四级作文评分标准.ppt

1、作文评分标准,作文考核的技能,A 思想表达 1.表达中心思想 2.表达重要或特定信息 3.表达观点、态度等,B 语言运用 1.运用恰当的词汇 2.运用正确的语法 3.运用合适的句子结构 4.使用正确的标点符号 5.运用衔接手段表达句间关系(如对比、原因、结果、程度、目的等),C 篇章组织 1.围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述， 突出重点 2.连贯地组句成段，组段成篇 D 写作格式 运用正确的符合英语表达习惯的写作格式,评分标准,1.基本要求： Part I Writing (30 MINS) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minute

2、s to write an article on . You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:,2.评分原则 作文采用总体评分（Global Scoring）方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分（Reward Scores） 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。既要考虑作文是否切题，也要考虑是否能用英语清楚而合适地表达思想。,3.评分标准： 14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯。 基本无语言错误，但有个别小错误。 11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有 少量语言错误。 8分基本切题。有些

3、地方表达思想不够清 楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误较多，其 中有些是严重错误。 5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。 有相当多的语言错误。 2分条理不清，思路混乱，语言支离破碎或 大部分句子有错误，且多数为严重错误。 0分白卷、作文与题目毫不相关、或只有几 个孤立的词,无法表达思想。,14分档 漂漂亮亮,紧扣主题与要点（内容） 用词不一定很复杂，但非常流畅（动词及动词短语用得好；学术词汇使用得好） 句子有一定复杂性（不一定花哨，但重复句式少） 逻辑上很连贯，一环扣一环 基本无语言错误（3、4个语言错误一定不是14分档）,11分档 清清楚楚,考生具备语言表达能力，有驾驭文章的能力 思想表达清楚（

4、事儿说出来了） 平淡，句式变化少，动词短语和用词远不及14分段复杂 连贯，顺畅（可能套路了一些） 少量语言错误（存在严重语言错误）,8分档 马马虎虎,从内容到语言上马马虎虎，隔三差五有错的句子 中式英语味道较浓 有连接词但不够丰富、多样 出现一些比较严重的结构性语言错误（三分之二对，三分之一错） 不成文规定：there be+do 应该是8分档,5分档 糊里糊涂,整体大的框架搭建起来了，但几乎句句都有问题，而又有几个正确的句子。（三分之二错句，三分之一基本正确句子） 用汉语可以读明白,2分档 一塌糊涂,句子没对的，语言支离破碎 写几句相关内容后抄 Directions或阅读理解 完全抄Dire

5、ctions 给0分,四级作文满分为15分。 阅卷标准分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。 根据文章稍优或稍劣于某以分数档则可加一分或减一分。 字数不足应酌情扣分。,四级写作自2002.6以后要求不少于 120词，字数不足会酌情扣分， 注意： 1. 题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束 句，均不得计入所写字数。 2. 题目要求写三段的作文,只写一段得0- 4分；只写两段得0-9分.,四级真题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an announcement to welcome students to

6、join a club. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1）社团活动的主要内容； 2）参加社团活动的好处； 3）如何加入社团；,分作文,Dear friends, we want to increase our English club, we hope more students to take part in. if you take part in our club, you will have many goods. First, you will raise English

7、 very soon. Second, you can have chances to talking with foreigners, too. Third, you can study many foreign knowledges. Forth, make many foreign friends. And so on.,Our club is a very wonderful club. If you take part in, you will like it very much. If you not, I think you must regret. So come to us

8、now. we are waiting for you all the time! The way of taking part in is very simple: telephone. Our telephone number is 62514479.,分作文,分作文,Welcome to our English club! We prepare many wonderful activities for you. We have English corners every weekend. And we prepare two English films every week. Some

9、times we invite experts to give speech (speeches) for (to) you. And we also prepare parties or debates sometimes.,You will get many interests by joining our club. First, you can rise (raise) your English level greatly. Second, you can study (learn) more foreign knowledge and broaden your views. Thir

10、d, you can make many new friends and make your college life more colorful (your college life will become more colorful).,分作文,If you are interested in English learning, I hope you come to join us soon. You can call us or send email to us. Our telephone number is 62514479, and our email address is . Y

11、ou are looked forward to join (We are looking forward to your joining)!,分作文,分作文,Welcome to our English club! We prepare many wonderful activities for you. We have English corners every weekend for you to practice your oral English. 1 And every Wednesday you can have the opportunity to watch two Engl

12、ish films. 2 In addition, 3sometimes English experts will be invited to give lectures. 2 Besides, 4we often organize debates, parties and other gatherings.,You will get many benefits from joining our club. 2 At first, you can improve your English level (ability) greatly. 2 Moreover, you can learn mo

13、re foreign cultures 5 by communicating with others and consulting experts. 2 In addition, you can make many new friends and your college life will be made more colorful.,分作文,If you are interested in English learning, 6 come to join us soon. 7You can call us at 62514479, or email us at . Looking forw

14、ard to you (your) joining!,分作文,分作文,Welcome to our English club! It is sponsored by the Student Union and has been set up for three years. Many wonderful activities are organized and arranged in our club. We have English corners every weekend, 1 with some knowledgeable foreign teachers. And every Wed

15、nesday you can 2 enjoy two classical English films 3 for free. In addition, experts on English learning and culture will be invited to give lectures 4 on occasion. Besides, we often organize debates, parties and other gatherings to provide chances for you to exchange ideas.,5 All these activities ar

16、e 6 quite beneficial to both your study and life. 7 Not only can they help you improve your English, but also enrich your college life greatly. Moreover, by communicating with others and consulting experts, you can learn more foreign cultures and broaden your views. 8 And of course, here you can make many new friends.,分作文,Anyone who i