中科院考博英语 培训资料（作文） analysis of compositions-09,spring.ppt

1、Foreign Languages Depart.of GUCAS,Hu Jiangbo,Comments on the compositions,-2009,02,Foreign Languages Depart.of GUCAS,Hu Jiangbo,词组的误用 1。Take Chen Kun for an example, he used to singing in a big bar -used to sing (-get used to singing) 2。would rather to V1support that the famous athletes and entertai

2、ners should be given high incomes. -V1 (delete “to”) 3。To him, the most important thing is to do more work and do more contributions other than accounting for personal interests. -seeking for,Foreign Languages Depart.of GUCAS,Hu Jiangbo,词性问题 1. they work very hard and their successful stories enligh

3、ten us how to success -V1and show us how to succeed 2. mislead people to pursuit short-term benefits. -pursue,Foreign Languages Depart.of GUCAS,Hu Jiangbo,中文式英文,That is to say he or she does a contribution to our societyV1. -V1sets a good example in society and benefits people,Foreign Languages Depa

4、rt.of GUCAS,Hu Jiangbo,句子结构不清,1. There is no denying the fact that famous athletes and entertainers get high incomes has become the utmost concern among people today. -famous athletes and entertainers getting high income 作为主语词组 原句结构为：The fact that is no denying. That-从句里需有自己独立的主语。,Foreign Languages

5、Depart.of GUCAS,Hu Jiangbo,2. There are many peopleV1 have devoted themselves to their work without considering personal fame and wealth, -V1people who have 否则就是两套主谓语在一个句子里面，违反了一个简单句只有一套主谓语的原则。（并列句除外）,Foreign Languages Depart.of GUCAS,Hu Jiangbo,Unclear sentence,3. For this case, thereforeV1 it is w

6、orthy of high price as every else such source like diamond. V2 -V1(delete) -high price, V2Just like diamond is worthy of high price. 4. With the result that it will baffle the development of the society. -With the result, it will,Foreign Languages Depart.of GUCAS,Hu Jiangbo,Incomplete sentence,Nowad

7、ays, the rich man to be more and more richer, and the poor man to be more and more poorer, the gap of they to be more bigger. -the rich man is ,and the poor man is, the gap of them is much bigger than before.不定式本身不能做谓语,要加助动词才构成谓语.,Foreign Languages Depart.of GUCAS,Hu Jiangbo,修饰不当,1。exotic social har

8、mony -precious social harmony 2. Given the factors I has just outlined, I can only say that athlete and entertainer are unreasonable for the high incomes, -I can only say that its unreasonable for the athlete and entertainers to gain the high incomes,Foreign Languages Depart.of GUCAS,Hu Jiangbo,Good examples,Good conclusion:欲扬先抑 However, nowadays China is still a developing country. So, too high income of these stars cause big income gap which lead to other pro