读后续写微技能训练之如何添加细节

1、Sophia,如何添加细节描写,读后续写微技能指导之二,2017.11 浙江高考真题回放 Para 2 We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way._,The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entirely in their power. Book1 “Annes Best Friend”,I closed my eyes in the speeding car. Winding rivers, l

2、ofty mountains, deep valleys and sunny beaches held me entirely in their fascination.,举例：当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕。 At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt very_. 当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕，嗓子发紧，膝盖发软。 At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt so scared that my throat _and my knees felt_. 当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕，吓呆了，不敢动弹 At

3、the sight of the fierce wolf, I _with terror, too scared to _an inch. 当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗 At the sight of the fierce wolf, I was _by a strong sense of horror and my palms were_,表示害怕的心理,scared,tightened,weak,froze,move,seized,sweating,仿写练习：当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。 When the host announced that she wo

4、n the prize, she felt_. 眼睛因兴奋而闪烁。 When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes _with excitement. 激动得心砰砰跳 When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was _with excitement. 兴奋不能自已 When the host announced that she won the prize, a wide excitement took_ of her,表示兴奋的心理,thrilled,

5、twinkled,thumping,hold,仿写练习： 一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已。 Upon_the bad news, she felt extremely sad. 心痛，眼泪直流。 Upon hearing the bad news, her heart_, tears _down her cheeks. 悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话 Upon hearing the bad news, she, numb with_, had trouble speaking. 被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣 Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized

6、by a burst of _and couldnt help crying_.,表示悲伤的心理,hearing_,ached,streaming,sadness,grief,bitterly,仿写练习: Tony感到很绝望 Tony felt hopeless_/_. 事故发生后，Tony感觉突然被投入黑暗之中并且陷入绝望 As the result of an accident, Tony was suddenly _a world of darkness and _into hopelessness. 事故发生后，Tony感觉被遗忘、忽视并且陷入绝望 Tony felt _and was

7、 getting desperate with loneliness. 托尼被对一切事情充满期待并积极对待的信念所抛弃,表示绝望的心理,desperate,thrown into,sank,left out,deserted,Tonys beliefs in looking forward and seeing the positive in everything_ him,仿写练习:当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。 .When his mother kissed him on the cheek, the baby was_. 非常幸福; 心满意足 When his mother kis

8、sed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on_ of the world. 眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房间 When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face _and his bright smile _the room. 欢欣雀跃,表示开心的心理,happy/delighted/full of joy,top,lit up,beamed,danced,When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his eyes _with joy

9、 and sweetness.,仿写练习: 她感到非常羞愧。 She felt_. 脸上滚烫 She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face_. 血液涌上脸颊 So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood to _her face. 快哭了,表示羞愧的心理,ashamed,burning,rush,to,So ashamed did she feel that she was close _tears.,仿写练习: Sheldon感到非常生气。 Sheldon felt very_ 冲出房间；

10、狠狠摔门 Sheldon felt so angry that he _out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him. 怒火中烧；挥舞拳头 Boiling with_, Sheldon_ his fist at me 充满愤怒；说不出话,表示生气的心理,angry,stormed,rage,fury,Filled with_, Sheldon was unable to utter a single word.,shook,The player lost his balance, _back and toppled over.

11、这个运动员失去了平衡，向后趔趄摔倒了。 She _out of bed and _to the window. 她溜下床，踮起脚尖走向窗户怒火中烧；挥舞拳头 The man make a _for the door and escaped from the scene. 那个人向门冲去，逃离了现场。,表示人的行走之态,staggered,slipped,tiptoed,rush,The whole company is _about the reason for his dismissal. (说长道短；八卦) 整个公司都在谈论他被免职的原因。 He _against the strict r

12、ules of the reality show. (小声咕哝) 他私下低声抱怨真人秀的严苛规则。 Treated so unfairly, she _in pain and anger. 被如此不公正地对待，她痛苦而又愤怒的嚎叫。,表示人的说话方式,gossiping,murmured,howled,得知问题所在之后，他的大脑开始急速运转，想要想出一个好的解决方案。 After he knew what the problem was, his mind began to_, trying to think of a good solution 独自一人时，他总是会想到那可怕的经历 When

13、 left alone, he would always be _by that horrible experience 在他洗澡时，突然想到了一个好主意 When he was taking a shower, a brilliant idea suddenly _his mind,表示人的思考,race,haunted,crossed,天气很闷热 The weather was so_.This weather is terrible. 我汗流浃背 This weather is terrible, I am sweating_ 天气很闷热，一丝风也没有，稠乎乎的空气好像凝住了。 The

14、weather was so hot that there was no wind, and the thick air seemed to be_. 天气很闷热，我都没法呼吸了。希望很快能够凉快一点。 The weather was so hot that I can hardly_.I hope it will be cooler soon.,关于天气炎热的描写,hot,buckets/like a pig,frozen,breathe,下起了大雨 It was raining cats and _. There was a heavy downpour. 溪水上涨，风吹着拍打着房子。 I

15、t was raining cats and dogs, the streams _and the winds _and beat against the house. 我到家时全湿了。 It was raining cats and dogs. And I was all _when I got home.,关于雨的描写,dogs,blew,rose,wet,The _of the sun fills my lungs. 阳光的甜美充满了我的肺。 The first ray of sunlight is too _to touch. 第一缕阳光太脆弱，触摸不到。 Spring breeze

16、draws the curtain of clouds and the _floods into the classroom 春风卷起云幕，阳光照进教室 The whole world _with one breath of the sunshine 整个世界在阳光的照耀下绽放,关于太阳的描写,sweetness,sunshine,fragile,blossoms,When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the _sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin. 当我沐浴在阳光下；琥珀色的阳光亲吻着全

17、身的肌肤) 2.雾蒙蒙的群山间点缀着小屋和田地 _mountains were _with small farms and villages. 3. 入暮时分，我的脚步与优雅地随风飘扬的芦苇相伴 The sound of my footsteps was accompanied only by the _waving reeds.,关于和平景象的描写,amber-like,Mist-covered,dotted,gracefully,The sky is overcast, darkened with _clouds. 乌云密布；黑云压顶 On that dark and stormy nig

18、ht, the waves were crashing and the winds were_. 海浪肆意拍打；劲风咆哮 The rain came pouring down, the streams rose, and the winds _and_ against the house. 暴风骤雨,关于暴风天气的描写,gloomy,howling,blew,beat,surrounding scenes?,1. As _, （天空越来越黑，光线越来越暗）he quickened his steps.,2. _(微风) stroked his head , as if comforting all his tiredness.,the sky gradually darkened and the light dimmed,The gentle breeze,3. From the distance, he saw _(昏暗的灯光) in the village.,some dim light,Para.1 He took the strawberries home.(a sentence),Practice 1,1. .it was dark. (增加细节描写),The sun hid himself beh