人教版（2019）必修 第一册Unit 1 Teenage life Reading for Writing 建议信 讲义

必修一unit1teenagelife如何写建议信写作指导建议信属于应用文范畴,通过提供足够的信息和理论依据,让对方采取一定的行动或接受你的建议,改变对方的想法或做法。写作时注意建议信的语气一定要委婉,而且一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。另外,还要注意所举例子的力度,也就是例子的说服力和可信度。说服力是指要用逻辑和论据让对方产生共鸣,从而赞同你的观点;可信度是指要用具体的事实证明你的观点或者建议是可靠的。常用表达You'dbetterdo...2.Youshoulddo...3.Youneedtodo...4.IfIwereyou,Iwoulddo...5.Ifhewerehere,hewoulddo...6.Whynot/Whydon'tyou...?7.Itwouldbeagoodideaif...8.As/SofarasIamconcerned,Iplanto...9.Foronething...;foranother...10.Inconclusion,Isupportthestatementthat...11.Accordingtoallthereasons/conclusionsabove,itisclear/obviousthat...Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration/account,wemayreachtheconclusionthat...素材积累1.必备词块①征求某人的建议：askforsb’sadvice②在某方面给某人提建议:give/offersb.advice/tips/suggestionsonsth.③提出一些建议:makesomeadvice/suggestions④接受某人的建议:accept/take/followsb.’sadvice⑤在某方面有困难:havetrouble/difficultywithsth.⑥做某事有困难:havetrouble/difficulty(in)doingsth.⑦在某方面有问题:haveproblemswithsth.⑧在我看来:inmyopinion;personally;asfarasI'mconcerned2.必备句型(1)表明写信目的①Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavetroublein...NowI'dliketoofferyousomeadvice.②Hearingthatyouhavetroublein...,I'dliketogiveyousomeadvice./I'mverypleasedtoknowthat...Herearesomeofmysuggestions.③Learningthat...,Iamwritingtogiveyousomesuggestionsonhowtodoitwell.(2)阐述建议①Asforthesuggestionson...,firstofall,...Secondly,...Inaddition,...②FromwhereIstand,...Besides,...Lastbutnotleast,...③Foronething,...Foranother,...What'smore,...(3)表达希望①Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfultoyou./Ihopeyouwillfindmyadvicehelpful.②Ihopethatmysuggestionsprovetobeusefulinsolvingyourproblems.③Iwillbehappyifmysuggestionsturnouttobepractical.④I'llbehappyifyoucantakemyadvice/ideasintoconsideration.典例假定你是高一学生李华。班里有一名初中时一直很优秀的学生王毅,但进入高中后考试成绩不佳,他感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信:1.帮他分析原因;2.给他提出建议;3.陈述你帮助他的具体打算。注意;1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearWangYi,I'mverysorrytolearnyourpresentcondition.Yours,LiHua审题1.体裁:应用文2.人称:以第二人称为主3.时态:以一般现在时为主佳作展示DearWangYi,I'mverysorrytolearnyourpresentcondition.Inmyopinion[1],somethingmustbewrongwithyourmethodofstudies[2].Inaddition[3],youareexperiencingtoomuchpressure,whichdoesgreatharmtoyou[4]Therefore,youshouldchangeabit.First[5],youshouldfollowtheteachers,andunderstandalltheyhavetaughtinclass.Second[5],youshouldmakeyourownplan,andimproveyourselfbitbybit.Third[6],youshouldlearntorelax.Forexample[6],youcanwalk,chatafterclass,orplaytabletennissometimes.Ifyouarewillingtotalktome(7],youcancallmeorsendmeanemail.Hopeyouwillgetusedtothenewlifeandhaveyourgradesimproved[8]soon.Yours,LiHua点评 [1]用Inmyopinion加以过渡，显得自然得体，很顺畅地切入主题。[2]用somethingmustbewrongwith...锁定其中的一个原因,恰到好处。[3]Inaddition这一衔接短语较and略显高级，引出了另外一个导致成绩不佳的原因。[4]which引导的非限制性定语从句,使语句之间衔接更紧密。 [5]采用First,Second和Third这三个衔接词提出建议,使得行文层次分明。 3. [6]用Forexample引出可行性建议。[7]采用条件句配以bewillingtodosth.短语，使语气显得