作文讲评2.ppt

1、图表作文,如何审图,On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After d

2、inner, I packed into the suitcase the things (my grandparents need), such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.,First of all, I surfed the Int

3、ernet for some information about hotel reservations, train tickets and the weather. Then I went to the train station to buy tickets for them. There were crowds of people buying tickets there and I had to wait in line. Eventually, I got 2 tickets to Beidaihe on Sunday successfully. After that, I got

4、back home immediately and helped my grandma pack their bags. Thinking they might get lost, I bought a local map and put it in the bag. My grandma said I was considerate. On Sunday morning, I called a taxi and took my grandparents to the train station. While the train was leaving the station, my gran

5、dparents smiled to me and waved me good bye. On the way back home, I felt really happy because I had arranged a trip for my grandparents, which meant I had grown up.,关于细节添加,细节添加并非凭空想出、编造出来。 细节添加是在原文的基础上，是为了使文章表述更自然、流畅，浑然一体，而添加的部分。 真正把自己当做图片中的主人公，思考如何使图片之间联系最合理、自然，而不仅仅是图片的简单罗列陈述。,对比 My second step wa

6、s to buy 2 train tickets for them at the station (though there were a long queue of people waiting there that day). I helped them pack their clothes and an umbrella in the suitcase. (I also put an umbrella in the suitcase in case it rained.) I reminded them to bring a map. (Worrying that they might

7、get lost, I ; I bought them a map so they could go to any place they wanted and enjoy themselves),结构：时间状语、分段 内容：动词词组 语言：准确性 精彩度：好表达 细节体现文章的紧密、生动 字数要求：110字 图片作文 侧重考察语言功底、逻辑联系、细节考虑 开放性作文在此基础上进一步考察思想深度、思辨能力,15-17,16-18,避免太过简单 变成图片说明 错题本2本： a. 单选等 b. 作文笔记,漫画作文,如何审题： 要素、寓意、审题 行文,In the picture, between t

8、wo closely-located buildings grows a big tree. Unlike most trees, this one bends in the middle, struggling all the way up to get more sunshine. The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable conditions. Faced with difficulties, they never give up but try their best to find a way out. Life can be