Book4-unit-1-Writing.ppt

1、Unit 3,writing,假如你是李华，最近你的外国朋友Tom来信说他对中国诺贝尔奖获得者屠呦呦很感兴趣。请你给他写封信介绍屠呦呦。内容包括： 1、屠呦呦，女，科学家。生于浙江宁波，1951年考入北京医科大学，毕业后致力于治疗疟疾的研究。 2、她非常地刻苦，谦虚。 因为发现了青蒿素在2015年获得了诺贝尔医学奖。 3、你对屠呦呦的评价。 要求：包括以上提示内容，可适当添加细节，字数不少于100字。 疟疾 malaria 青蒿素 artemisinin 诺贝尔医学奖 Nobel Prize in medicine,Born in., . is a great scientist. With

2、the excitement inside, Details are as follows. be admitted into. devote.to. as a result As far as Im concerned make a big difference I would appreciate it if.,Useful words and expressions:,第1段：问候+写作目的【引入4分】 【要点】假如你是李华，你写信给你的外国朋友Tom介绍屠呦呦。 第2段：【作文重点18分】 【要点】 1. 屠呦呦个人信息及事迹； 2. 你对她的评价。 第3段：【结尾3分】 【要点】希望

3、你的介绍对他有所帮助，期待早日回复。,篇章布局,第1段：问候+写作目的【引入4分】 【要点】假如你是李华，你写信给你的外国朋友Tom介绍屠呦呦。 【表达】 Dear Tom, Hows it going recently? Knowing that you are interested in Tu Youyou, Im very glad. With the excitement inside, Im writing to tell you something about her. Details are as follows.,组织,第2段：【作文重点18分】 【要点1】屠呦呦个人信息及事迹

4、; 【表达】 Born in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province, Tu Youyou is a great scientist. she was admitted into Beijing Medical College in 1951. After gradutation,she devoted all her efforts to the research in treating malaria. With hard work and determination, she discovered artemisinin, which is of great signific

5、ance for curing malaria. As a result, she became the first Chinese citizen to win a Nobel Prize in Medicine.,第2段：【作文重点18分】 【要点2】你对她的评价 【表达】 As far as Im concerned, Tu Youyou is hard-working and modest. It is these personal qualities that helped her make such a big difference. All our Chinese are pro

6、ud of her because her discovery is seen as a great contribution to the human health.,第3段：【结尾3分】 【要点】希望你的介绍对他有所帮助，期待早日回复。 【表达】 I would appreciate it if my introduction could help you get a better knowledge of Tu Youyou. Im looking forward to your early reply.,Dear Tom, Hows it going recently? Knowing

7、 that you are interested in Tu Youyou, Im very glad. With the excitement inside, Im writing to tell you something about her. Details are as follows. Born in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province, Tu Youyou is a great scientist. she was admitted into Beijing Medical College in 1951. After gradutation,she devoted

8、 all her efforts to the research in treating malaria. With hard work and determination, she discovered artemisinin, which is of great significance for curing malaria. As a result, she became the first Chinese citizen to win a Nobel Prize in Medicine. As far as Im concerned, Tu Youyou is hard-working

9、 and modest. It is these personal qualities that helped her make such a big difference. All our Chinese are proud of her because her discovery is seen as a great contribution to the human health. I would appreciate it if my introduction could help you get a better knowledge of Tu Youyou. Im looking

10、forward to your early reply.,Hows it going recently? Known that you are interested in Tu Youyou, Im very glad. With the excite inside, Im writing to tell you something about her. Details are as follows. Born in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province, Tu Youyou is a great scientist. she is admitted into Beijing M

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12、itizen win a Nobel Prize in Medicine. As far as Im concerned, Tu Youyou is hard-working and modest. It is these personal qualities which helped her make so a big difference. All our Chinese are proud of her because of her discovery is see as a great contribution to the human health. I would apprecia

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14、as follows. Born in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province, Tu Youyou is a great scientist. she _ (admit) into Beijing Medical College in 1951. After gradutation,she devoted all her efforts_the research in _(treat) malaria. With hard work and determination, she discovered artemisinin, _ is of great significance

15、for curing malaria.,Knowing,was admitted,to,treating,which,As a result, she became the first Chinese citizen_(win)a Nobel Prize in Medicine. As far as Im concerned, Tu Youyou is hard-working and modest. It is these personal qualities _ helped her make such a big difference. All our Chinese are proud of _(she) because