英语六级写作.ppt

1、六级写作,听力249分， 阅读249分， 完型填空或改错70分， 作文142分。,写作,写作的突破点,审题角度,Why people attend college?,Limiting The Use of Disposable Plastic Bags,1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用 2.造成的问题 3.限制使用的意义,造成的问题,限制使用的意义,How to improve students mental health,1、 大学生的心理健康十分重要 2、 因此，学校可以. 3、 我们自己应当.,因此，学校可以.,The Benefits of Volunteering,写作常用角度,生活角

2、度 we always consider recreational activities as something to relax ourselves or something that can add color to the dull routine of every day life.,Sth will make our life more enjoyable and pleasant, that is to say, sth can add color to the dull routine of every day life.,生活的乐趣,For the majority of p

3、eople, reading or learning a new skill has become the source of their happiness and contentment 对大多数人来讲，阅读或学习一项新技术已成为他们快乐的来源,时间角度,Collecting, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom.,It provides relaxation for leisure hours, as just looking at on

4、es treasures is always a joy.,Furthermore, students living in their own home would have access to a comfortable life and have more opportunities to communicate with their parents, which have beneficial impact on development of their personal character. 而且，学生生活在自己家中，有舒适的生活，并有更多机会和父母交流，这对他们个性的培养是有利的。,

5、知识角度,Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched and our horizons will be greatly broadened.,For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn. 对于那些想过上健康而有

6、意义的生活的人们来说，找时间学习一些新知识是很重要的，正如那句老话：活到老，学到老,The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets. 大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。,Skill角度

7、,Many parents believe that additional educational activities enjoy obvious advantage. By extra studies, they maintain, their children are able to obtain many kinds of practical skills and useful knowledge, which will put them in a beneficial position in the future job markets when they grow up. 许多家长

8、相信额外的教育活动有许多优点，通过学习，他们的孩子可以获得很多实践技能和有用的知识，当他们长大后，这些对他们就业是大有好处的。,经验角度,By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks. 通过做一份和专业相关的工作，学生不仅能够提高他们的专业能力，而且能获得从课本上得不到的经验。,Now pe

9、ople in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities. 现在越来越多的人开始相信学习新的技术和知识能直接帮助他们获得工作就会或提升的机会。,Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that some certain sports cont

10、ribute directly to our body health by giving us some physical exercises.,健康角度,合作角度,Extracurricular activities can give students team-spirit and teach them how to cooperate with others. Because in those activities, students usually need to cooperate with others in order to get good achievement.,主题句的写

11、法,Many people believe that international tourism produce positive effects on economic growth and local government should be encouraged to promote international tourism. 许多人认为国际旅游对经济发展有积极作用，应鼓励地方政府发展国际旅游。,主题句一,Sth is very important. Sth is of great importance. Sth plays an important role in peoples l

12、ife/study,主题句二,Sth can produce positive effects on in more than one way. Sth may bring about some negative impacts on ,Whats more, living in school can save them a great deal of time on the way between home and school everyday, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their acade

13、mic work. 而且，生活在学校里能节省大量每天往返于学校和家的路上的时间，这会使他们有更多的时间和精力放在学习上。,时间角度之好 intensifying their fear of becoming victims; making them less sensitive to violence and to victims of violence; encouraging their appetite for more violence in entertainment and in real life.,Moreover, children will have less time t

14、o play and communicate with their peers due to extra studies, consequently, it is difficult to develop their interpersonal skills and cultivate their character. They may become more solitary and even suffer from certain mental illness. 而且，由于要额外地学习，孩子们没有多少时间和同龄的孩子玩耍和交流，很难培养他们的个性和交际能力。他们可能变得孤僻甚至产生某些心理

15、疾病。,坏处之-个性，技能，孤僻，心理,万能理由之重要性,Punctuality is a necessary habit in all public affairs in civilized society. Without it, nothing could ever be brought to a conclusion; everything would be in a state of chaos. (抽象),Keeping mental health is an important condition in all public affairs in civilized societ

16、y, especially to university students. Without it nothing could be brought to a conclusion, everything would be in a state of chaos.,And recently the issue of disorder in brains has been aroused wide concern on campus.,具体,It is widely acknowledged that computer and other machines have become an indis

17、pensable part of our society, which make our life and work more comfortable and less laborious. 人们普遍认为计算机和其他机器已经成为我们社会必不可少的一部分。 它们使我们的生活更舒适，减少了大量劳动。,At the same time, young people should be encouraged to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills, which may help them greatly

18、 to reduce dependence on their parents and are essential in the maintenance of healthy mental condition. 同时，应该鼓励年轻人和他们的同龄人交往，发展他们的交际能力，这将帮助他们极大地减少对父母的倚赖并且保持健康的精神状态。,付出代价,Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price. 任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。,得知,When reports came into London Zoo that

19、 a wild puma had been spotted forty-five miles south of London, they were not taken seriously.,机会,As she is not rich, the chances that she will ever be able to afford such purchases are remote.,采取措施,Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be

20、 made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism. 应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量，努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。,In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse. 考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必须采取有效的措施。,万能理由之喜欢,Cats never fa

21、il to fascinate human beings.,The quiet life of the country has never appealed to me.,They always go into raptures at the mere mention of the country.,The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework. 最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。,An investigation shows that fe

22、male workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement. 一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。,万能理由之影响,Antique shops exert a great fascination on a great many people.,万能理由之表示事实、现状,1）We cannot ignore the fact that. 2）No one can deny the fact that. 3）There is no denying the fact that.（坏）,Say no to pirated products,T

23、here is no denying the fact that piracy is a grave problem with which this country is confronted. Taking a look around, we can find examples too numerous to list. In many places we see people peddling pirated books or disks.,例如：We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the prob

24、lems of pollution. To solve these problems，we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution. The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment.,There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city auth

25、orities should take strong measures to deal with it. 无可否认，空气污染是一个极其严重的问题：城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。,万能理由之表示比较,Compared with A，B.,例如：Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable.,万能理由之表示结论,从上述讨论中，我们可以自然地得出这样的结论_ From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at th

26、e conclusion that _.,单一内容，论述好坏,From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society. 通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论：自行车的优点远大于缺点，并且在现代社会它仍将发挥重要作用。,单一内容，趋利避害,Computers do play a positiv

27、e role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should，therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.（有替换表达）,What we must do is to encourage the strength and diminish the weaknesses to the least extent. 我们必须尽可能发挥其优势，趋吉避凶。,单一内容，无伤无害,In a wo

28、rd, digital products, like everything else, have both favorable and unfavorable aspects. Whatever effects they have, one thing is certain: digital products in themselves are neither good nor bad. It is the uses to which it is put that determine their value to the society.,单一内容，发表观点,From what has bee

29、n discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that part-time job can produce a far-reaching impact on students and they should be encouraged to take part-time job, which will benefit students and their family, even the society as a whole. 通过上面的讨论，我们不难得出结论：业余工作对学生们会产生深远的影响，我们应鼓励学生从事业余工作，这将有利于学生和

30、他们的家庭，甚至整个社会。,二、万能短语,欣赏大自然的风景 to appreciate the scenery of nature,欣赏古典文学 to appreciate the classical literature,开拓视野 to broaden the horizon,开拓心胸 to broaden the mind,扩大知识面 expand ones scope of knowledge,启迪心灵 to enlighten the mind,陶冶品德 to cultivate the character,培养公德心 to cultivate the public mindednes

31、s,cultivate a strong sense of responsibility 培养了强烈的责任感,undertake the due obligations 承担责任,grasp good communication skills 掌握良好的交流技能,promote social skills and competence 提高了社会能力和竞争力,竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation,维护健康 to maintain health,松散身心 to relax oneself,调剂生活 to make life pleasant,提

32、升生活质量 to promote the qualities of life,提升生活的水平 to raise the standard of living （比较少）,增加生活的情趣 to increase the pleasures of life,解除紧张和焦虑 to relieve the tension and anxiety both from the society and the schoolwork,lighten the burden of 减轻了的负担,financial burden psychological burden 经济/心理负担,较好地驾驭生活 be a b

33、etter pilot of ones life,关心社会 to be concerned about the society,贡献国家 to contribute oneself to the country,adapt oneself to the development of 使自己适应的发展,面临困难 to be confronted with the difficulty,克服困难 to overcome the difficulty,注意卫生 to emphasize the importance of hygiene,重视： attach much importance/sign

34、ificance to,对有益 to be beneficial to,对有害 to be harmful to,采取步骤 to take steps to take measures,有很深的了解 to have a deep understanding of,有广泛的知识 to have a wide range of knowledge,give a big push to the development of education 给予教育极大的推动,扮演重要角色 to play an important role in,强烈愿望 express a strong desire to,A

35、ccording to a recent survey, a growing number of people express a strong desire to take another job or spend more time on their job in order to get more money to support their family. 根据最近的一项调查，越来越多的人表达了想从事另外的工作或加班以赚取更多的钱来补贴家用的强烈愿望。,不遗余力 to spare no efforts to,不辞辛劳 to take the pains to,经不起推敲 cannot

36、bear closer analysis cannot hold water,社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress,提高大众的环保意识 promote the public awareness of environmental protection; arouse peoples awareness of environmental protection,考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/ consideration,从另一个角度 from another perspective,在人类生活的方方面面 in all as

37、pects of human life,社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress,社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress,科技的飞速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology,日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition,有其自身的优缺点 has its merits and demerits advantages and disadvantages,把时间和精力放在上 focus time and e

38、nergy on,许多问题： a host of problems,接触社会： come into frequent contact with the society,作文的展开按照三步走：,1)题目涉及的现象进行简单的描述，在描述的述可以自己控制过程中将写作引向文章的主题(这样的描，如果第一段落字数单薄，可以适当使描述具体化)。 2)在第一步的基础上给出观点，观点视文章主旨可以分为：个人观点(包括方法、途径)，和多方观点(观点从正反两方面或者一个方面的多个层次阐述;在交待观点是需要有原因和支持)。 3)个人观点总结点题(同意或不同意)，简要指出方法途径，如果找不到具体的解决方法，则将话讲得圆

39、滑(如果正文中间观点没有必然冲突，则可以融合)。,对立观点型,背景句,展现问题,问题的常用词：question, problem, issue 1.Recently, the issue of . has been brought into public focus. 近来，_的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。,Recently the issue of (whether or not) has been in the limelight（成为引人注目的中心） and has aroused wide concern in the public. 近来，是否_的问题已经非常明确而且引起了社会的广泛关

40、注。,Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is . 随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是_。,Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in peoples attitude towards some traditional pra

41、ctice. 现在我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代，很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很大改变。,_已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。 _ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.,改写题目,“花开两朵”句型,Most of us ，however，have formed an unrealistic picture of life on a desert island.,Most of us

42、，however，have formed a different picture ofsome people think they are beneficial, while others hold the opposite view.,第三句,And we rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue. 对于这种极具争议的话题，我们很难作出绝对的回答。,People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the sa

43、me case. 不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。,harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that,Some people take the attitude that can produce positive effects on us in more than one way. Those who have already benefited from practicing it sing high praise of it. First of all Furthermore Whats more ,

44、过渡句,The other side of the picture is quite the opposite.,Others harbor the idea that, may bring about negative impacts on us. Those who strongly disapprove of . have cogent reasons for it.have their own reason for it. For one thing , For another,第四段,第四段,Perhaps there is an element of truth in both t

45、hese pictures.,处理方式一,From my own perspective, I am inclined to be on the side of the former view. 在我看来，我较同意前一种观点。,After a thorough consideration, for my part, I am in favor of the former view. 经过深思熟虑，我较支持前一种看法，,“呐喊”句型,One of the things that fascinates us most about cats is the popular belief that th

46、ey have nine lives.,处理方式二,From my own perspective, computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should，therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. What we must do is to encourage the strength and diminish t

47、he weaknesses to the least extent.,训练正反对立型.doc,问题解决型,注意： 该题目不是针对问题的争议性，针对问题产生的原因和解决办法 背景句相似，二三句不同,What are the causes and solutions of the problem of the scarcity of water resource?,背景句： Recently the issue of (whether or not ) has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.,改写题

48、目：关注原因： A number of factors could account for the problem, but the following are the most critical ones. 或者 交待讨论内容： There are some factors leading to this problem. A number of factors are responsible for this problem. Some of the most common factors will be discussed below, followed by some responsi

49、ble/reasonable solutions.,First of all. Furthermore Whats more.,法律，意识,In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.,For one thing, it is essential that laws (rules) and regulations be worked out and enforced to ban/reduce,For another, the pub

50、lic should enhance their awareness of the importance of . With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that the problem caused by will be solved in the near future.,训练问题解决型.doc,环境类,what are the cause of water scarcity? Present your own solutions to it.,In present-day society, the hu

51、man race is advancing at a staggering rate in a host of arena. Along with all the boons brought about by high-tech wonders there have come some sufferings; and the lack of fresh water is manifest among them. Over two thirds of the nations worldwide are afflicted with severe water shortage. Hence, it

52、 is crucial that we ascertain the cause of water scarcity and identify the effective remedies of this phenomenon. As I see it, the cause of the current water crisis are manifold.,First and foremost, the population explosion is the root cause of the crisis. Over the past half century, the world popul

53、ation explosion has more than doubled and this growth rate is showing no sign of slowing down; therefore, household and industrial consumption has been shooting up.,Secondly, the deterioration of the Earths ecosystem also contributes to this disturbing situation. The rampant practice of deforestatio

54、n has engendered massive soil erosion and multitude of chemical works, sewage disposal and textile factories discharge their toxic waste into streams, rivers or lakes.,Thirdly, the overexploitation water resource also plays a pivotal role in water scarcity. Awareness of the significance of water con

55、servation is weak or non-existent on household, community and national levels.,Given the severity of the water crisis, we have no alternative but to take vigorous measures to address the situation. To begin with, controlling the drastic increase of world population is of paramount importance. It is

56、imperative that other populous nations learned from Chinas success in curbing its population surge over the past two decades and introduce more effective birth control methods.,Further, the concept of sustainable development ought to be spread in the international community. Any form of over tapping

57、 natural resources must be strictly prohibited.,Lastly, mankind must strive to find alternative source of fresh water. For instance, both glacial melt water and desalinated salt water hold huge potential as vast sources of water.,To summarize, causes of the shortage of fresh water are multiple. Birt

58、h-control measures, promotion of sustainable development and research about alternative water resources are all effective ways to alleviate this modern-day scourge.,给定观点型,一种看法或者观点,一,Nowadays, with 现象，people are becoming increasingly aware of the significance of 主题词. In my point of view, 改写题目.,There

59、are numerous reasons to support my point of view, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here. One of the primary causes is that 支持论点的理由,Another reason that can be seen by every person is that 支持论点的理由， 阐述理由 Taking into account of all these factors, we may draw the conclusion that 重述标题. Therefore, 提出意见或建议,The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood,Nowadays, with the surging cases of mental problem, committing suicide