人教版英语八年级Unit-2写作课.ppt

1、Topic revision，unit 2 ill help clean up the city park单元专题评论写作课程，volunteers，cheer up sick children，clean up the city parks，workie、id like to help clean Pick up the rubbish、sweep the roads、I could help、then the world will be better and better。id like to help students in the sches Helping students with

2、 their school work，I love，I want to put this love to good use by，painting你会选择什么样的工作？为什么？怎么办？写一篇短文，80个单词左右。，第3段(7-9分)传达一些信息，表达不畅，语言错误很多，但文章基本上是读的。第4段(4-6分)只能传达少量的消息，表达不顺畅，语言错误很多，只能读少量的句子。第5段(1-3分)只能传达个别的信息，表达不明确，只能阅读个别的句子。列表the key points，Opening:(开始)tell the main idea，I would like to cheer up sick k

3、ids in the hospital。I would like to sing for kids。I would like to help them with their home work。I will sum up a volunter project。ending 3360 I will be a great volunteer。good model :The old saying many hands make light work reminds us that we can try to help others in need . I like helping people .

4、iinI could volunter my time to set up a volunteer project to help them . I will hand out some ads to call more people to join me . if every one can share Little love、Judge by yourself、完成第一个档案(13-15点)信息、平滑表示、没有语言错误或没有默认语言错误。第二档案(10-12分)信息基本完整，表达流畅，有一些语言错误，但不影响语义表达。第3段(7-9分)传达了一些信息，表达不畅，语言错误很多，但句子基本上是可读的。第4段(4-6分)只能传达少量的消息，表达不顺畅，语言很差，只能读少量的句子。第5段(1-3分)只能传达个别的信息，表达不明确，只能阅读个别的句子。摘要，we learn : 1 . how to offer help . 2 . how to help people in need。if every one share a little love、the world、homework、1。review the whole less