综合评述型(for Ss)

1、作文辅导 综合评述型,现象解释型 while the latter is important in that everyone has to know a little economics in order to live better in the time of “market economy”.,结尾2,As far as I am concerned, picking up an elective course, I am inclined to give priority to personal interest. I am taking geographic research an

2、d discovery course in that Ive been greatly keen on science since I was a kid.,亮点回顾,随着的教育改革和学生不断增长的需要， With the remarkable educational reform and the increasing students demand,努力 Strive to 从到不等/变化 Vary from to 把考虑进去 Take into consideration 职业前景和未来发展 career prospects and future development,普遍的原因 The

3、 universal reason 用装备 Equip sb. with sth. Be equipped with 因为 In that +从句,倾向于 Be inclined to 优先考虑 Give priority to 前者 The former 后者 The later,描述原因常用句型,There are numerous reasons responsible for it. There are many factors that may account for it. The following are the most conspicuous(显著的) aspects. T

4、here are many factors which give rise to the this problem There are three reasons for this. The reasons for this are as follows. The reason for this is obvious. The reason for this is not far to seek. Three reasons, in my mind, can account for this social phenomenon. Several reasons can account for

5、this phenomenon, In my mind, the reasons why the Internet surfers are on the rise are as follows.,句式联系法,三点 Firstly,.Secondly,.Thirdly/Lastly First, Second, Last but not the least,. First of all,.In addition,.Moreover,. To begin with,. whats more, . Besides 两点 For one thing,.For another,. In the firs

6、t place,.In the second place,. On one hand,.On the other hand,. First of all,/To begin with, Furthermore,/in addition,/whats more,二、问题解决性,96,6 The Global Shortage of Fresh Water 1. 人们以为淡水失去之不尽的（提示：雨水，河水，井水） 2. 实际上淡水是非常紧缺的（提示：人口增加，工业用水增加，污染） 3. 我们应该怎么办 问题解决性 提出问题-分析问题-解决问题,第一段：主题句： Nowadays, with the

7、 of , there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. /X has increasingly become a common concern of the public. 扩展句：1、on one hand,_. 2、on the other hand, 第二段： 主题句：The real problem with _ is _.扩展句：1、firstly, 2、secondly,_.3、Last but not the least,_.第三段：主题句：We must do somet

8、hing to solve _.扩展句：1、First of all,_.2、in addition, _预测展望3、Only if everyone makes a joint-effort to _can this problem be solved.,亮点万能句型： 任何解决问题的文章结尾肯定都要呼吁和展望未来，可用一万能倒装句，句套为： Only if we.can our society/campus become a more.for you, for me, for everybody to live/study in! 第一个省略号写我们应该做的事情，比如说一起努力，比如说更加

9、关注什么问题，如： Only if we make unwavering （坚定不移的） and constant efforts Or Only if we attach greater importance to environmental protection/. 第二个省略号写我们这样了我们的社会或者校园或者大自然会变成一个更怎么的什么东西，如 can our society become a more harmonious heaven（我们的社会变成更和谐的天堂） Or can our mother nature become a more beautiful wonderland

10、（我们的大自然母亲变成一片更美丽的热土）,96,6 The Global Shortage of Fresh Water,人们以为淡水失去之不尽的（提示：雨水，河水，井水） 实际上淡水是非常紧缺的（提示：人口增加，工业用水增加，污染） 我们应该怎么办,The Global Shortage of Fresh Water,Most people believe that the supply of fresh water on the earth is inexhaustible. City dwellers are used to having as much clean water as t

11、hey want coming out of the kitchen tap. And if you go into the countryside in most places you will see a wide variety of sources of water rivers, wells, and even glaciers. It seems that they could never be used up.,The second paragraph,The truth， however， is that the world is short of fresh water, T

12、he rapid growth of the rural population, the rising demand for water by industry and the increasing rate of population of water sources means that there is a global threat of massive water shortages. Whats worse, in some major cities there is already not enough fresh water to satisfy the daily needs

13、 of their inhabitants.,The third paragraph,Therefore, it is an urgent task for us to find new ways to save water. First, we should be careful not to waste water. Second, scientists should be encouraged to improve methods of desalinating （淡化海水）seawater and purifying polluted water. Third, industry mu

14、st make extra efforts to reduce the use of fresh water. Only if we attach greater importance to fresh water protection can our human beings enjoy the happiness and benefit (福祉) that our Mother Nature provides to us.,无穷无尽的 Inexhaustible 逐渐增长的需求 Increasing/rising/ growing demand 城市居民 City dwellers 满足的

15、需要 Satisfy the need of,当务之急是 It is an urgent task for us to Make extra effort to 更糟糕的是 Whats worse,只有我们坚定不移地努力，我们的社会变成更和谐的天堂 Only if we make unwavering （坚定不移的） and constant efforts can our society become a more harmonious heaven 只有我们更加关注环境保护，我们的大自然母亲变成一片更美丽的热土，如： Only if we attach greater importance

16、 to environmental protection can our mother nature become a more beautiful wonderland 只有我们更关注淡水保护, 我们才能享受大自然赐予我们人类的福祉 Only if we attach greater importance to fresh water protection can our human beings enjoy the happiness and benefit (福祉) that our Mother Nature provides to us. 只有这样，我们才能 Only in this

17、 way can we,2008年12月20日四级作文：,1一次性塑料袋给人们生活带来便利。 2由此带来的问题，举例子。 3限制使用塑料袋的意义， 问题解决性 提出问题-分析问题-解决问题（意义） 说明利弊型 优点（便利）-缺点（问题）-我的观点（意义）,Inmodernworld,Disposableplasticbags wereoncewidelyusedinChina.People usedtotakeitforshoppingandshopping assistantsoftenprovidedfreeplasticbagsfor ourconvenience.Forawhile,l

18、ifewithout themseemedunimaginableformostofus.,However,disposableplasticbagsdobring severedamagetoourenvironmentandlotof harmstolife.Firstandforemost,they areabandonedeverywhere.Itcannotbe absorbedwhichwillhavegreateffecton theenvironment.Whats more，thepollutionbrought byplasticthreattoourspecieslife

19、.,Therefore, limiting the use of disposable plastic bags is of great significance. First of all, this policy can reduce pollution and save a lot of recourse at the same time. Secondly, it contributes a lot to a more beautiful living environment; last but not least, it can also create a healthier env

20、ironment for people. In short, we should do our best to limit the use of plastic bags for ourselves and for the next generation,练习：现象分析型（课后作业）,SocialPracticeofCollegeStudents 1)各大学在假期都会组织学生参加各种社会实践活动 2)这些活动给大学生带来了哪些好处 3)参加社会实践活动应该注意些什么,Nowadaysmanyuniversitiesencourageand organizestudentstotakeparti

21、nsocialpracticeactivities. Duringtheholidays,studentsin increasing numbers chooseto1bethevolunteers,takepart- timejobs,ortakepartinotherpracticalactivitiesalike. Itsobviousthatsocialpracticeisplayingan increasingly importantroleinChinascollegeeducation. .,2Undoubtedly,collegestudentshave3 benefiteda

22、lotfromsocialpractice.4Aboveall ,theyareprovidedwithmoreopportunitiesto contacttherealworldoutsidethecampus. 4Moreover,insocialpracticeactivities, studentscan5applytheirknowledgetothesolutionto thepracticalproblems.Sotheirpracticalskillsare improvedgreatly.4Besides,socialpracticehelps 6strengthenstu

23、dentssenseofsocialresponsibility.,7Consideringtheabove-mentioned, Ithink,itisnecessaryforcollegestudentsto participateinsocialpractice.4However,social practicemaybringsomeproblems.Forexample, somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeintaking part-timejobssoastoignoretheirstudy. 4Therefore,weshouldtryto8balanceth

24、e relationshipbetweensocialpracticeandstudy,【亮点点评】 1平行结构。alike意为“类似的”，作后置定语。 2“毫无疑问”，副词使用恰当。 3“从中受益很多”。 4过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 5“把知识运用到解决实际问题中”。 6“加强社会责任感”。 7用于得出结论。considering用作介词，意为“考虑到，鉴于”。 8“平衡之间的关系”。,佳句临摩 1.佳句：students in increasing numberschoosetobethevolunteers,takepart-timejobs,ortakepartinot

25、heractivitiesalike. 临摩：参加社交活动、结识新人和结交新朋友是新生融入大学生活的有效办法。 _. 2.佳句：Undoubtedly,collegestudentshavebenefitedalotfromsocialpractice. 临摩：毫无疑问，阅读经典书籍使人们受益匪浅。 3.佳句：Consideringtheabove-mentioned,Ithink,itisnecessaryforcollegestudentstoparticipateinsocialpractice. 临摩：鉴于这些情况，义务教育必须被强制执行。 _.,1.Totakepartinsocia

26、lactivities,meetnewpeople andmakenewfriendsareeffectivewaysfor freshmentogetonwithcollegelife. 2.Thereisnodoubtthatpeoplehavebenefiteda lotfromreadingclassics. 3.Consideringthesituation,itisnecessarytoenforcethecompulsoryeducation.,其他练习,1. 志愿者活动Part I Writing (30 minutes)Directions: For this part, y

27、ou are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Volunteering activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:1. 越来越多的人从事志愿者工作2. 志愿者工作的社会意义 3. 作为大学生，应该怎么做,练习2 Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicParentalHopesandPersonalIdeals.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below: 1)父母都会望子成龙，但是父母的期望有时候会与他们孩子的理想发生矛盾 2)分析这种矛盾产生的原因 3)应该如何解决这一矛盾,练习5