第一次月考作文错误总结.ppt

1、第一次月考作文错误总结,Summary of the composition of the first monthly exam,一、审题,1.很多学生审题错误，把暑期打算与计划写成了回顾暑期生活，导致全篇时态错误。 2.本文是书信格式，且写信人是李华。部分学生没有书信格式没有署名或者署名错误。还有些学生Best wishes!位置放错了。 3.部分学生没有认真阅读题干要求，漏掉了询问Rboert暑期安排这一要点。 4.部分学生没有注意题干最后的提示词，导致部分关键词写错。,二、文章结构,1.高中作文一般要分为三段或者四段，使文章清晰明了，且要注意使用段落间，要点间的衔接词使用。如：First

2、 of all, / Besides,/Last but not least. 另提示这些衔接词后打逗号而非点号。 2.请勿随意调换要点顺序，以免阅卷老师漏掉打分点。 3.请勿使用，1,2,2,3等阿拉伯数字来开始段落，也不要一个点一个段落，导致120字的文章写了六七段。 4.文章注意分清要点主次，不要有些要点写很长，有些要点一笔带过，或者有些同学写了很多无关紧要的话。,三、书写与卷面,1.很多同学书写极差，完全不知写的什么。 2.注意卷面整洁，请勿使用改正带，错词、删词请使用一条短横线即可，不要打墨团。 3.请开始一段时退四个英文字母的位置。,四、内容,1.每个要点的写法一般为。 衔接词+关

3、键词句+阐述句（通常是阐述原因、目的、结果、影响，且阐述句不要超过三句话）。一个要点一般三句话表达清楚。 2.写要点是尽量用短语代替单词，用固定句型书写卷子，适当使用从句。 如：First, I studied hard last term so I will stay at home and rest. I will help my parents do some housework. And they can have a rest. 改写为。First of all, I intend to stay at home to have a good rest after a long ti

4、me of study. Besides,I am supposed to help my parents do some housework so that they can have a rest,too.,3.写要点请开门见山，不要使用描述、阐述法。例如： 第四点 游览四川的景点 最好写 I will pay a visit to some tourist attractions in Sichuan province to widen my horizon. 不要写成这样 As you know, i am a native Sichuan person. But i have nev

5、er been to any places of interest. So my parents decide to bring me to visit some tourist attractions such as Jiuzhaigou, Huanglong,Yibin and so on this summer holiday. That will be exciting,isnt it? If you have time , you may go with us. And we will take a lot of photos,eat delicious food and make

6、a lot of new friends.,4.语法错误,My summer vacation will busy. （缺谓语） (Changlish) This are my want to do it. What about your? The study is very tired. I have a long time not see her. My English can make progress. His home is living in the countryside.,(主谓一致) She decide to hold a party. I think my parents

7、 is hard,i should do some things for things. It is said the tourist attractions is very beautiful.,(用词不当) I will join English courses. I think my English spoken is not well. I hope to your letter. Please write me soon. At first, There are my plan.,（句子结构） Its the most exciting thing is that I like to go to somewhere have beauti