Run-On-Sentence.ppt

1、Run-On Sentence,What Is a Run-On Sentence?,The length of a sentence has nothing to do with whether or not a sentence is a run-on. A run-on sentence is one in which two independent clauses have been connected incorrectly. Some students think they can study for an important exam by “cramming” all nigh

2、t, they are probably wrong. This is an example of the dreaded comma splice!,Repairing Run-On Sentence,We can replace the comma with a period and start a new sentence. Some students think they can study for an important exam by “cramming” all night. They are probably wrong. We can insert a coordinati

3、ng conjunction after the comma. Some students think they can study for an important exam by “cramming” all night, but they are probably wrong.,Repairing Run-On Sentence,We can replace the comma with a semicolon. Some students think they can study for an important exam by “cramming” all night; howeve

4、r, they are probably wrong. We can subordinate one of the independent clauses. Although some students think they can study for an important exam by “cramming” all night, they are probably wrong.,Run-On Involving a Colon,After a list following a colon, the sentence must end. Both bombs produce the sa

5、me three effects: heat, blast, and radiation; however, the bombs do not produce the effects in the same proportions. Both bombs produce the same three effects: heat, blast, and radiation. However, the bombs do not produce the effects in the same proportions.,Try translating this passage,由有关有销钉混合段的图3

6、可知，物料粒子充满全流道沿着螺杆转动方向向前运动，混合情况明显优于无销钉混合段，在6.3s以前，物料粒子运动的速度与无销钉混合段中粒子运动速度几乎一致，从8.4s以后，有销钉混合段内物料粒子的运动速度明显小于无销钉混合段，21.0s粒子才到达混合段出口.,Direct translation leads to a run-on sentence,We know from Figure 3 that material particles fill the flow channel and move forward along the screw, the mixing efficiency in

7、 the mixing section with pins is clearly better than that with no pin, the material particle velocity in the mixing section with pins is almost the same as that with no pin before 6.3 s, the velocity with pins is lower than that with no pin after 8.4 s, it takes the material particles 21.0 s to reac

8、h the exit of the mixing section with pins.,Better translation withrun-on sentence repaired,We know from Figure 3 that material particles fill the flow channel and move forward along the screw. The mixing efficiency in the mixing section with pins is clearly better than that with no pin. The material particle velocity in the mixing section with pins is almost the same as that with no pin before 6.3 s, but the velocity with pins i