2013--03--22第三板块.ppt

第三板块,书面表达,第一节-高考作文的评分标准：,第五档(很好);(31-35分) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，完全达到了预期的写作目的。,第四档(好);(26-30分) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务，基本覆盖所有主要内容。 2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 3. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，达到了预期的写作目的。,第三，二，一档(适当，较差，差)：(25分及以下) 1. 基本或未完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容（原因可能是未理解试题要求。） 3. 有一些或较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，甚至影响理解。 4. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限，较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。 5. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。,小结-高分作文的要素,1. 覆盖所有要点 2. 使用较多语法要素 3. 充足的语法结构和词汇储备（尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和词汇表达），并使用灵活准确 4. 有效使用连接成分，使文章结构紧凑,口诀,小结： 1. 作文的卷面； -整洁的卷面 2. 文章的语言； -丰富的词汇 3. 行文的流畅； -流畅的结构 4. 文章的思想； -独到的见解,高分要素补充说明,1.卷面整洁，书写美观 2.字数充足 3.基本语法和拼写错误最大限度减少或避免,应试技巧,第一节：审题（题材，审明要点，判断时态人称，词汇语法准备）,练习（1）,2009年湖南高考 假设你是某中学新老师李红，请给你的朋友张华写一封信，告诉他你第一天上课的情况，主要内容如下： 1. 描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情； 2. 介绍你处理该事的方式； 3. 谈谈你的感想。 注意： 1. 词数不少于120个； 2. 可适当发挥想象，增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现与本人及学校相关的任何真实信息。,范文（1）,Dear Zhang Hua, Its three months since I heard from you last time. Now I want to tell you an impressive story happening on my first lesson. On hearing the bell, students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could. But a boy, Li Ming, whose father died a month ago, was late for the class. He stood outside the classroom, silently. I smiled to him and let him come in. After a while, he cried on his desk. Then I walked to him and asked what had happened .He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her. At the same time, he apologized to me for his being late. Moved by his words, I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named “Mother” for the students. How time flies! Class was over before I realized it. From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them. Do you think so? Im looking forward to your reply.,练习（2）,2010湖南高考 假设你和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部，开展了为期两个月的活动。现在，你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流，请写一篇英语发言稿，主要内容如下： 1、描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的主要活动； 2、谈谈你们开展该活动的收获。 注意： 1、词数不少于120个； 2、不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。,范文（2）,Boys and girls， Today Ill talk about our English club .Our English club was set up two months ago . Now we have members of 25 . We meet once a week on Saturday afternoon . So far we have conducted a variety of activities on English learning , such as watching English films , including a Christmas party and getting together with foreign students . Last week we held an English story-telling competition .We required that the entries be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes .Every member took an active part in the activity . Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judges . At last Li Bing won the first place . Many members said the activity benefited them in many ways . Not only did it improve their spoken English , but also it brought them much fun .They hope many such activities can be held . Thats all . Thank you .,练习（3）,2008江西高考 学校计划举行英语作文竞赛，主题为“We Need Advice from Older Generations”。请根据下列要求写一篇作文： 你遇到的困难或问题，不知该怎么办。你去请教一位长辈，后来问题得到解决。要求写清楚下面三点： 1.当时你面临的困难或问题是什么？ 2.你获得的指教是什么？ 3.结果如何？ 注意：1.作文总数120左右； 2.不得出现真实的学校或本人姓名，否则零分,范文（3）,We Need Advice from Older Generations No one can deal with every problem they meet on their own. We need avice from others at times, especially from our older generations. The other day, I went to my uncle. I had had a hard time deciding which subject to major in the university. Id like to choose English because of my strong desire of learning languages, while my parents wanted me to major in science. Having learned my trouble, my uncle advised me to talk with my parents frankly, presenting my real thoughts. I did so. My parents understood me and agreed to respect my final choice. Remember: Go to your older generations for help, and they will not disappoint you.,练习（4）,(河南信阳市四高2008-2009年度高三年级第一次月考) 使用手机发短信俗称“拇指文化“(Thumb Culture),假设你班同学最近也在讨论这个话题,请根据下表提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍讨论的情况.(120字左右) 大部分同学认同 1.迅速打出短信（text message）,及时取得并保持联系; 2.随时传递信息或笑话娱乐朋友; 3.短信比传统书信贺卡更有时尚感. 少数同学反对 1.频繁使用手机打字发短信,可能损伤拇指,造成拇指疼痛; 2.随意传递笑话会干扰对方工作或学习. 3.传统沟通方式,如写信,贺卡等更显温馨.,范文（4）,The other day our class had a discussion on the advantages and disadvantages of Thumb Culture. Most students are for sending text messages with cell phones because rapidly typed messages can keep them in touch with one another constantly. Besides, text messages with greetings or jokes seem more fashionable to the young than hand-written cards. However, the minority of the students are against it. They say Thumb Culture may cause new health problems or even injure the thumb by repeating the same typing movements too frequently. Unexpected messages may disturb your friends if they are working or studying. In addition, such traditional ways of communication as hand-written letters and cards can bring people more feeling of warmth. Anyway, its hard for us to reach the same conclusion. Maybe the argument will long exist.,应试技巧,第二节：文章结构（总分总，要点整合以便行文流畅，三段制）,范文欣赏(1),My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of us are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers. In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. Whats more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.,范文欣赏(2),I Want to Smile There are many advantages of smiling. It can not only make us happy, but also please others. If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return. So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible, First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and take all the trouble to bring me up. They arrange almost everything for me. With their help, I have made great progress. I would like to say “Thank you“ to them with a smile. Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life. In a word, lets greet every day with a smile. Tomorrow is another day.,范文欣赏(3),Nowadays we are required to do research work apart from the lessons we learn in school.We are very interested in this kind of activity.We have a variety of subjects to choose from,such as local customs,changes of peoples living conditions,and protection of the environment. Last term our group made a study of the pollution in a river in my hometown.The river used to be clean.but now it is dirty and tlo water gives off a terrible smell.Our research shows that the river is mainly polluted by the waste water from the factories.Waste water from peoples daily life and agricultural chemicals also lead to the pollution of the river.To deal with the problem.we call for people to be aware of how serious the situation is and do something about it. Through our research,not only did we gain practical experience.but also we developed various abilities.We find such research very valuable and helpful.,例文分析,假设你是北京新世纪中学的一名学生，你校将举办一次以“”New Beijing, New Olympics”为主题的英文演讲比赛，以展示北京中学生积极迎接奥运的情况。请你用英文写一篇演讲稿，内容应涉及如下要点： 1、不文明行为； 2、英语学习； 3、奥运精神； 4、其他做法 注意：1、演讲稿应该包括所有要点 2、词数120左右 3、演讲稿开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear friend, The year 2008 is approaching. In order to present a very successful Olympic Games to the world, _,步骤,审题 1.体裁（说明） 2. 人称（一三人称） 3. 时态（现在，将来） 4. 要点（） 构思 1.确定主题 2.文章结构段落的安排 3.整合要点- 要点顺序、段落衔接常用句式、短语等 4.开放部分内容的组织 草稿 誊写,布局,开始部分（opening paragraph）说出文中的要点、核心问题。 正文部分（Body paragraphs）围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。 结尾部分（concluding paragraphs）对全文的总结和概括。 要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容。,展开（1）-主题句,In order to present a very successful Olympic Games, we should try our best to do something for the coming Games. In order to present a very successful Olympic Games, we really have a lot of things to do, which is of great importance. In order to present a very successful Olympic Games, we should do everything we can to make full preparations for the Games.,展开（2）-要点,改正：不文明行为 加强：英语学习 学习：奥运精神 宣传：其他做法 get rid of some impolite behavior， such as spitting or littering .（举例） In order to communicate well with , pay more attention to our （添加状语） Whats more/ Besides, learn from the Olympic spirits/ get across to so that（连接词）,展开（3开放部分）-结束语,1.We are sure that we can make the 29th Olympic Games a great success. 2.I believe nothing is impossible for a willing mind. We can manage it! 3.Now Im here appealing to all the students to make a contribution to the 2008 Olympic Games. If we do, Beijing will surely give a surprise to the world.,展开（4）-局部成文,First of all, we should improve our behavior. There do exist many impolite actions which may leave a bad impression on foreigners. Therefore we must behave well. English study is also very important. Only by learning English well can we communicate with foreign visitors and show them the kindness of our Chinese. Whats more, we can try our best to get Olympic spirits across to all the people in Beijing, even all over the country. At that moment, our Chinese people will open our hearts to welcome people from all over the world.,训练,自行完成此文（15分钟）,强化训练,现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。,完成该文，时间20分钟,The outline of the writing:,Conclusion paragraph: ,Introduction paragraph: ,词汇准备,Key words: 1.introduction(topic): 高三学生（senior 3 students） 春游(go spring outing） 讨论（discussion） 2.body(supporting ideas): 接触自然（be close to nature） 呼吸新鲜空气（ breathe some fresh air ） 精神放松（relax themselves ） 大脑休息（rest their brains ） 高考临近（ with college entrance examination drawing near ） 没心情玩（dont feel like going ） 耽误学习(waste the time) 3.conclusion: in my opinion,词汇准备,表列举说明的关联词: Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, Secondly Thirdly In the first place In the second place In the third place Finally/ Last but not least/, 表示递进、强调的关联词 Besides/Apart from/ Whats more/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/worse still/ to make matters worse,例文,Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they d