真题作文模版.ppt

1、依葫芦画瓢 你会吗？ 真题作文模版写作,商务英语教研室 张敏,作文写作精要,漂亮文章,评分标准,写作对策,写作模版,评分标准,2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。(注: 白卷, 作文与题目毫不相关, 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。),写作对策,结构,内

2、容,卷面,字数,过渡词,语言,1. 内容是否紧扣主题，涵盖提示要点 2. 作文结构层次是否清晰 3. 语言表达是否流畅，有无重大语病，有无逻辑错误。 4. 是否能恰当使用过渡性词语 5. 作文字数是否达到要求 6. 卷面是否整洁，书写是否漂亮,五大类模版,1. 观点类,2. 批驳类,3. 办法类,4. 原因类,5. 图表类,观点类,观点子类 模版6,观点子类 模版1,观点子类 模版3,观点子类 模版5,观点类,观点子类 模版2,观点子类 模版4,观点子类模版1-对立观点,Different people have different views on_. Some people think t

3、hat _,while others argue that_. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former/latter opinion. For one thing, I firmly believe_. For another, _. Just think of _, who_. Taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely come to the conclusion that_. Only if _ can we_, just as the saying go

4、es,_.,My View on Opportunity,1. 有的人认为机会是极少的，另一些人则认为人人都会有某种机会。 2. 我的看法。 3. 结论。,Different people have different views on opportunity. Some people think that there are few opportunities in the world,while others argue that everybody will have some kind of opportunity along his life route. As far as I a

5、m concerned, I agree with the former/latter opinion. For one thing, I firmly believe opportunities for “every dog has his day”. For another, since opportunities are transient, we have to make good preparations and improve ourselves. Taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely come to

6、the conclusion that there are quite a few opportunities in our society. Only if we get prepared can we seize the opportunities instead of letting them slip by, just as the saying goes:“Opportunities are only for the prepared minds.”,观点子类模版2-对立观点,Peoples opinions are always different once they talk a

7、bout_. Those who _ maintain that _. They also firmly believe that_. Many people think otherwise. On the one hand, _. On the other,_. My own opinion is that_sth._, in this fast-developing information era, has become more than common and acceptable. If we want to _, we have to _. So why not_?,My View

8、on Job-Hopping,1. 有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作，因为。 2. 有些人喜欢经常换工作，因为。 3. 我的看法 1997.6. CET-6,观点子类模版3-事物性质,Recently it has become a common phenomenon for college students_. In this way, _. Although it may bring unfavorable consequences, we can be sure to conclude that this practice is favorable on the whole. To begin

9、 with, _. Moreover, _. In the third place, _. Weighing the pros and cons of such a new trend, we can naturally arrive at the conclusion that it is beneficial and rewarding. This system not only _, but also_.,My View on Amalgamation 合并 of Universities,1. 近年来高校合并的现象很多见 2. 高校合并带来不少好处 3. 高校合并也让我们面临挑战,观点

10、子类模版4-事物的影响,Nowadays more and more _ are commonly and widely used in everyday life, ranging from_ to _. The popularity of _ will have great influence on _. On the one hand, _. On the other,_. To conclude, _ are just like a double-edged sword. With them we may_. However, one point should be kept in m

11、ind that we should take sensible use of them, always being the master of them.,The Digital Age,1. 如今数字化产品得到越来越广泛的使用，例如。 2. 数字化产品的使用对人们工作、学习和生活产生的影响 2007.12. CET-6,利弊子类模版5-对立观点,Nowadays, _ is playing a more and more important role in peoples life. _. However, peoples opinions are still divided on thi

12、s point. Those who are in favor of _ claim that it has a lot of advantages. Firstly, _. Secondly, _. Last but not least,_. Those who are opposed to _ hold that disadvantages are many. In the first place, _. In the second place,_. Finally,_. There is some truth in both arguments. But in my mind it is

13、 likely to do more good than harm._.,Spring Festival Gala on CCTV,1. 许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节联欢晚会。 2. 有些人却提出取消出街联欢晚会。 3. 在我看来。,观点子类模版6（观点+办法）,Nowadays every one of us may come across _now and then. These _ are most harmful to the whole society. In my opinion, their harmfulness can be summarized in the following

14、 three respects. In the first place,_. In the second place, _. Last but not least,_. In my mind, the government and the citizens should join hands to put an end to these_. On the one hand, _.on the other hand, common citizens_. Only by the joint efforts of the government and the common people can we

15、 do away with_.,My View on the Negative Effects of Some Advertisements,1. 现在有些不良的商业广告 2. 这些广告的副作用和危害性 3. 我对这些广告的态度,Nowadays every one of us may come across some false advertisements now and then. These advertisements are most harmful to the whole society. In my opinion, their harmfulness can be summ

16、arized in the following three respects. In the first place, some advertisements make up the functions of their products, and many consumers are cheated. In the second place, many such ads depict ideal life as luxurious, which have a negative influence on young,people. Last but not least, in order to catch the attention of customers, some ads design language tricks, which often lead to language pollution. In my mind, the government and the citizens should join hands to put an end to these false advertisements. On the one hand, the government shoul