高考英语写作指导地点描写[2].ppt

1、How to describe a place,基础写作技巧指导,地点描写,Suppose you are a guide to describe a place to tourists, what subjects (主题）will you introduce ?,Possible subjects：,1.介绍地理位置（Location） be located in be situated in lie in 坐落于脚下/顶部 stands at the foot of/ on the top of,常用词语,1. 日本在中国的东方。 2. 这房子朝南。 3.新教学坐落在学校的中央。,翻译,

2、Japan is/lies to the east of China.,The house faces (to) the south.,The new teaching building lies in the center of the school.,4.中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大的国家之一。,China, located/ lying in the east of Asia, is one of largest countries in the world.,2.介绍人口（Population）:,has a population of, （a city） with a popula

3、tion of,Beijing, the capital of China, is a large city with a population of over 12,000,000.,北京是中国的首都，是一个有1200多万人口的大城市。（用一句话）,Australia has a population of about 20 million.,澳大利亚 人口 2，000万,中国 发展中国家 人口 13.5 亿,China is a developing country with a population of 1.35 billion.,China is a developing count

4、ry, _ (人口)1300 million.,China is a developing country, _ (人口)1300 million.,China is a developing country, _ (人口)1300 million.,China is a developing country, _ (人口)1300 million.,3.介绍面积（Area）,has/covers an area ofsquare kilometers （a city） with an area ofsquare kilometers,城镇 面积 100多平方公里,Its a town wit

5、h an area of over 100 square kilometers,4.介绍历史（History）:,has a long history (of years) with a long history (of years),历史悠久,中国有5000 多年的历史。,China has a history of more than 5000 years.,它是一个具有悠久历史的现代化城市。,It is a modern city with a long history.,5.介绍交通（Transportation）,take a bus, a train or a plane to g

6、o to by bus/train/plane,坐汽车、火车、飞机到,交通便利 has convenient transportation （a city） with convenient transportation both on land and water,随着经济的发展 经济迅速发展 economy has been developing rapidly,6、介绍经济（economy）,With the development of economy,7. 名胜古迹,有很多名胜古迹： places of interest/ historical spots,承德是全国24个历史文化名城

7、之一，也是44个风景名胜之一。 Chengde City is not only one of the well-known 24 historical and cultural cities but also one of the 44 major scenic spots in China.,xxx, known as ,attracts millions of visitors from all over the world.,Hongkong , known as “a Pearl of the East”, attracts a lot of tourists from all ov

8、er the world.,香港，被誉为“东方之珠”，每年都吸引大量来自世界各地的游客。,be famous/well-known for its/as a ,以/作为而出名,杭州以美丽的西湖出名。,Hangzhou is famous for beautiful West Lake.,be home to ,的栖息地、家园,这个岛屿是各种鸟儿的栖息地。,This island is home to all kinds of birds.,一些其它表达方式：,自从以来，发生了很大变化 Since,great changes have taken place Since , have /has

9、been doing ,特色鲜明的地方文化 distinct local culture,自然资源丰富 be rich in natural resources,Now lets try!, 即学即练,请根据以下的情景说明用5个句子描述全部所给信息 2010年， 第十六届亚运会将在广州举行。 广州亚组委正在为宣传册征集稿件。请你根据以下信息，用英语写一篇介绍主办城市广州市的文章参与投稿。,写作内容,参考词汇：珠江三角洲 the Pearl River Delta 海上丝绸之路the Maritime Silk Road 始发港 a starting port 写作要求 只能用5个句子表达全部内

10、容。 评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。,title if necessary(标题） tense and voice （时态和语态） person （人称） style （文章题材） the important points （要点要全）,1.How to analyze the directions (审题)?,一般现在,第三人称,说明文,1.中国第三大城市；别称：花城；广东省省会，政治，经济，科学，教育，文化中心。,The third largest city City of Flowers the capital city the centre of,Guangzho

11、u，the third largest city in China，also known as City of Flowers，serves as the capital city of Guangdong Province and the centre of its political，economic，scientific，educational，and cultural life.,Step2: List the important points out如何列要点,2.全市面积7 434.4平方公里；人口1 100多万。,It covers an area of 7 434.4 squa

12、re kilometres. It has a population of 11 million,It covers an area of 7 434.4 square kilometres and has a populationof 11 million,先写成简单句：,如何连接简单句？,Covering an area of 7,434.4 square kilometres，it is home to more than 11 million people.,It covers an area of 7 434.4 square kilometres with a population

13、 of 11 million.,3.地理：（?)广东省中部；珠江三角洲北缘，珠江从市中心穿过，气候温暖湿润。,Guangzhou is located in the middle of Guangdong Province ,north of the Pearl River Delta . The Pearl River is winding its way through the city. Guangzhou enjoys a warm and wet climate.,Located in the middle of Guangdong，north of the Pearl River

14、Delta with the Pearl River winding its way through the city，Guangzhou enjoys a warm and wet climate.,4.历史: (?)2 200多年历史的名城，历史上海上丝绸之路的始发港。,it is a famous city with a history of more than 2,200 years and a starting port of the Maritime Silk Road.,5.旅游:（?）风光旖旎，旅游资源丰富。,It has beautiful scenery. Guangzho

15、u is rich /abundant in traveling resources.,With its beautiful scenery，Guangzhou is also abundant in traveling resources.,Guangzhou，the third largest city in China，also known as City of Flowers，serves as the capital city of Guangdong Province and the centre of its political，economic，scientific，educa

16、tional，and cultural life. Covering an area of 7,434.4 square kilometres，it is home to more than 11 million people. Located in the middle of Guangdong，north of the Pearl River Delta with the Pearl River winding its way through the city，Guangzhou enjoys a warm and wet climate. Besides，it is a famous c

17、ity with a history of more than 2,200 years and a starting port of the Maritime Silk Road. With its beautiful scenery，Guangzhou is also abundant in traveling resources.,如何连句成篇？,Lets share!,南极洲世界上最寒冷的地方，常年有冰雪覆盖 Antarctica, is the coldest continent in the world. Antarctica, is covered with cold thick

18、ice and deep snow all year round.,1.使用定语从句或同位语优化句子表达,which is covered with cold,thick ice and deep snow all（the) year round,the coldest continent in the world,* 语法，句法高分tips,夏天几乎不下雨，但一下起来就很大。 It hardly ever rain in summer _it rains heavily.,2.运用非谓语动词和with结构优化句子表结构,我的家乡位于中国广东，毗邻香港 My hometown,_ is located in Guangdong Pr