高中英语短文改错及写作讲评课件新人教版必修1.ppt

,高一写作指导,无论从词法还是句法上讲，英语中动词是最关键的。而在高考英语书面表达评分中，动词错误往往又是扣分的重点。所以同学们在写作时要特别注意动词的正确使用。一般来说，中学生在写作中出现的动词错误主要有以下几个方面：,一、时态误用,二、语态错误,三、词形错误,四、词性错误,五、词义错误,六、句式错误,一、时态误用,一般来说，根据写作要求能够非常明确地判断出 应该主要用什么时态，像写日记、看图书面表达， 讲述发生的一件事，其主要时态就是一般过去时。 出现时态错误的主要原因是：（1）对各种时态的 基本概念不清楚（2）时间立足点把握不准（3）母 语干扰 由于汉语动词没有时态变化，许多同学缺乏 时态概念（4）考场时间不够,He is working in this company ever since he was graduated from college. The teacher explained that light trvaeled faster than sound.,has been working,travels,二、语态错误,Mary was dressing in white. The story was happened long long ago. We watched the train till it was disappeared.,dressed,英语中seat， dress，devote 等动词常用被动语态,belong to, break out, disappear, happen, occur, take place, 等词无被动语态,三、词形错误,动词有过去式、过去分词、现在分词、单数第三人称形式。 In short, things have began to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I was studiing in my room when the telephone rang. The driver drived so fast that the car knocked into a truck. The balloon bursted suddenly.,begun,studying,drove,burst,四、词性错误,1.及物动词与不及物动词混用 The teacher entered into the classroom. We all agreed Marys idea. The suggestion was come up at the meeting. My hometown has taken place great changes in the past twenty years.,with,came,Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past twenty years.,易用错的这类不及物动词有happen, take place, occur, break out, run out, come up, come true, go out, belong to, remain, disappear等 及物动词有marry, enter, serve, reach等,2. 实意动词和系动词的误用,The music sounds well. This record is sold good.,good,英语中look, sound, taste, smell, feel等 表示感觉的连系动词后接形容词作表语,sells,well,英语中有些说明主语自身特性的动词常用 主动语态表被动含义，如sell, wash, write等 This cloth _.(好洗） This pen _.(书写流利) The door _.(好关),washes easily,writes smoothly,closes well,3. 动词形容词介词的混用,Our PE teacher is ill. Who will instead of him? They all against your plan. I favourite English.,instead of 为介词，应改为take the place of, 或者说Who will take his class instead?,are,favourite 可用作形容词或名词不能做谓语， 应改为My favourite is English. 或English is my favourite (subject).,4. 瞬间动词和延续性动词的混用,英语中瞬间动词不能语“段”时间连用应将其替换为状态动词或延续性动词 He lent me a book and told me that I could borrow it for a week.,keep,注意此类动词的替换arrive-be;buy-have; die-be dead;join-be in;leave-be away; fall in love-be in love; get married-be married,B. 瞬间动词与till或until引导的时间状语从句或构成的短语连用时，应使用否定形式，否则应使用状态动词或延续性动词 He went to bed until eleven oclock. He stopped talking until the teacher came. He fell asleep until 9 oclock the next morning.,didnt go,或改为He worked until 11 oclock.,didnt stop,或改为He kept talking until the teacher came.,slept,五、词义错误,We all persuaded Father to give up smoking, but he wouldnt listen. The young man pointed to a policeman over there, explained and said, “He stopped us an hour ago.”,tried to persuade,and explained,六、句式错误,My classmates suggest me to study hard. Welcome you to visit our school. There used to have two trees in the yard.,advise,My classmates suggest that I (should) study hard.,studying,You are welcome to (come to) our school for a visit,有些动词不能接不定式作补语，这类动词有 agree, demand, hope, insist, suggest, welcome等,be,What is a sentence?,1. The rain stopped him from going to school.,主语+谓语（+宾语+宾补+状语）=简单句,2.The rain stopped and then he went to school.,主句+从句=复合句,简单句+简单句=并列句,3.The rain stopped when I got home.,I believe that everything is going on well. She was reading a novel when I came in. She is the girl who sings best in my class. What we need is time. The question is where we should go tomorrow.,宾语从句,状语从句,定语从句,主语从句,表语从句,主句+从句=复合句,1. This earthquake was very large. 2. Many people was lost their houses and parents. 3. luckily, with the help of goverment, we can eat delicious food and live good houses. 4.In a world, we are determined to rebuilt our country.,III. Errors in your writing,terrible,government,in,word,rebuild,5. To my sad, thousands of people lost their families or seriously injured. 6. After