高考英语专项指导.短文改错ppt.ppt

1、短文改错,Proof-reading,To stand by a tree stump waiting for a rabbit,There was once a farmer worked very hard 1._ every day. One day when he was hoeing(锄草) in the2._ sunshine, he suddenly listened a low sound 3._ “Peng!”. He turned and hurried to the tree. He found a rabbit dying. He took held of the 4.

2、_ rabbit and was exciting. “What a rabbit! Ill 5._ have it to dinner!” Then he had a good idea, 6._ “Why cant I wait for more rabbits here? Its cool under the tree.” So he dropped off his hoe and wait there. But day after day, there 7._ had no more rabbits coming. What was worse, 8 _ all the his cro

3、ps were dead.The story tells 9._ us that you want to get something, you must 10._ work hard for it. Remember, “No pains, no gains!”,who,heard,hold,excited,for,waited,were,the,if,Correct one students composition,How to make progress in proof-reading,近五年浙江省高考短文改错测试内容一览表,主要包括两类错误：动词的时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致的错误

4、。例如：,NMET2000： Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library. NMET2003：She liked it very much and reads it to the class. Of course, when my mother was asked, “Have you” _,are,_,一、动词形,read,指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。常表现为将名词复数写成单数。例如：,NMET2001： so that Ill get good marks in all my subject. NMET2003: Their wo

5、rd were a great encouragement to me. _,subjects,words,二、名词数,常考的错误形式有：连词but， and， or和so的用法错误，以及冠词的用法错误等。例如：,NMET2000： She was smiling but nodding at me NMET2001： It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. NMET2001： We may be one family and live under a same roof. ,and,or,the,三、冠词连词常

6、光顾,短文改错对冠词的考查主要涉及冠词的误加和漏用，有时也考查不定冠词与定冠词以及零冠词的用法区别(包括 a 与 an 的区别)。其中，涉及最多的是，当一个单数可数名词表示泛指时，其前漏用不定冠词；另外，冠词在一些习语中的用法也是一个重要考点,After a hour or so we began to feel very frightened. (2)I decided to climb the tree to see where we were. (3)Some people read the books or watch television while others have spor

7、ts. (4) Good health is persons most valuable possession.,an,a,a,注意形容词和副词以及比较级和最高级的用法在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。例如：,NMET 2004 : I would describe myself as shy and quietly. _ NMET 2005 : He asked angry if we had finished the work. _,quiet,angrily,四、还要注意形和副,NMET2001： My parents love me and will do all

8、 they can make sure NMET 2002: We fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. _ NMET 2003: Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English. _,这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在分词、过去分词，动名词和不定式错误。例如：,to,visited,talking,五、非谓语，细领悟,主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、

9、少词和搭配错误。例如：,NMET2000: Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher. _ NMET2003: My teacher advised me to keep diary. _,a,a,六、习惯用法要记住,不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。例如：,NMET 2004 : I dont know that they dont like to talk with me. _ NMET 1997：I live in Beijing，where is t

10、he capital of China. _,why,which,七、句子成分多分析,NMET 1995 : The Greens did his best to make me feel at home._ NMET 1998 : He drove too fast, and the police stopped her ._,their,八、逻辑错误须关注,与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误。如称谓上的张冠李戴，人名、地名、时间、方位等方面的错误，是这类错误的考查对象。,him,动词形，,名词数,还要注意形和副,非谓语，细领悟,习惯用法要记住,Summary,冠词连词常光顾

11、,逻辑错误须关注,At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitting room. Jim was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment. The

12、re was a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his parents singing and dancing happily.,1.,2.,3.,4.,5.,6.,7.,8.,9.,10.,At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his 1._ father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose 2._ a big one. It was almost as taller

13、 as the room! 3._ They put them in the corner of the sitting 4._,_,On,_,chose,_,tall,_,it,动词形,介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住,还要注意形和副,逻辑关系须关注,room. Kate was covered it with a lot of 5._ Christmas light. The sitting room looked 6. _ really beautifully at the moment. There was 7. _ a fire burning in the fire place, b

14、ut the Christmas 8. _ tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his 9. _ parents singing and dancing happily. 10._,_,lights,_,beautiful,_,and,were,动词形,还要注意形和副,动词形,名词数,冠词连词常光顾,改错类型统计表,“1126”原则 “1225”原则 “1117”原则,0,1-2,1-2,8-6,1. Error word (错词)： （1）名词，动词，形容词和副词的形态错误。 （2）冠词，介词，代词，连词和动词等用法上 的错误。 （3）逻辑

15、关系方面的错误。 （4）句子结构的错误。,2. Unnecessary word (多词)： （1）抽象名词物质名词泛指前多加冠词。 （2）定语从句中多了与关系代词相当的代词或名词。 （3）形容词或副词的比较结构中多词。 （4 ）受母语影响及物动词后加了不该加的词。 （5）不带to的不定式 作宾补时带了to （6）某些时间状语丛句多了介词。 （7）固定搭配有画蛇添足的现象。,3. Missing word (缺词)： （1）动词不定式少了符号to （2）单数名词泛指时缺不定冠词a或an. （3）动词后少了介词或副词等小品词。 （4）习惯表达或固定短语中缺词。 （5）受母语影响将形容词或介词作动

16、词而使句子缺少谓语动词。,注意解题规范,严格按照示范规定的符号改错，在原文错误的地方增加、 删除或修改某个词。 “”、“”、“”、分别代表错词纠正、缺词填补、多词删除，切忌用文字说明或用箭头表示。,错误类型：多词，缺词，错词,Competition,Rules: Each group has the right to choose one number. The group who can correct all the mistakes within the shortest time will be the winner. As a team member, if you know the

17、 answer, just speak it out as aloud as possible.,Which one would you like to choose?,(1),(2),(3),(4),多词,1.Great changes have been taken place in our hometown.,2. My first one job was to clean the tables in a small restaurant.,3. He has made a great progress in his English study.,4. Now let me to int

18、roduce our school to you.,5.A great many of students like singing.,6.He married with a beautiful girl.,缺词,Our flight to Paris was delayed because the heavy frog.,2. The press conference is be held tomorrow.,3. Ill unable to control myself and forget all about my study.,4. His daughter plays piano ve

19、ry well.,of,to,be,the,You are lucky,5.I found strange that she had not come yet.,6. They eager to know everything about China.,are,it,I love camping. Its my favorite way to spent the summer vacation .Last year, my family and I went camping in the countryside. It was one of the most excited experienc

20、es I had never had. We slept in a tent and went on a long walk every day. We cook over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully. For a whole week, I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night I heard the gentle wind blowing in the tree, and I felt so peaceful. It doesnt cost many

21、 to camp, and what I believe its the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.,spend,exciting,ever,cooked,wonderful,and,trees,much,to,More difficult,1. They dont want me to do any work at family. 2. For the most part, students working to earn money for their own use. 3. He collected some in

22、formations about computers. 4. Earning their money allow them to spend I will never forget the day when we spent together. He as well as his sister are a League Member.,home,work,information,which,错词,allows,is,6 tips that you should pay attention to,标点符号不改. 大小写不改. 词序错误不改. 在纲外生词不改(带汉语注释的词). 每处错误及修改均仅

23、限一词. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分,Tips,Last winter vacation, some of my classmates decide to travel with their friends, while I chose to take part-time job to gain experience and earn some money. I learned from my teacher that a nearby company was looking after students with good handwriting to write addr

24、esses on envelope. The pay were 10 cents per envelope. I headed for the company, feeling sure I would easy finish 300 envelopes in five hours and to earn the money. Actually , I only finished 200. now, I fully understand how hard is to earn money. Getting out of the classroom is indeed necessary for we all.,08 浙江高考,decided,a,for,was,easily,it,us,envelpoes,Challenge yourself,Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.Wh