基础写作之人物介绍.ppt

1、Basic Writing-,Character introduction,Just guess the man Described in the following sentences,Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, he was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3. When his

2、first album was released in 2000, he got the worlds attention. His popularity sky-rocketed (急速上升), and he has received many awards for his songs. His own unique Chinese R 社会活动家 social activist 【写作要求】使用5个句子表达全部所给的内容，并组织成连贯的短文。,How do you do the Basic Writing ?,The suggested steps:,1. 审题: 确定文体、人称和时态,2

3、. 整合信息 :把所有内容整合成5句,3. 翻译句子：考虑语法结构,4.连句成篇,5. 检查,费孝通是我国著名的社会学家和社会活动家。请根据下文提示，用英文写一篇短文介绍一下费孝通先生。,参考词汇：社会学家 sociologist; 社会活动家 social activist 【写作要求】使用5个句子表达全部所给的内容，并组织成连贯的短文。,1.他1910年11月2日生于一个富裕家庭, 2005年4月24日因病于北京逝世。(due to) He was born into a rich family on November 2,1910 and died due to disease in B

4、eijing on April 24,2005. Born into a rich family on November 2,1910, he passed away due to disease in Beijing on April 24, 2005.,2.他大学时先从事于医学学习，但后来却改变主意。 When he went to college, he first chose to work on medicine but then changed his mind.,3.他19301935年于清华大学学习，之后到英国继续深造.(further education) Between 1

5、930 and 1935, he studied in Tsinghua University and then went to England for further education. 4.他获得博士学位。 He received his doctors degree.,5.他一生致力于社会科学(sociology)研究，促使(advance)中国农村经济发展。 He devoted himself to the research on sociology and advanced the development of Chinas rural economy.,Born into a

6、rich family on November 2, 1910, Fei Xiaotong, a famous Chinese sociologist and social activist, passed away due to disease in Beijing on April 24, 2005. When going to college, he first chose to study medicine but then changed his mind. Between 1930 and 1935, he studied in Tsinghua University and th

7、en went to England for further education ，where he received his doctors degree. After 1938, he once taught in Tsinghua University and Peking University. Fei, who studied hard all his whole life, devoted himself to the research on sociology and advanced the development of Chinas rural economy.,检查(How

8、 to correct?),1、是否恰好五句话？ 、是否每句都含必要信息？ 、可否自由发挥？ 、pants纠错原则： 1)pattern 2)agreement 3)number 4)tense 5)spelling .,期中考试作文参考答案,A young man called “Brother Low-carbon” became a hit on the Internet in 2010 by suggesting we use less energy in our daily life so that we can help reduce the amount of carbon-di

9、oxide given off. For example, he always picks up waste paper on the street and use the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns down the brightness to a minimum and turns off the light. Also, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. As far as Im concerned, although

10、what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, he at least can enjoy a healthy life.,请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章.,牛刀小试:Now comes your turn!, In May 1923, Dr Huo Yingdong was born from a poor family in Hong Kong. At the age of ten, his father died. After 1955, he was engaged in architecture, shipping, petroleum and became a famous person at home and abroad. Since the beginning of the reform and open policy, he had donated over 10 billion dollars to sponsor educati