2018高考英语二轮复习专题五短文改错第1讲词法错误靶向训练.docx

专题五 短文改错第1讲 词法错误真题演练Passage 1(2017全国卷)(导学号 58210041)In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday，I took driving lessons.I still remember how hard first day was.Before getting into the car，I thought I had learned the instructors orders，so once I started the car，my mind goes blank.I forgot what he had said to me altogether.The instructor kept repeating the word，“Speed up！”“Slow down！”“Turning left！”I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left.A few minutes late，the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.答案：In the summer holiday following my birthday，I took driving lessons.I still remember how hard first day was.Before getting into the car，I thought I had learned the instructors orders， once I started the car，my mind blank.I forgot what he had said to me altogether.The instructor kept repeating the ，“Speed up！”“Slow down！”“ left！”I was so nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left.A few minutes ，the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a stop just in the middle the road.【语篇解读】本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者学车第一天的经历。71解析：词法错误。表达多少岁生日用序数词，因此eighteen应该改为eighteenth。答案：eighteeneighteenth72解析：词法错误。句意：我仍然记得第一天有多艰难。表示第几天，序数词前要加定冠词the或者用限定词进行修饰。答案：first之前加the或my73解析：行文逻辑错误。根据前后句意思可知这里表示转折概念，并非因果，所以把so改为but或yet。答案：sobut/yet74解析：句法错误。文章描述过去的经历，上下文均使用了相应的过去时态，这里应保持一致，用一般过去时，所以把goes改为went。答案：goeswent75解析：词法错误。根据后面引号内的内容可知word应该用复数形式words。答案：wordwords76解析：句法错误。根据前面教练发出的两个指令可知，这三个属于并列结构，都是祈使句，都以动词原形开头。答案：TurningTurn77解析：句法错误。这句话中含有so.that.(如此以至于)结构，故much在此处是多余的。答案：去掉much78解析：词法错误。“一段时间later”表示多长时间之后，是固定用法。答案：latelater79解析：词法错误。此处stop是名词，名词前用形容词修饰，所以把suddenly改为sudden。答案：suddenlysudden80解析：词法错误。in the middle of.意为“在的中间”，是固定搭配。答案：onofPassage 2(2017全国卷)Mr.and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school，and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.In their spare time，they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden，that is on the rooftop of their house.They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together.They have also bought for some gardening tools.Beside，they often get some useful informations from the Internet.When summer came，they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!答案：Mr.and Mrs.Zhang work in our school.They live far from the school，and it takes them about hour and a half to go to work every day.In their spare time，they are in planting vegetables in their garden， is on the rooftop of their house.They often get up and water the vegetables together.They have also bought some gardening tools.，they often get some useful from the Internet.When summer ，they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!【语篇解读】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要介绍了一对张氏夫妇的工作以及他们的业余爱好。71解析：词法错误。Mr.and Mrs.Zhang是两个人，故用both。因both在此作同位语，也可以去掉。all指的是三者或三者以上。答案：allboth或去掉all72解析：词法错误。hour是以元音音素开头的单词，前面要用不定冠词an。表示“一个小时”可以用an hour也可以用one hour。答案：aan/one73解析：词法错误。interesting意为“有趣的”，多指事物；interested意为“感兴趣的”，多指人。该句的主语是they，故用interested。be interested in意为“对感兴趣”。答案：interestinginterested74解析：句法错误。此处是非限制性定语从句，应用which而不能用that引导。答案：thatwhich75解析：行文逻辑错误。此处叙述他们经常早起这一事实，没有比较的意思，故不用比较级。答案：earlierearly76解析：词法错误。表示“买某物”直接用buy sth.。buy还可用于buy sb.sth.或buy sth.for sb.，表示“为某人买某物”。答案：去掉for77解析：词法错误。此处表示“此外，而且”，应用besides。beside“在旁边”。答案：BesideBesides78解析：词法错误。information是不可数名词，没有复数形式。答案：informationsinformation79解析：句法错误。when引导的时间状语从句通常用一般现在时表示将来。答案：camecomes80解析：词法错误。invite sb.to do sth.“邀请某人做某事”。答案：pick前加toPassage 3(2016全国卷)The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case，we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad，we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost many，yet we can still learn a lot.答案：The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about to do during the holiday.We can between staying at home and a trip.If we stay at home，it is comfortable there is no need to spend money.But in that case，we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad，we can broaden view and gain we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we go to places of interest nearby.I that it is a good idea.It does not cost ，yet we can still learn a lot.【语篇解读】本文主要讨论了暑假我们应该去做什么。1解析：句法错误。do后缺宾语，应将how改为what。答案：howwhat2解析：句法错误。情态动词后接动词原形。chose的原形是choose。答案：chosechoose3解析：词法错误。between.and.意为“在和之间”，是固定结构。and前后连接的是并列成分。and前用了动名词(staying)，and后也应用动名词(taking)。答案：taketaking4解析：行文逻辑错误。comfortable与no need to spend money之间是并列关系，不是转折关系。答案：butand5解析：词法错误。world是独一无二的事物，前面要加定冠词the。答案：world前加the6解析：行文逻辑错误。由前面的we go on a trip和we can broaden可知，应把your改为our。答案：yourour7解析：词法错误。knowledge意为“知识”，是不可数名词，没有复数形式。答案：knowledgesknowledge8解析：句法错误。suggest在此处表示“建议”，后接宾语从句时，从句要用虚拟语气，即谓语用“should动词原形”，should可以省略。答案：去掉can或者canshould9解析：句法错误。由前面的suggest和后面的does not cost可知，此处用一般现在时。I thought表示“原以为，本以为”。答案：thoughtthink10解析：词法错误。cost表示“花费(时间、金钱等)”时，宾语是不可数名词，故用much。答案：manymuch模拟演练Passage 1(2017广州高三模拟)(导学号 58210042)Last night，I dreamt that I was digging a hole in my backyard.After which seemed like hours of digging，two objects come into view.One was mental box.In them was an old treasure map.The other object was an oil lamp covering in mud.This was my chance to get rich，I thought.I was still thinking about my new wealth while out of nowhere 20 sailor appeared.They wanted for me to lead them on the treasure hunt.I glad agreed.Suddenly，my alarm clock went off and I woke over.It was only a dream.答案：Last night，I dreamt that I was digging a hole in my backyard.After whichwhat seemed like hours of digging，two objects comecame into view.One was mental box.In themit was an old treasure map.The other object was an oil lamp coveringcovered in mud.This was my chance to get rich，I thought.I was still thinking about my new wealth whilewhen out of nowhere 20 sailorsailors appeared.They wanted me to lead them on the treasure hunt.I gladgladly agreed.Suddenly，my alarm clock went off and I woke overup.It was only a dream.【语篇解读】本文主要讲述了作者的一个荒诞离奇的梦境。1解析：本句为名词性从句，应用引导词what。答案：whichwhat2解析：讲述的是过去的事情，所以用过去时。 答案：comecame3解析：其中一个物体是一个盒子，可数名词单数缺冠词。答案：mental前面加a4解析：指代box，用it。答案：themit5解析：oil lamp被覆盖在泥土中，应用被动形式。答案：coveringcovered6解析：根据结构was/were doing sth.when.“正在做某事，这时”，was/were about to do.when.“将要做某事，这时”可知将while改为when。答案：whilewhen7解析：根据20个水手可知，sailor应用复数。答案：sailorsailors8解析：want sb.to do为固定搭配，删除for。答案：删除for9解析：副词修饰动词，将glad改为gladly。答案：gladgladly10解析：wake up为固定搭配。答案：overupPassage 2(2017济宁高三检测)One of the most important rule of finding happiness in life is to do what you love.I remember when my mom takes me to an English class in primary school，I suddenly found that learn English was fun and I really enjoyed it.The voice at the bottom of my heart said，“Maybe I can learn English well and become English teacher.”It was not easy at first.For almost one and a half year，I didnt do very well in all my English exams.Disappointing and frustrated，I doubted that whether I could follow my dream.But I told me not to accept this reality.Gradual，my grades started to improve and I had much confidence than before.答案：One of the most important rulerules of finding happiness in life is to do what you love.I remember when my mom takestook me to an English class in primary school，I suddenly found that learnlearning English was fun and I really enjoyed it.The voice at the bottom of my heart said，“Maybe I can learn English well and become English teacher.”It was not easy at first.For almost one and a half yearyears，I didnt do very well in all my English exams. and frustrated，I doubted whether I could follow my dream.But I told not to accept this reality. ，my grades started to improve and I had confidence than before.【语篇解读】本文主要讨论怎样才能生活的快乐。1解析：one of后面接名词复数。故rule改成rules。答案：rulerules2解析：根据语境可知，这里应用一般过去时。故takes改成took。答案：takestook3解析：found后面是宾语从句，宾语从句用动名词作主语。故learn改成learning。答案：learnlearning4解析：泛指“一位老师”用不定冠词，English是元音音素开头的单词，用an，或者将become改成turn，因为turn后面接名词不需要冠词。故become后面加an或become改成turn。答案：become后加an或becometurn5解析：one and a half 后面接名词复数。故year改成years。答案：yearyears6解析：这里作状语说明主语的状态，主语是I，需用过去分词形式。故Disappointing改成Disappointed。答案：DisappointingDisappointed7解析：doubted后面接whether引导的宾语从句，that是多余的。故去掉that。答案：that去掉8解析：根据句意“我告诉自己不要接受现实”可知将me改成myself。答案：memyself9解析：修饰整个句子用副词。故Gradual改成Gradually。答案：GradualGradually10解析：confidence是不可数名词，根据后面的“than before”可知，这里应用比较级，故much改成more。答案：muchmorePassage 3(2017合肥高三质量检测)I still remember the first day when I come to this new school.Everything was new to me，what made me realize I was no longer a small child.I had to depend on me.Luckily，I made several good friend.Their interests were similar with mine.I had great English teacher，Maggie.She let me know the important of English.So I decided to learn English hardly.Although it was very difficult at first，but with the help of my teacher，I made rapidly progress.Just as the old saying goes，“Where there is a will，there is a way.”答案：I still remember the first day when I to this new school.Everything was new to me， made me realize I was no longer a small child.I had to depend on .Luckily，I made several good .Their interests were similar mine.I had great English teacher，Maggie.She let me know the of English.So I decided to learn English .Although it was very difficult at first， with the help of my teacher，I made rapidlyrapid progress.Just as the old saying goes，“Where there is a will，there is a way.”【语篇解读】本文主要记叙了作者上学第一天的事情。1解析：该文介绍的发生在过去的事情，故要将come改为came。答案：comecame2解析：“.made me realize I was no longer a small child”是非限制性定语从句，要用which在从句中作主语，代指前面一句话Everything was new to me，故把what改为which。答案：whatwhich3解析：该句主语为“I”，将me改为反身代词myself。答案：memyself4解析：friend是可数名词，前面有several修饰，故要用名词复数形式。答案：friendfriends5解析：be similar to意为“和相似”，是固定搭配。答案：withto6解析：teacher是可数名词，该处指“我”有一个好老师Maggie，故要在had和great之间加a。答案：had后面加a7解析：the是定冠词，后面要接名词。the importance of English意为“英语的重要性”。答案：importantimportance8解析：hardly意为“几乎不”，hard意为“努力地”。该处指“我”决定努力地学习英语。故要将hardly改为hard。答案：hardlyhard9解析：although和but不能连用。两个句子只需要一个连词。答案：去掉but10解析：progress是名词，修饰名词要用形容词。make rapid progress意为“取得快速进步”。答案：rapidlyrapid名师点睛名词是短文改错中一个常见考点。围绕名词，可以对冠词，形容词等进行考查。例如：在该文中，several good friend，had great English teacher，Maggie，the important of English，made rapidly progress，分别考查了可数名词复数，单数可数名词前加不定冠词，冠词后加名词，形容词修饰名词这几个考点。所以，在平时的学习时，学生要注重对名词词性、词义的理解和掌握。Passage 4(2017石家庄二中高三模拟)(导学号 58210043)Dear teachers and students，its great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.I spend a lot of time learn English because I believe English is very important nowadays.As for me，the following learning methods are very effect.First，I always prepare lessons careful before class，so it is easy that for me to keep up with the teacher in class.Second，I listen closely in class and do exercise immediately after class，which helps me gain a deep understanding of which I learned.Third，I read English novels in my spare time so that I can learn more about western cultures and enlarge my vocabulary.Instead，listening to English songs helps correct my pronunciation.The more I learn English，the easy it becomes.I wish you will enjoy learning English as well.答案：Dear teachers and students，its great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.I spend a lot of time English because I believe English is very important nowadays.As for me，the following learning methods are very .First，I always prepare lessons before class，so it is easy for me to keep up with the teacher in class.Second，I listen closely in class and do immediately after class，which helps me gain a deep understanding of I learned.Third，I read English novels in my spare time so that I can learn more about western cultures and enlarge my vocabulary. ，listening to English songs helps correct my pronunciation.The more I learn English，the it becomes.I you will enjoy learning English as well.【语篇解读】本文主要讲述了作者是怎样学英语的。1解析：pleasure指“一件快乐的事情”，是抽象名词具体化，用不定冠词修饰。故great pleasure前加a。答案：great pleasure前加a2解析：使用短语spend a lot of time (in) doing sth.意为“花费很多时间做某事”。故learn English改成learning English。答案：learnlearning3解析：系动词are后面用形容词。故effect改成effective。答案：effecteffective 4解析：修饰动词prepare用副词。故careful改成carefully。答案：carefulcareefully5解析：使用句型It is形容词for sb.to do sth.因此that是多余的。故去掉that。答案：that去掉6解析：exercise作为“练习”是可数名词，这里用复数。故exercise改成exercises。答案：exerciseexercises7解析：gain a deep understanding of后面是宾语从句，宾语从句缺少宾语，用what引导宾语从句。故第二个which改成what。答案：whichwhat8解析：根据上文的First，Second，Third，可知，这里是另外一个学习方法，用besides“此外”。故Instead改成Besides。答案：InsteadBesides9解析：根据上文“The more I learn English，”可知，使用the比较级主谓，the比较级主谓的句型。故easy改成easier。答案：easyeasier10解析：wish接从句表示“但愿就好了。”一般指不太可能实现的事情，从句中用虚拟语气。这里应用hope表示愿望。故wish改成hope。答案：wishhopePassage 5(2017荆门高三调研)When I was in Grade 5，I met an teacher who made me remembered her forever.Her family name is called Ding.And Miss Ding was a very kind women teacher.She often played games with us，and sometime she talked with us.He had a unique set of teaching methods.We students could get good marks without write so much homework.She was very so popular in the school that many teachers also liked to interact with her.There was always a big smile on face，and she seldom lost her temper.She was always patiently with us.There are so many teachers in my heart.Whatever，Miss Ding is the most unforgettable.答案：When I was in Grade 5，I met teacher who made me her forever.Her family name is called Ding.And Miss Ding was a very kind teacher.She often played games with us，and she talked with us. had a unique set of teaching methods.We students could get good marks without so much homework.She was so popular in the school that many teachers also liked to interact with her.There was always a big smile on face，and she seldom lost her temper.She was always with us.There are so many teachers in my heart. ，Miss Ding is the most unforgettable.【语篇解读】本文是作者介绍自己的老师丁老师。1解析：考查冠词。teacher首字母发的是辅音，所以只能用a。答案：an改为a2解析：考查固定搭配。make sb. do sth.“让某人做某事”，故改为remember。答案：remembered改为remember3解析：考查名词单复数。此处是指我的老师，单数概念，故用woman。答案：women 改为 woman4解析：考查副词。此处意为有时候，用sometimes。答案：sometime改为sometimes5解析：考查代词。此处人称用错，是女性，故用She。答案：He改为She6解析：考查动名词。此处without是介词，后接动名词，故用writing。答案：write改为writing7解析：考查副词。very和so都是修饰词，只能用一个，而且此处是sothat句型，故去掉very。答案：删除so之前的very8解析：考查代词。此处是指她的脸上，故加一个her。答案：face前添加her9解析：考查副词。此处为系表结构，形容词作表语，故改为patient。答案：patiently改为patient10解析：考查连词。此处前后句之间是转折关系，故用However。答案：Whatever改为HoweverPassage 6(2017九江十校高三模拟)When I was in Junior Middle School，I once quarrel with my favorite teacher Mr.Yang because he criticized me strictly.Before that，I was so ashamed that I had no courage to see her again.To my surp