英语四级作文及写作模板课件

1、Copy of Writing Models,大学英语四级辅导之三,四级英语作文,四级作文基本要求,大学英语四级写作部分考试时间为30分钟，分值为总分的15%，其四个基本要求为： 1.切题 文章在形式上，诸如段落、字数、文体 等方面满足题目要求，并在内容上没有偏差。 2. 表达清楚，条理清晰 考察学生对文章结构的掌握，要求文章主题换点明确，有头有尾；论证、说明安排有主次、有轻重。 3、文字通顺，连贯性较好 考察学生对过渡句和连接词或短语的掌握和运用，要求文章的句子内部与句子之间通顺连贯，不突兀。 4、基本无语言错误 考察学生的语言基本、段落扩展、布局谋篇的综合语言表达能力。功，包括语法与拼写两

2、部分。这就要求考生不仅要掌握一定的词汇量和语法知识，还要具有较好的遣词造句。,四级作文评分原则和标准,14分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误。 11分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，但有少量语言错误。 8分：切题，表达思想比较清楚，文字上连贯性，但语言错误较多，其中有少量严重错误。 5分：基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，文字连贯性差，有较严重语言错误。 2分：条理不清，思想紊乱，远支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多位严重错误。 共五个等级。在相应的等级中可视情况加减1分。,论说文写作,论说文是四级作文的重点命题类型。他是之解释、议论、说理的文章，通过运用概念、

3、判断、推理等抽象的逻辑形式来论证和阐明事物的道理。 论说文的结构基本安排： 第一段：说明现状， 第二段：列举原因 第三段：归纳结论，提出建议，即“提出文体分析文体解决问题,模版与解说-对立观点型,这类作文的主线是： 某一事物或现象其优缺点或有管的正反面观点-我的态度 第一段：引出有争议的两个观点； 第二段：对两个观点分别进行详细的论述，可以分为两小段进行； 地三段： 总结，陈述自己的观点 例1：Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?(2005-12) 名校校园正成为旅游热点 校园是否应对有课开放，人们看法不同； 我认为,模版一对立观点

4、型,第一段： Nowadays, there is an increasing interest in-(点明新热点） Therefore, there is a hot debate over-(切入话题） 第二段： Some people are in favor of the idea of -(概述一方观点） They believe that -(详述理由一） What also argue that -(详述理由二） 第三段： However, other people stand on a different ground(概述另一方观点) They consider -(详述理

5、由一) Whats more, they firmly point out that -（详述理由二） 第四段： There is some truth in both arguments(双方各有道理） But I think the advantages of -overweigh the disadvantages In my opinion,-(总结自己的观点）,Model Writing: Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists,Nowadays, there is an increasing interest in visi

6、ting campuses of famous universities. Therefore, a hot debate arises over whether the university campus should be open to tourists. Some people are in favor of the idea of opening it to the public. They believe that the atmosphere of famous universities can motivate student visitors to seek more kno

7、wledge. They also argue that as more tourists come to visit, these universities can make themselves known to more people.,Model Writing: Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists,However, other people hold an opposite viewpoint. They consider that with tourists pouring into campuses, the beau

8、ty of the campus will be ruined. Whats more, they firmly point out that the normal teaching activities will be disturbed. There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of opening them outweigh the disadvantages. In my opinion, university campuses should be open to tourists.,模版与解说

9、-道理论证型,道理论证型论说文是对某一事物或现象进行分析和论证。通常是就某一个明确的观点进行份额系和论证。而对立观点型论说文是对两个观点进行对比论证，作者最后表明自己的立场。 例2： It Pays to Be Honest (2003-1) 当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实,模版与解说-道理论证型,第一段：It is true that -(指出普遍的观点) However,-(叙述不同的观点 ) 第二段： I think-( 提出自己的观点，即文章的论点 ) The reasons can be listed as follows.(开始论证 ) Firstly,

10、- Secondly,- for example,- Thirdly,-. A case in point is that - 第三段：It goes without saying that - In conclusion,-,Model Writing for It Pays to Be Honest,It is true that most of us value honesty highly. However, nowadays we often confront confidence crisis such as cheating, overcharging, fake commodi

11、ties and so on. I think that we should be honest. The reasons can be listed as follows. Firstly, only honest people can be truly respected by others over a long period of time, Secondly, honesty, as a traditional virtue of Chinese people can make our life easier and more harmonious. For example, if

12、fewer students cheated in exams, exams would be made much simpler.,Model Writing for It Pays to Be Honest,Thirdly, honesty can make our society more stable, A case in point is that Singapore a society featuring trust and integrity, has a comparatively low crime rate. It goes without saying that bein

13、g honest is of great benefit to both the community and individuals. In conclusion, honesty should be encouraged in our society.,常见写作问题,一、 审题 偏题( number 47) 漏题 二、衔接与连贯 1.语义不连贯(number 10 曾俊文） 2.衔接不当,常见写作问题,三、句子 1句子不完整 2 主谓不一致( number 26) 3句子不间断 4 时态混乱 5、逻辑混乱(number 31) 6.中式英语 (number10, 5, 四、遣词造句 1.拼写

14、错误 2.代词使用错误,依据模板写作,Models and Samples,现象解释模板1,Recently,_ . 2) What amazes us most is_. 3) It is true that _. 4) There are many reasons explaining _. 5) The main reasons _. 6)What is more, _.7) Thirdly, _. 8) As a result, _. 9) Considering all these, _. 10) For one thing, _. 11)For another, _. 12) In

15、 conclusion, _.,模板1-范文-1,1)Recently, PC games have become very popular on campus, 2) What amazes us most is that many students often spend their evenings playing such games. 3)It is true that PC games can do much harm to us if we indulge in them. 4) There are may reasons explaining the harms of PC g

16、ames. 5)The main reason is that laying PC games is an enormous waste of time and we will have little time for our study.,模板1-范文-2,6) What is more, those who play PC games day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep. 7) Thirdly, most games are about violent and unhealthy conten

17、ts. 8) As a result, we benefit less from PC games. 9) Considering all these, we should deal with PC games carefully.,模板1-范文-3,10) For one thing, we shouldnt spend too much time, energy and money on the games because study is our priority. 11) For another, we should try to learn something when playin

18、g them occasionally. 12) In conclusion, we should try to avoid the harms of PC games and live a more meaningful life.,现象解释模板2,As is known to all, _. 2)_seem to get accustomed to_.3) In fact, _. 4) The reasons of _lie in several aspects. 5) Firstly, _. 6) Secondly,_. 7) Thirdly,_ 8) Finally,_. 9) As

19、a matter of fact, _. 10) On the one hand, _. 11) On the other hand, _. 12 Therefore, _.,现象解释模板2- model writing-1,As is known to all, nearly everyone on campus has access to computers. 2) Students seem to get accustomed to playing PC games. 3) In fact, Pc games can do much harm to us if we indulge ou

20、rselves in them. 4) The reasons of the PC games harms lie in several aspects.,现象解释模板2- model writing-2,5) Firstly, playing PC games is an enormous waste of time and we will have little time or our study. 6) Secondly, those who play PC games day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest an

21、d sleep. 7) Thirdly, most games are about violent and unhealthy contents. 8) Finally, they cost us much money,现象解释模板2- model writing-3,9) As a matter of fact. We can find best ways to deal with PC games. 10) On the one hand, we shouldnt spend too much time, energy and money on the games because stud

22、y is our priority. 11) On the other hand, we should try to learn something when playing them occasionally. 12) Therefore, its up to avoid the harms of PC games.,现象解释模板3,Nowadays_. 2) For one thing, _3) For another, _. 4) It is obvious that _. 5) Many remarkable factors contribute to_. 6) First of al

23、l, _. 7) In addition, _. 8) Thirdly, _. 9) As to me, _. 10) As we know, _. 11) Besides,_ 12) In a word, _.,现象解释模板3- Model writing-1,Nowadays, PC games have become very popular on campus. 2) For one thing, many students often spend their evenings playing such games. 3) For another, more and more stud

24、ents indulge themselves in them. 4) It is obvious that PC do much harm to us. .,现象解释模板3- Model writing-2,5) Many remarkable factors contribute to the harm of PC games. 6) First of all, playing PC games is an enormous waste of time and we will have little time of our study. 7) In addition, those who

25、play PC games day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep. 8) Thirdly, they cost us much money.,现象解释模板3- Model writing-3,9) As to me, I only play PC games occasionally in summer or winter holidays. 10) AS we know, study is our priority, we shouldnt spend too much time, energy

26、and money on games. 11) Besides, many games are involved in violent and unhealthy contents. 12) In a word, we should try to avoid the harms of PC game.,Practice Writing for Model (1),Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: The Role of Man in Mod

27、ern FamilyYou should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline ( given in Chinese) below: 1) 现代社会，越来越多的男人参与家务劳动中； 2） 男人在工作之余承担家务义务的原因； 3） 我的观点,对比选择型4,There is a heated debate over_.2) It is commonly accepted that _.3) In contrast, others_. 4) Those who hold the first opinion

28、suggest_. 5)In their view, _. 6) However, others think_. 7) They argue that _. 8) Considering one after another, I stand on the sided of _. 9) First of all, _. 10) Furthermore, _. Thirdly, _. 12) Therefore, _.,对比选择型 4-Model Writing-1,There is a heated over the enrollment of athletic students. 2) It

29、is commonly accepted that athletic students can help universities win a place in sports competition. 3) In contrast, others hold that there are many disadvantages to lower their scores of enrollment.,对比选择型 4-Model Writing-2,4) Those who hold the first opinion suggest that universities should improve themselves in sports competition by lowering scores of athletic students. 5) In their view, these students can continue their academic study as well. 6) However, others think that its harmful to enrollment system.,对比选择型 4-Model Writing-3,7) They ar