简单句优化技巧

1、简单句优化技巧（第一课时）Teaching aims:To polish simple sentences by using some knowledge we have reviewed. Teaching important points: To learn skills of changing simple patterns into various ones.Teaching difficult points:How to conduct translations appropriately. IComparison (Listen attentively and underline

2、the differences in the following.)Welcome to our school! Let me briefly introduce our school to you.Our school, No. 1 High School of Liuyang, is located on the bank of the famous Liuyang River, with an area of 260 mu. Going through the school gate, you will catch sight of the Confucius Temple, which

3、 symbolizes the long history of our school. When you enter the teaching region, a well-equipped playground spreads before you. In front of the playground stand three main buildings, one for each grade. Walk straight along the main road and you will find this science building with so many students an

4、d teachers attending our English class. Our school is considered to be beautiful and peaceful with tall trees and various flowers. You will definitely feel amazed to see a fantastic campus like this. What a nice place to study in! I hope all of you will have a good time in my school.Co-study: How to

5、 polish a simple sentence?IIExploration (work in groups and collect opinions)Strategies: 1._ 2._ 3. _ 4. _IIIConsolidation （Finish the exercises referring to the strategy.）Strategy 11. 动词填空1). I had a good idea. A good idea _ me. 2). I forgot it for the moment. It _ from my mind. 3). Jim went over t

6、o sit down on the couch quickly. Jim _ himself down on the couch.2. 词组填空 1). As a result, the plan was a failure. The plan _to be a failure.2). Everyone should do his or her best. Everyone _ do his or her best. 3). I visited Yueyang Tower last Sunday. I _ Yueyang Tower last Sunday.3. 猜测词义1) He seems

7、 to be searching the web all the time; hes becoming a severe webster.2) You might be able to unschool young children successfully but you cant unschool teens. 3) Coopetition is especially common in the computer industry. 4. 朗读欣赏(Module 8 Unit 2 Turandot in Beijing) The Forbidden City was once only a

8、ccessible to the emperor, his family and senior officials. However, in this wonderful production, it has been transformed into the spot for a beautiful and sad love story. The bringing together of this group of people from many countries, the music, and the grand setting are clearly the key componen

9、ts of this amazing production.Question: Is it beautifully written? How?Strategy 21. 形容词或副词填空1). Friendship has been _ rooted between the two schools.2) My _ eddress is 495991534. 2. 改写句子Beijing is the capital city of China and has a long history of over 3,000 years.Beijing is the capital city

10、of China _.Beijing, _, has a long history of over 3,000 years.Strategy 31. 用适当的语法结构优化句子1).Billy didnt notice his teacher approaching and fixed his eyes on his third screen. Billy didnt notice his teacher approaching _.2). The girl is dressed in a red sweater; she is our monitor. The girl _ is our mo

11、nitor.3). Because he didnt know his telephone number, he cant get in touch with Tom. _, he cant get in touch with Tom.2. 看图表达 Topics: weather, grass, trees, persons Strategy 42012年高考句式积累, 课后落实1. （辽宁卷) Not until he retired from teaching three years ago did he consider having a holiday abroad.2. (天津卷)

12、 Only after Mary read her composition the second time did she notice the spelling mistakes.3. (湖南卷) Close the door of fear behind you, and you will see the door of faith open before you.4. (湖南卷) It was not until I came here that I realized this place was famous for not only its beauty but also its w

13、eather.5. (江苏卷) Dont worry, Mum. The doctor said it was only the flu. What a relief! Ill tell Dad theres nothing serious.6. (四川卷) This is not my story, nor is it the whole story. My story plays out differently.IVApplication (Polish the passage below using the strategies we have learnt.)Nowadays, man

14、y students find it hard to get a high score in writing. (1).Although they have remembered many words and expressions, they are still puzzled about how to use them successfully.The main reason probably lies in lack of reading. Reading texts and newspapers is (2). what we must do for language study. B

15、esides, you are supposed to make it a rule to exchange ideas with your classmates. (3).In this way you can improve yourself rapidly. Whats more, doing exercise is (4) necessary. (5)If you practice more, you will feel more confident.To (6) make simple sentences beautiful, the following ways, I think,

16、 will be (7). very helpful. First of all, using (8) good words keeps you updated. Second, use some proper modifiers and you will enjoy the beauty of a sentence. Third, choosing grammatical structures, you can express yourselves freely. More importantly, transforming sentence patterns may bring you i

17、nto a colorful world full of magic sentences.In a word, we, (9), will surely make great progress through (10) work.(1). _(2). _ (3). _ (4). _ (5). _(6). _ (7). _ (8). _(9). _ (10). _ III. Homework1. 思考：1）简单句优化的其他技巧? 2）简单句变成复合句的技巧？2. 仿写：The title of my speech today is See China in the Light of Her De

18、velopment.My beloved motherland is a country both old and young.She is old, because she is a big oriental country with a civilization stretching back several thousand years. With diligence and wisdom, the Chinese nation created a splendid civilization and made significant contributions to the progre

19、ss of humanity.She is young, because the Peoples Republic is just 60 years old, and the country began reform and opening-up only 30 years ago. The Chinese people established the New China after unremitting struggles and ultimately found a development path suited to Chinas national conditions through

20、 painstaking efforts. This is the path of socialism with Chinese characteristics. Following this path, our ancient civilization has been rejuvenated.摘选自温总理在剑桥大学的演讲My _ school_Welcome to our school! Let me introduce our school to you.Our school is on the bank of the famous Liuyang River. It has 260 m

21、u in area. You can see the Confucius Temple inside. It shows our school has a long history. On the left is the teaching region. In front of it, there is a playground. There are also three main buildings. If you walk straight along the main road, you will find this science building. There are many te

22、achers and students here. Our school has many trees and flowers. It is beautiful and peaceful. You will be surprised to see a campus like this. Its a nice place to study in! I hope all of you have a good time in my school.Answers:II紫禁城曾经只允许皇帝，皇室人员和高级官员进入，但是，在这次精彩的演出中，它变成了一个美丽而令人心碎的爱情故事的发生地。来自许多国家的这群

23、人的联袂演出，音乐以及恢弘的场景显然是这场令人惊叹的演出的重要因素。V. Nowadays, many students find it hard to get a high score in writing. With a large vocabulary and expressions in their mind, they are still puzzled about how to use them successfully.The main reason probably lies in lack of reading. Reading texts and newspapers is really a must for language study. Besides, you are supposed to make it a rule to exchange ideas with your classmates. Only in this way can you improve yourself rapidly. W