LanguagesAwareness1.ppt

1、Unit 16 Stories writing Narration,范学云 12/16/2017,Unit 16 Writing Narration How to make an outline of a story Fan Xueyun,stories of you,Writing Theme,In this class you will,1. know some words by cooperation. 2.translate and correct some sentences for the essay. 3.write the outline of the essay ,using

2、 the key words and phrases learnt in this unit.,Sheet One Words: 相貌好看的 中等个头的女孩 机灵的，聪明的 外向的 乐观的 精力充沛的 坦率的 乐于助人的 好心的 近视的 满头白发的 健康的；健全的 有魅力的；迷人的 幽默的 心不在焉的 独立的 勤奋的，用功的,Activity One,有耐心的 坏脾气的 健谈的 热心的 因此 Phrases: 期待 擅长,精通 喜爱 对.要求严格 有很强的意志力 过着幸福的生活 因为 在.方面取得进步 给.树立好榜样 有.天赋 下定决心做 专注于,Sheet One Words: 相貌好看的

3、good-looking / pretty 中等个头的女孩 a girl of medium height 机灵的，聪明的 pretty/brilliant/smart/intelligent/alert 外向的 out-going 乐观的 optimistic 精力充沛的 energetic 坦率的 honest/frank 乐于助人的 helpful 好心的 kind-hearted 近视的 near-sighted 满头白发的 grey-haired 健康的；健全的be/keep healthy/fine/fit /in good health 有魅力的；迷人的 charming/att

4、ractive 幽默的 humorous /full of humor 心不在焉的 absent-minded/be in the clouds 独立的 independent 勤奋的，用功的 diligent/hard-working,有耐心的 patient 坏脾气的 bad-tempered 健谈的 talkative 热心的 warm-hearted 因此 consequently/as a result Phrases: 期待 look forward to 擅长,精通 be good at /do well in /be skilled in/have a good knowled

5、ge of 喜爱be fond of /be keen on /adore/enjoy 对.要求严格 be strict in sth/with sb 有很强的意志力 have a strong will 过着幸福的生活 live/lead a happy life 因为 because /because of /due to /thanks to /owing to 在.方面取得进步 make great progress in 给.树立好榜样 set a good example for 有.天赋 have a gift /talent for 下定决心做 make up ones min

6、d to do 专注于focus/fix ones attention on / concentrate ones effort on /put ones heart into /sb be bent on /sb be devoted to doing,Activity Two,Sheet Two Translate : the more methods , the better 1. 他大约1.72米 2. 他又高又瘦，脸上还带着一副厚重的眼镜。 3. 他突然想到一个好主意。 直到那时候我才明白这句格言的意义“助人乃快乐之本”。 5. 尽管我们很累，但很快乐。,Correct: 6. I

7、was walking along the street while a terrible accident happened in the street. 7. Without your endless help ,I will not get a high mark in the College Entrance Examination this year. 8. What a unforgettable event I had!,Correct: 6. I was walking along the street while a terrible accident happened in

8、 the street. when Without your endless help , I will not get a high mark in the College Entrance would Examination this year. 8. What a unforgettable event I had! an,Time for teamwork! (1)First,speak out six key factors in narration. (2)second,speak out the main idea of each para. (3)Then,try to add

9、 detailed information to the main parts.,Activity three,记叙文的六要素,01,02,03,04,05,06,who,what,when,where,why,how,Key factors,请以“One Thing Im proud/ashamed of /I will never forget.”为题，用英语写一篇120个词左右的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意、羞愧或难忘的事情。 要求如下： 1.记述事情的经过； 2.简要说明你感到得意、羞愧或难忘的原因或从中得到的启示。 注意：文章的标题已给出，不计入词数。,Introduction,Pr

10、ocess,Thought,经历的构思,1.introduction:the introduction of you or your quote(simple tense),2.process: what happened (time sequence ,past tense),3.thought: your reflection 、inspiration or what you have learnt from this story(simple tense),show your outline,Activity Four,Model Essay,Everyone has the pride

11、, the deepest impression.Of course, I also have it. What Im most proud of is a very small thing,But it makes me feel proud. Im so proud of myself because Ive grown into a determined man. It was the first time for me to climb a high mountain alone. At first, I felt my body was filled with energy. As

12、time went by, tiredness made my step slow down. For many times, the idea of giving up the journey appeared in my mind. But the saying “ you can do it” ,enabled me to move on. Though every step seems very weak, I insisted on climbing to the top. Climbing to the top of the mountain makes me feel proud, and I also understand the truth: we will be successful as long as we preserve.,