初中英语作文写作课件.ppt

1、Writing,本节课的学习任务: 写一篇描述人的外貌 (look)、性格（characters）、爱好 （hobbies）的文章,1. What does he look like?,thin,heavy/ fat,What does she look like?,short hair,long hair,What does she look like?,2. Pair-work: A: What does xxx look like? B: He/ She is A: What is his / her character? B: He / She is A: What does he/

2、she like? B: He/ She likes ,描述外貌的单词： short , tall, thin ，of medium height ，strong, good-looking, nice, slim 苗条 描述穿着的短语：wear a T-shirt, wear a pair of glasses 描述性格的单词：lazy, quiet, serious, wild,friendly, shy, calm, polite 有礼貌的，strict 严厉的, out-going 外向的 , 描述爱好的短语：like reading, like to help others, lik

3、e eating, like playing basketball,3. Word collection:,4. Write something about this boy. (3-5句话),提示词： tall，thin，black hair; wear shorts and a T-shirt; polite(有礼貌的)，happy,5. Writing task: 根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述你的笔友马小跳，80个左右的单词, 开头已经给出。,开头： Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He,6. 写作步骤,1)审题 2)列纲 3)连句 4)修饰句子 组织文章

4、5)检查纠错,（定体裁、人称、格式、时态）,（用单词、短语列出内容要点）,（加上主谓宾，把短语连成完整的句子）,（适当运用承上启下的过渡词,使文章更完整更精炼）,（字数、内容要点、主谓一致、习惯用法、单词拼写、大小写及标点符号）,7. Writing task: 根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述你的笔友马小跳，80个左右的单词, 开头已经给出。,开头： Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He,8. Lets share some compositions.,9.Pair-correction: Exchange your composition with your pa

5、rtner and correct the mistakes with your red pen.,Writing task: 根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述你的笔友马小跳，80个左右的单词, 开头已经给出。,开头： Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He,10. 例文: Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He is 15 years old. He is tall and thin. He has short hair and he likes wearing shorts and T-shirts. He looks very cute. He

6、 likes hamburgers and ice cream best. His favorite classes are English, math and P.E. He likes collecting stamps. He often plays with his good friends at school and helps others. He also likes doing housework at house. He is very polite and friendly. He is a good boy. I like him very much.,11. Write your