初中英语人教版七年级下册unit2 writing.ppt

1、,Welcome !,Unit 2 What time do you go to school?,Section B Writing practice,by Wang Chuanxi Yanmen Junior Middle School of Jiangyou,Time is life. 时间就是生命。 Time is money.时间就是金钱。 (一寸光阴一寸金。),仿写前,创设情景,Objectives and T asks,To learn to write about daily routines To learn to use the verbs in the third sing

2、ular person.,仿写前,创设情景,仿写前,My Nice Day,创设情景,仿写前,讨论主题,When do you ? When does he she ? What do you do at? What does he she do at ?,仿写前,讨论主题,When do you ? When does he she ? What do you do at? What does he she do at ?,I get up at 8 in the morning. He gets up at 8 in the morning. She gets up at 8 in the

3、 morning.,主语 + 谓语动词 + 时间状语 （人） （动作） （时间）,仿写前,剖析范例,范文剖析(2b课文第一段): Hi! Im Tony. I dont like to get up early. In the morning, I get up at eight. Then I go to school at eight thirty. I dont have much time for breakfast, so I usually eat very quickly. For lunch, I usually eat hamburgers. After school, I

4、sometimes play basketball for half an hour. When I get home, I always do my homework first. In the evening, I either watch TV or play computer games. At ten thirty, I brush my teeth and then I go to bed.,仿写后,剖析范例,模版和结构:,仿写前,剖析范例,范文点评：,1、内容：要点齐全，发挥得当。 2、结构、逻辑：按时间叙述(in the morning , after school, in t

5、he evening )，结构清晰。 能根据需要使用不同的连接手段使行文连贯 (then, so, after, when, firs)t。 3、语言：提示词使用正确。用词准确， 表述清楚。时态正确无误。 4、书写：书写规范、清晰、美观。卷面整洁。 5、亮点：句式丰富、表达准确，以简单句为主， 穿插使并列句、复合句，运用了eitheror, 表现了较强的语言运用能力。,仿写中,仿其形,仿写任务1: (1)排序：3a: Number these sentences in order to make a daily routine.,仿写中,仿其形,_ I usually exercise fro

6、m six fifteen to seven. _ I always get up at six. _ After that, I always brush my teeth and go to school at eight. _ Then I quickly have a shower and eat breakfast. _ I have lunch at a quarter to twelve. _ I get home from school at half past four and do my homework. _ I have a very healthy life. _ I

7、 have dinner at seven thirty. _ I go to bed at ten.,3,2,4,6,7,1,8,9,5,仿写中,仿其形,仿写任务1: (2)题目：3b: Write about your own routine , using the information in 3a. 写作要求： 词数6080； 文中不能出现真实的校名或人名， 否则不得分； 所给的句子必须都用上； 使用适当的连接词汇或短语。 （3）思路点拨： 句子已经包含表示时间顺序的连接词和短语。 注意在文章的开头或结尾增加一个主题句 以画龙点睛。,仿写中,仿写任务1:（4）习作展示和点评： （5）满

8、分作文朗读： My Nice Day I have a very healthy life. I always get up at six. I usually exercise from six fifteen to seven. Then I quickly have a shower and eat breakfast. After that, I always brush my teeth and go to school at eight. I have lunch at a quarter to twelve. I get home from school at half past

9、 four and do my homework. I have dinner at seven thirty. I go to bed at ten.,仿其形,仿写中,仿其神,仿写任务2:Rewrite “My Nice Day” in the third singular person.,Lucys Nice Day Lucy has a very healthy life. She always gets up at six. She usually exercises from six fifteen to seven. Then she quickly has a shower an

10、d eats breakfast. After that, she always brushes her teeth and goes to school at eight. She has lunch at a quarter to twelve. She gets home from school at half past four and does her homework. She has dinner at seven thirty. She goes to bed at ten.,仿写中,仿其法,仿写任务3: (1) 题目：Write a passage to tell Toms

11、daily routine according to the timetable in 1c on P.10.,Toms Day,仿写中,仿其法,仿写任务3: (2)范文和模版（2b课文第二段）：,Mary is my sister. She usually gets up at six thirty. Then she always takes a shower and eats a good breakfast. After that, she goes to school at eight thirty. At twelve, she eats lots of fruit and veg

12、etables for lunch. After lunch, she sometimes plays volleyball. She always eats ice-cream after dinner. She knows its not good for her, but it tastes good! In the evening, she does her homework and usually swims or takes a walk. At nine thirty, she goes to bed.,仿写中,仿其法,模版： is . SheHe usually at . Th

13、en shehe always and eats a good breakfast. After that, shehe at . At , shehe for lunch. After lunch, shehe sometimes . Shehe always eats after dinner. SheHe knows its for herhim, but it tastes ! In the evening, shehe and usually . At , shehe goes to bed. 仿写任务3: (3) 写作：Toms Day,仿写后,感悟提高,1、展示诊断： 习作展示

14、作品诊断,仿写后,2、佳作鉴赏： 满分作文 老师点评,感悟提高,仿写后,3、知识积累：（1）语言积累： 表示日常活动的短语短语补充：,get up,eat breakfast,go to classroom,have classes,have lunch,play sports,do homework,go to bed,have dinner,起床,吃早饭,去教室,上课,吃午饭,吃晚饭,做作业,睡觉,做运动/进行体育活动,感悟提高,仿写后,3、知识积累：（2）时间的读法:,顺读法: 6:05 six O five 6:15 six fifteen 6:30 six thirty 6:45 six forty-five 6:55 six fifty-five,逆读法: 6:05 five past six 6:15 a quarter past six 6:30 half past six 6:45 a quarter to seven 6:55 five