高考书面审题、遣词造句.ppt

1、高考书面表达训练如何审题、如何遣词造句,最近，你校师生帮助辍学的李明同学返校。请根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观介绍这一情况。,注意：1、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数：100左右。 3、参考词汇：捐款 offer money; 募捐collect money,如何审题？,如何审题？,1、审定体裁、 题材； 2、审定人称； 3、审定时态； 4、审定要点； 5、审定结构。,1、审定体裁、题材： 2、审定人称： 3、审定时态： 4、审定要点： 5、审定结构：,审题提示:,书信、李明遭遇 第三和第一人称 现在时、过去时 见题干 可分为两段,学生习作1：,Li Ming was one top

2、 students of our school. He was good at his studies and always ready to help others. However, he has to leave school. His father died and his mother is seriously ill in bed.,Correct mistakes if any!,学生习作2：,学生习作2：,The whole school was shocked at the news and anxious about it. Quickly they decided to

3、help him out. Every teacher and student offered money to him and some students went to look after his mother in turn. At weekends they went out to collect money.,Correct mistakes if any!,学生习作3：,With their help, Li Ming will return to school soon. Thats all. Thank you. Yours, Wei Fang,Correct mistake

4、s if any!,Dear editor， Im writing to tell you what the teachers and students have done to help a student who discontinued his studies in our school. Li Ming is a student of our school. He is not only good at his studies but also always ready to help others. But he had to leave school because his fat

5、her died and his mother is seriously ill. As a result, he had to make money to help his family. Hearing the news, all the teachers and students were shocked. In order to help Li Ming, we decided to offer money to him and some students went out to collect money for him in the streets. With our help,

6、Li Ming has already returned to school. With best wishes! (100) Yours, Wei Fang,学生佳作欣赏！,高考范文 家乡变化,Dear Bob, Its my hometown Jiangcheng. The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. N

7、ew factories, houses have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth po

8、pulation should be brought under control so that well have a better hometown in future.,请赏析高考书面表达如何遣词造句！,如何遣词造句？,掌握5种简单句句型 1、主语连系动词表语； 2、主语 vi. 3、主语 vt. 宾语； 4、主语 vt. 双宾语； 5、主语 vt. 复合宾语；,最常见的连系动词？,1、be； 2、look, feel, smell, sound, taste ； 3、seem, appear； 4、become, get, turn, come, go, grow； 5、continu

9、e, keep, remain,； 6、come, fall, prove, turn out；,1、会后，她看起来有点疲倦。 2、他好像在写什么东西 。 3、夏季，鸡蛋容易变坏(go)。 4、她知道她必须保持镇静(keep)。 5、她终于梦想成真(come)。,请用适当的连系动词造句：,英语中最常见的四十个及物动词,agree ask believeconsider continuedecideexpectenjoy feel findfinishforget gethavehearhelp hopeimagine knowlearn like mindneednotice offerord

10、erprefer pretend promiseregret remembersay see suggesttellthink wantwarnwatchwish,请按要求将下列句子翻译成英文,1、我们班有50个学生（来自农村）(there be)。 2、昨天是小王打扫了教室(it that)。 3、我认为学好英语很重要(it)。 4、为了在高考中取得好成绩，我们正 努力学习(in order to, in order that)。 5、他起得迟，结果又迟到了(so that)。,高考书面表达五大常用句型,1、There be 句型； 2、It is (was) + 被强调部分 + that

11、(who) ； 3、it 作形式主语或形式宾语的句型； 4、to/ in order to/ so as to/ so that/ in order that 表示“目的” 5、sothat/suchthat/soas to/ enough to/tooto 表示“结果”,书面表达解题步骤：,1、审，即：审定体裁、题材、 人 称、时态、结构等； 2、编，即：编写要点，按顺序列出；3、写，即：连词成句，连句成文； 4、查，即：查内容，查格式， 查语法，查书写等。,求职信,1 、Li Hua，22，the English Department of Yangzhou University； 2、b

12、e good at English listening，speak a little German, operate a computer； 3、work as a typist, a guide； 4、get more information from, gofor a talk ；,审定要点：,Dear sir, I have just read in the newspaper that a secretary of the English language is wanted in your company. I am therefore writing to you to intro

13、duce myself. Id like to get the job. My name is Li Hua, a college student of 22. Now I am studying in the English Department of Yangzhou University. Not only can I listen to, speak, read and write English well, but also I can read and speak a little German. Besides, I can operate the computer. Once I worked as a typist during my spare time, and as a guide during summer holidays. The bosses I worked for were all satisfied with my work. You can get more information about me from my university. I am willin