高考英语作文讲解.ppt

1、2020/8/27,高考英语作文 常见错误剖析及写作,四川省广元外国语学校 陈玉培,2010年11月21日,2020/8/27,学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析,1、汉语式思维 See the film will took me much time. He happened an accident yesterday.,2、谓语缺失 He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom. She in the classroom yesterday.,3、There be 句型出错 There are five students

2、play basketball on the playground. There are some workers are working in the field.,( An accident happened to him yesterday. ),2020/8/27,6、非谓语动词出错 Being seriously ill, his class-mates sent him to hospital. Seeing from the space, the earth looks like a ball.,学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析,4、谓语动词用法出错 He dressed in

3、a new coat. Great changes have been taken place. When I arrived Hong Kong, my mother was there waiting for me. He didnt notice the teacher to come into the classroom.,5、词性混用 She enjoys study English. If anyone against the plan, please let me know.,2020/8/27,学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析,7、分数与百分数作主语 In our class,

4、 20% sthdents are girls,but three fifths students are boys.,8、定语从句错误 The two boys are reading are my brothers. The book I bought it is lost. Ill never forget the days when we spent in the village together.,9、连词出错 Although he tried, but he still couldnt keep up with the others. My suggestion is we tr

5、y for a second time.,10、形容词、副词混用 The patient appeared nervously when he talked to the doctor. The artist worked hardly to finish his drawings on time.,2020/8/27,Dear Sue, Im Li Hua, is one of your students in China. Its almost a month since you left us. We all very miss you and are very grateful for

6、 you did for us. We are busy as usually. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize. This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted them together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and water them. The tree you p

7、lanted yourself is growing good, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back see Sue Wood? How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you with your Ameican students. Hope to keep in close touch. All the best, Li Hua,作文修改,2020/8/27,实例写作,(2010 全国) 假设你是李华，你的美国

8、笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告诉招聘信息。内容主要包括： 1教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等 2授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础） 3工作量： 每周12学时，任选三门课 担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor） 注意： 1词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信写出来。 Dear Peter, I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. _ Best, Li hua,2020/8/27,写作技

9、巧点拨,1、提纲式作文为半开放型写作。,2、要点均为45个（多为4+1个要点），要点提示比较简洁，考生 111有发散思维的空间；,3、英语作文多为三段式： 1para.Topic sentence ( main idea, writers attitude) 2nd para.Body (different points) 3rd para.Ending(writers own idea),4、尽量避免第一印象词汇出现,5、好的连词与表达法的使用。,2020/8/27,提炼文章要点 理解每个要点的含义，然后讨论每个要点的正确表达方式。 形成文章。,2020/8/27,范文,Dear Peter

10、, I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students. If youd like to come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain Today and America Today, and teach 12 periods a week. The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences. Besides teaching, you will also work as