修订版北京中考英语写作

1、中考英语写作专题中考英语写作专题一、一、课标课标及及考试说明考试说明要求下的书面表达要求下的书面表达A.能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材；能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材； B.能独立能独立起草起草短文、短信等，并在教师的指导短文、短信等，并在教师的指导下进行下进行 修改修改； C.能使用常见的能使用常见的连接词连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系；表示顺序和逻辑关系； D.能简单描述人物或事件；能简单描述人物或事件； E.能根据所给的图示或表格写出简单的段落或能根据所给的图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明操作说明。 新课程标准中关于写的要求新课程标准中关于写的要求1.能正确地使用大小写字母和标点符号；能正确

2、地使用大小写字母和标点符号； 2.能运用所学词汇、语法和句型，按照题目要求能运用所学词汇、语法和句型，按照题目要求写出一篇不少于写出一篇不少于60词的文段。能简单描述人物、词的文段。能简单描述人物、场所、活动或事件；场所、活动或事件； 3.能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明；说明； 4.能就常见话题表述事实，表达观点、情感和态能就常见话题表述事实，表达观点、情感和态度等；度等； 5.能正确使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系能正确使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。 考试说明考试说明具体要求具体要求中考作文分为三大类：中考作文分为三大类： 一、提

3、建议看法一、提建议看法 二、写经历感触二、写经历感触 三、做介绍说明（图表类）三、做介绍说明（图表类）基本为夹叙夹议文体。因此，作文结构需要简洁明了，基本为夹叙夹议文体。因此，作文结构需要简洁明了，倾向于三段论。倾向于三段论。第一段引出问题，第一段引出问题，点明观点点明观点；第二段分点论述或者具体叙述经历，第二段分点论述或者具体叙述经历，描述细节描述细节；最后一段最后一段总结体会总结体会，点名主旨，前后呼应。，点名主旨，前后呼应。考查重点：考查重点：1 1、话题、话题训练训练八大话题八大话题两大方面两大方面2 2、应试、应试技巧训练技巧训练写作步骤写作步骤三、如何训练三、如何训练1、按话题训练

4、：、按话题训练：八大话题八大话题一、介绍人一、介绍人 （自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、（自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、 个人感受等）个人感受等）二、介绍地点（旅游等）二、介绍地点（旅游等）三、校园生活（春游、校规、科目、学习困难等）三、校园生活（春游、校规、科目、学习困难等）四、课外生活四、课外生活 （家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人（家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人 爱好等）爱好等）五、假期安排五、假期安排 （计划、过去经历等）（计划、过去经历等）六、节假日活动六、节假日活动 （志愿者活动、过去经历）（志愿者活动、过去经历）七、环境、健康七、环境、健康 （环保、疾病、食品健康等）（环保、

5、疾病、食品健康等）八、个人观点建议八、个人观点建议 （提建议、劝告等）（提建议、劝告等）话题训练操作实例话题训练操作实例(每周训练两个个话题每周训练两个个话题)链接链接word文档话题一：文档话题一：2、按应试技巧训练：、按应试技巧训练：写作步骤写作步骤主题升华应用案例应用案例(-2012年海淀二模年海淀二模)Dear Li Fei,Im lucky to have you as my host family. I will stay in Beijing just for two days. I hope to go to your school and study with you. Im

6、 interested in your courses and after-class activities. I also want to know more about Beijing? Could you please show me around Beijing? Would you mind telling me the two-day life and activities? Im looking forward to your letter. Yours, Jack假设你叫李飞，是美国中学生杰克的笔友，你收到了他的来假设你叫李飞，是美国中学生杰克的笔友，你收到了他的来信。请给杰克

7、写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍你对他在北信。请给杰克写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍你对他在北京的安排或者建议。京的安排或者建议。Dear Jack,Im glad to hear from you. _ Yours, Li FeiStep 1: 审题：人称、时态、要点。审题：人称、时态、要点。Step 2: 确定结构：把握文章框架结构，必要时确定结构：把握文章框架结构，必要时适当增加细节。适当增加细节。文章结构文章结构Heading 点题，概括性（书信语言，表示欢迎）点题，概括性（书信语言，表示欢迎）Body中心记叙部分；层次分明。两天行程。中心记叙部分；层次分明。两天行程。1.Ending小

8、结，呼应主题。小结，呼应主题。写作步骤写作步骤Step 3：根据结构列提纲、写要点：根据结构列提纲、写要点：1. Heading 点题，概括性（书信语言，表示欢迎）点题，概括性（书信语言，表示欢迎） 欢迎来到北京；渴望做；愿意做；把欢迎来到北京；渴望做；愿意做；把展示展示给给；两天生活和行程。；两天生活和行程。2. Body（关键信息点）（关键信息点） 中心记叙部分；层次分明。两天行程。中心记叙部分；层次分明。两天行程。 首先；第一天；带某人去首先；第一天；带某人去；上；上课；其次；课；其次；课后；过得愉快；第二天；名胜古迹。课后；过得愉快；第二天；名胜古迹。3. Ending 小结，呼应主题

9、小结，呼应主题 内心深处；只有内心深处；只有Step 4：将要点连词成句：将要点连词成句Step 5：完善文章：完善文章（选词酌句，由句到文，升华主题）（选词酌句，由句到文，升华主题）在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活使用长短句和在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活使用长短句和复合句，使文章增色，注意使用万能句，替换句。复合句，使文章增色，注意使用万能句，替换句。例例1 毫无疑问北京以它悠久的历史和灿烂的文化而毫无疑问北京以它悠久的历史和灿烂的文化而闻名。闻名。It goes without saying that Beijing is not only famous for its long hi

10、story but also its splendid culture.例例2 课外活动能够带给我无尽的快乐。课外活动能够带给我无尽的快乐。After-school activities can bring me endless joy.例例3 尽可能抽时间参加课外活动给了我健康的体魄。尽可能抽时间参加课外活动给了我健康的体魄。Fitting as much time as possible taking part in after-school activities results in my healthy body.例例4 北京是如此的美丽只有你亲自来才能领略它的北京是如此的美丽只有你亲

11、自来才能领略它的魅力。魅力。Beijing is so beautiful that only if you come to Beijing yourself can you experience its charm.四、秘密武器四、秘密武器如何训练如何训练亮点句子亮点句子：一、中考一、中考60个基本句型和个基本句型和305个常用词组的运用个常用词组的运用二、分类归纳万能句型，背诵、替换及应用二、分类归纳万能句型，背诵、替换及应用三、掌握各种句式及复合句构成方法，创作有三、掌握各种句式及复合句构成方法，创作有思想的原创句子。思想的原创句子。中考英语书面表达可替换句型中考英语书面表达可替换句型

12、句型变换巧归纳句型变换巧归纳u发表观点可用句型：发表观点可用句型：I think可替换为：可替换为：(1) In my opinion, (2) Personally speaking, (3) At the bottom of my heart, I have to be honest and sayEveryone knows可替换为：可替换为：(1) It is known to all that(2) There is no doubt that(3) Nobody can deny that(3) It goes without saying that运用运用1&2翻译句子翻译句子在

13、我的心底在我的心底/毫无疑问，我的英语老师不仅工作努力而且友好。毫无疑问，我的英语老师不仅工作努力而且友好。 At ht bottom of my heart, I have to be honest and say my English teacher is not only hard-working but also kind. It goes without saying that my English teacheru承上启下承上启下 可用句型：可用句型：., because 可替换为可替换为the reason why I do/ did this that我们必须要植树的原因是它们

14、能为我们提供我们必须要植树的原因是它们能为我们提供新鲜的空气。新鲜的空气。基础版：基础版：The reason why we have to plant trees is that they can provide us with fresh air.升级版升级版: There are many reasons why I prefer doing . and the main reason is that., another reason is that. and 可替换为可替换为not only but alsou其他句型：其他句型：1. Only if everyone is willi

15、ng to protect the environment can the world be a better place to live in.2. Like/ love可替换为：可替换为：（1）fall in love with sth. at the first sight（2）be keen on sth.（3）be fond of.（4）lose oneself in sth.3. everyone可替换为可替换为There is no but： 没有人不没有人不 没有人不渴望上大学。没有人不渴望上大学。There is no one but longs to go to colle

16、ge.4. Important可替换为：可替换为：play a more and more important in our life.5. spend/take time可替换为：可替换为：fit as much time as possible doing sth.方法归类方法归类“建议看法建议看法”类写作技巧类写作技巧第一段第一段:点明问题点明问题如果是书信，需要写上如果是书信，需要写上句型句型1：Thank you for your letter 2.I am so glad to hear from you然后可以引出要说的问题然后可以引出要说的问题:句型句型1：The proble

17、m youve mentioned in your letter is 2:Ive also noticed the problem youve just mentioned 3:I have been in the same situation with you 4:I have had the same problem with you 5:I can understand your feelings 6:I am so sorry to hear that you are in trouble now.2.陈述自己的建议和看法陈述自己的建议和看法句型句型1:From my point o

18、f view 2:It seems to me that. 3:As I see it.第二段第二段 分点论述分点论述第一点第一点句型句型1：Firstly 2:First and foremost. 3:Most importantly 4:Its good/bad/useful/no use/harmful/necessary/.for sb to do 第二点第二点句型句型1:Secondly. 2:Furthermore 3:Whats more. 4:You should/ought to do /in order that 5:I consider that .is quite i

19、mportant/crucial to our society/life/study第三点：第三点：句型句型1：Finally. 2:Last but not least 3:Youd better doso as to. 4:We should never dowhich will cause bad influence on your society/life/study/health. 5:We should work hand in hand to solveso that .第三段第三段 总结总结 句型句型1：In a word 2:In general 3:Generally sp

20、eaking. 4:Obviouly. 5:Above all. 6:In conclusion第一段第一段引出要叙述的内容引出要叙述的内容1：Its an unforgettable experience for me2:I could still remember that day 3:Until today I still have a very deep expression of sb/sth.第二段第二段按时间或空间顺序叙述事情的经过按时间或空间顺序叙述事情的经过第三段第三段1:This experience has changed me greatly2:From the mom

21、ent on3:Never give up4:Where there is a will, there is a way5:These are the words that have helped me through the hard time.6:Its this experience /the very person that has totally changed my attitude towards经历感触类作文写作技巧经历感触类作文写作技巧第一段第一段点明介绍的对象点明介绍的对象1:Its very famous .in some place. If you come here,

22、 I promise you wont be disappointed.2:Its well-known tourist destination in some place.3:This is a great event/activity for our country /city/school, we are busy preparing for it第二段第二段分点论述分点论述第一点：第一点：1：First of all, it has wonderful sightseeing2:The most famous scenic spot is.3:This event will great

23、ly change .of our city第二点第二点1：Secondly.2: Whats more.3: This place is famous for.第三点第三点1: Finallly.2:Everyone could take part in/participate this event ,we could all get precious experience through event 第三段第三段总结总结1:I am sure you now have more detailed knowledge about2:Its an important event for all

24、 of us. 介绍说明类作文写作技巧介绍说明类作文写作技巧类别类别because of, thanks to表原因表原因by the reason that, this is the reason why表让步表让步although, despite, in spite of表转折表转折However, yet, still, but表结果表结果so that, therefore, thus, in order that, so as to表并列表并列bothand, as well as, rather than, not onlybut also, eitheror表递进表递进furt

25、her more, whats more, in addition4. 常用过渡词句常用过渡词句总结写句子的方法总结写句子的方法l简单句简单句l简单句简单句+状语短语状语短语l简单句（主句）简单句（主句）+状语从句状语从句l主句主句+宾语从句宾语从句l使用定语从句使用定语从句l简单句简单句+连词连词+简单句简单句09年北京市中考英语写作试题年北京市中考英语写作试题l课外生活话题课外生活话题家务方面家务方面应用案例应用案例l某英文报纸就家务劳动（某英文报纸就家务劳动（Housework）话）话题征文，请你投稿。题征文，请你投稿。l每个家庭都有许多家务，人人都应该学做每个家庭都有许多家务，人人都应

26、该学做过一些。谈谈你经常帮父母做哪些家务，过一些。谈谈你经常帮父母做哪些家务，有什么体会，并打算在暑假为家里做什么。有什么体会，并打算在暑假为家里做什么。l提示词语：提示词语：every family, lots of housework, learn to do, help, parents, be/feel proud of必会级必会级选用级选用级名词名词chore, trash, living room, snack, party, lifestyle动词动词try, keep, sweep, fold laundry, 副词副词hardly, ever, once, twice, 句式

27、句式. 单句训练单句训练（汉译英）（汉译英）l1. 我做家务。（简单句：主谓）我做家务。（简单句：主谓） I do chores. l2. 我经常做家务。（简单句：主谓我经常做家务。（简单句：主谓+频率状语频率状语 +地点状语）地点状语） I do housework at home every day.l3. 我一星期洗两次衣服。（简单句：主谓我一星期洗两次衣服。（简单句：主谓+频频 率状语）率状语） I do the laundry once a week. 复合句训练复合句训练l4. 我每天叠被子，在我起床后。（主谓我每天叠被子，在我起床后。（主谓+时间时间 状语从句）状语从句） I m

28、ake my own bed after I get up at 6:30 every morning.l5. 如果我做更多家务，我父母下班后将更轻松。如果我做更多家务，我父母下班后将更轻松。 （条件状语从句）（条件状语从句） If I do more chores, my parents will be relaxed at home after their hard work.l6. 我喜欢做家务因为它可以使我爸爸妈妈在我喜欢做家务因为它可以使我爸爸妈妈在 家轻松。（原因状语从句）家轻松。（原因状语从句） I like / love / enjoy doing housework beca

29、use it will make my parents relaxed at home. l7. 我希望分担父母的辛苦工作。（宾语从句）我希望分担父母的辛苦工作。（宾语从句） I hope I can share my parents hard work.复合句训练复合句训练l8. 对于我来说最简单的家务对于我来说最简单的家务-每天只花我每天只花我1分钟扫地，使我和父母都非常开心。分钟扫地，使我和父母都非常开心。 Spending 10 minutes in sweeping the floor which is easy for me makes my parents and me very

30、 happy.复合句训练复合句训练扩句步骤扩句步骤l单句单句-并列句并列句-复合句复合句- 连长句连长句-主题升华主题升华汉译英（简单汉译英（简单-复杂）复杂）l1. Every family has a lot of housework. l2. We should learn to do some housework. l3. I often help my mom and dad do some. l4. I can sweep the floor and clean the dishes. l5. I love helping my parents with the housework

31、.l6. They work hard every day and are very tired after work. l7. I hope they can relax and be happy at home. l8. The summer vacation is coming, and I am going to learn to cook. l9. I believe my parents will be proud of me.连长句连长句l3+4 lI often help my mom and dad do some such as sweeping the floor and

32、 cleaning the dishes.连长句连长句l5+6 lI love helping my parents with housework because they work hard every day and are very tired after work.主题升华主题升华lAs for their daughter, I am eager to share their hard work and want them to share my happiness. So I will try my best to do more chores to make them relaxed and happy at home. lThe summer vacation is coming, and I am going to learn to cook. I believe my parents with be proud of me. Lets do housework now! Being helpful to our parents is fantastic. WordSentenceParagraphComposition五、心得与建议五、心得与建议l