they were brilliant and this alone was sufficient to distinguish their lives from the masses.,7.新颖的开头,Intellect alone can not devise situations or thought

13、s from no where; there must be a basis and that basis is most common, if not always, observation of the common, of the quotidian. Critics of this idea may argue that these thinkers were products of fine educations and were well schooled in the classics. This, they may point to, is the real basis for their knowledge. I would argue that although it may be a benefit to study classics and be well schooled in diverse disciplines, these pursuits merely refin