中考英语作文专题复习指导(共22张PPT).ppt

1、Writing,中考作文指导,作文中应避免的几种常见语言错误： 时态错误（扣分多，一个时态错误扣分在1分左右）。 中国式的英语（不正确的英文表达会让整句不得分）。 单词拼写错误及大小写（单词拼写一定要过关）。 介词, 代词，非谓语动词或形容词副词的不正确使用（对单词的词性要熟悉）。 名词单复数（细心就可以避免的错）。,另外作文中书写不规范，卷面不整洁也是要失分的（中考中有12分的卷面整洁分，这两分不能丢！）。,解决方法：平时认真规范书写，少用或不用胶带或修正液，尽量减少涂改。,一审：审题抓点，确定人称、时态与体裁,How can we write a good composition?,具体做

2、法：用笔勾画,假如你是王林。你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部(Helping Hands Club)”将吸收新会员。你想加入该俱乐部，请根据下面表格和图片的内容，用英语写一封自荐信。,人称：_; 时态：_ ; 体裁：_,I,书信,一般现在时 am/ is /are/V原,Writing,齐头式，都靠左；缩进式，空格，靠右。,要求：1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 要点须包括表格和四幅图片中的信息，但不得使用真实姓名和校名等； 3. 词数：70左右。,Para 1：1. 自我介绍 姓名_ 性别_ 健康的 _ 乐于助人be happy to help others 和相处好_ 2. 引入话题（中

3、心句）我想加入爱心俱乐部。 _ Para 2: 要点: 1. 爱心表现1： _ 2. 爱心表现2：_ 3. 爱心表现3： _ 4. 加入原因1：_ 5. 加入原因2：_ Para 3： 总结提升 _,二列：三段式；要点、关键词句,Writing,Wang Lin,boy,healthy,be good with .,I want to join.,help . with,give seats to others,help clean up the park,help more people,make more friends,I hope you will agree with me.,Dea

4、r Sir or Madam, _ Yours Wang Lin,三连：连词成句，连句成篇,Writing,准确性是第一位的； 没有中式英语； 用熟悉的句型结构。,“爱心”表现(examples),Picture 1,helpwith,我的,I often help classmates with lessons.,Picture 2,helpcross,“爱心”表现(examples),I help old people cross the road on my way home.,Picture 3,“爱心”表现(examples),give my seat to,I usually gi

5、ve my seat to people in need on a bus.,“爱心”表现(examples),Picture 4,clean up the park,I sometimes help clean up the park.,“爱心”表现(examples),1. I often help classmates with lessons.,2. I help old people cross the road on my way home.,3. I usually give my seat to people in need on a bus.,4. I sometimes h

6、elp clean up the park.,四改：一看要点是否齐全，字数是否达标， 二看单词的拼写、动词的形式、名词的单复、介词与be动词,Writing,1315分：包含内容要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，表达清 楚，书写整洁。 1012分：基本包含要点，遗漏少量次要点；语言有少量错误；行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。 69分：包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。 35分：要点不明确，语言错误多，影响意思表达，或只抄写单词。 02分：白卷或文不对题。,Dear Chairperson, I am a boy student from class1 Grade 9. Id like be a

7、 member of the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hardly at my lessons. I like helping others. and often help classmates with their lesson . On my way home, I often help old people cross the road. On a bus, I always gave my seat to people in need. Sometimes, I help to clean up the park. If I j

8、oin the club, I will be able to make more friends. Besides, he can do more for others. Ill glad if I can join the club. I hope you will agree with me. Yours Wang Lin,C,to,lessons,give,I,be,1分,其它六处错扣2分,只得12分,五誊：书写美观规范，不作任何修改,规范誊写在作文本上。,Homework,Dear Chairperson, I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9

9、. Id like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others I get on well with my classmates .If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. Besides, I can do more for others. Yours Wang Lin,Ill be glad if I can join the club. I hope y

10、ou will agree with me.,and often help classmates with their lessons. On my way home, I often help old people cross the road. On a bus, I always give my seat to people in need. Sometimes, I help to clean up the park.,Lets practice!,Review: 第一步就是要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点 第二步就是要列出写作提纲，根据段落整理写作要点，写出开头语和结语（点题

11、）。,写作前：,确定人称、时态,写作后：,检查,组段成篇， 加主题句,审清题意， 构建框架,连词成句，变换句式,抓住要点， 列关键词,Summary,集句成段，添连接词,抄写规范， 避免错误,Homework,如今越来越多的中学生拥有了自己的智能手机。请根据以下提示，写一篇70词左右的英语短文，谈谈中学生使用智能手机的利与弊，并提出你自己的看法。（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数） 提示： 利：1.方便与朋友或家人保持联系； 2.很容易获取信息。 弊： 1.太多时间花费在手机上，没有时间与朋友或家人面对面交流； 2.过度使用智能手机对健康有害。,开头;Nowadays, a number of middle school students have their own Smartphones. Smartphones are really good for students. They make students keep in touch with their friends or family conveniently. And they help students get information more easily.However, students spend too much time on smartphones, they dont have time t