2024届高三英语二轮复习写作专项读后续写 精神病画家女孩 课件

ContinuationWriting

精神病女孩（画家）LearningOjectives:1.tocombtheplotofthestorybysixelementsofnarration（记叙文）;2.toconceivecontinuationwritingbyclueswhichhidesinthestory;3.toextractthethemeofthestoryandwhatcanwelearnfromit;4.toapplywhatwelearnttowritetheremains.课堂目标：1.通过记叙文6要素梳理故事情节；2.通过前文隐藏的线索构思续写；3.提取文章主题，学习主人公的精神；4.运用所学的语料及句式结构续写故事。step1.Readfortheplot(主旨大意&情感变化）para1&2loveforpainting,butwasdiagnosedwithmentaldisease.Para3unsitablemajormadeherdropoutofcollege.Para4&5

unhappylifeaftermarriagedrovehertoreconsiderthemeaningoflife.Para1:Afterdaysofconsideration,Bazanmadeabigdecision.Para2:Newsspread4yearslaterthatBazangraduatedfromcollegewithhonors.happyunhappy/hopeless(无望的)helpless(无助的)confuseddespired/depressed/reluctant&restless(不安分的）determinded&hopefulconfidence&happyStep2:ThinkfortheplotPara1:

Afterdaysofconsideration,Bazanmadeabigdecision.Questions:①WhatbigdecisonwasmadbyBazan?决定做某事decidetodosthdeterminetodosthhavedeterminationtodosthmakeadecisiontodosthbedeterminedtodosth辞职

quitone’sjobfromsp

resignone’sjobassth实现梦想tomakeone’sdreamcometruetoachieveone’sdreamtofulfilone’sdream

tochaseone’sdream(追逐梦想）驱使某人做某事

drivesbtodosthDrivenbytheloveforpainting,shedecidedtoquitherjobasasaleclerkandreturnedtoUniversitytochaseherdream.

(亮点：ed分词短语作原因状语）例如：Borninapoorfamily,Nadiahadonlytwoyearsofschooling.②

Whatwasherson’sreactionafterhearinghismother’sdecision?AndwhataboutBazan’sfeeling?非常同意noddedgreatly令人欣慰的是toone’srelief非常开心Itseemedasifshewasonthetopoftheworld.向某人学习learnfromsb给某人树立榜样setangoodexampleforsbToherrelief,hersonnoddedgreatly,afterhearingwhatshesaid.亮点：toone’sreliefnoddedgreately间接描写代替直接描写

after+doing③HowdidBazanmakeherdreamcometrue?机会chance/opportunity为某人提供...providesb(with)sth/providesthforsb/offersbsth上学：beadmittedtoanuniversity成功的做成了某事：succeedindoingsth/wherethereisaway,thereisawill.主攻...专业majorinsth/enrollinsth报名参加：registerforsth/signupforsth专心于：beimmersedintosth/beburiedinsth/buryoneselfinsth/beabsorbedinsth/applyoneselfinsth/payattentiontosth/bedevotedto(doing)sth/devoteoneselfto(doing)sth/haveapassionforsth/bepassionateaboutsth/worktosth参加展览：join/participatein/takepartinvariousexhibitions获得荣誉receivenumeroushonors/rewards成为一夜间轰动的人物：becomeanovernighthit声名鹊起risetofame

Inthefollowingdays,shemadeeveryefforttoconsultlocalcolleges,hopingshecouldbeadmitted.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.Shesucceeded.Here,shestartedherfouryearsschooling,andwasimmersedintocollegelife.Sheattendedlotsofexhibitions,receivingnumeroushonors.亮点：非谓语动词作结果状语

连句成篇：Afterdaysofconsideration,Bazanmadeabigdecision.Drivenbytheloveforpainting,shedecidedtoquitherjobasasaleclerkandreturnedtoUniversitytochaseherdream.Toherrelief,hersonnoddedgreatlyafterhearingwhatshesaid.Inthefollowingdays,shemadeeveryefforttoconsultlocalcolleges,hopingshecouldbeadmitted.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.Shesucceeded.Here,shestartedherfouryearsschooling,andwasimmersedintocollegelife.Sheattendedlotsofexhibitions,receivingnumeroushonors.Para2:Newsspread4yearslaterthatBazangraduatedfromcollegewithhonors.译：四年后Bazan带着众多荣耀从大学毕业的消息传播开来。①whogotthenewsandwheretheycanget?Afterhearingthenews,whatdidtheylearnaboutBazane?网民：netizen单亲母亲：asinglemother创造精彩的作品：createmanywonderfulartworks激励、鼓舞某人做某事：inspiresbtodosth/encouragesbtodosthMoreandmorepeopleknewherandlearntthatshewasasinglemother,withanxiety,buthadgoneallouttostudyandcreatedmanywonderfulartworks.Herstoryinspiredeveryone.（亮点：with+名词，表特征；宾语从句；but链接的转折句；固定搭配的运用）②Accordingtothereporter,whatdidBazandoaftergraduation?从事...职业beengagedinsthbeoccupiedwithsthworkassth具有健康问题的孩子childrenwithconditionWhenaskedwhatshewoulddoaftergraduation,shetoldthereportershewouldworkedinarteducationasateachertoteachchildrenwithconditionslikeher.亮点：状语从句的省略；宾语从句，with+名词

表特征③whatcontributedtoBazane’ssuccess?(主旨升华）Itisnevertoolatetolearn.活到老学到老Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.自助者天助Betterlatethannever.亡羊补牢，为时未晚Andwhenaskedwhatmadehersucceed,shesaidthatwherethereisawill,thereisaway.Arayofsunshinecrossedherface,asshesaidthat.亮点：状语从句的省略；名言的借用；环境的烘托连句成篇：Newsspread4yearslaterthatBazangraduatedfromcollegewithhonors.Moreandmorepeopleknewherandlearntthatshewasasinglemother,withanxiety,buthadgoneallouttostudyandcreatedmanywonderfulartworks.Herstoryinspiredeveryone.Whenaskedwhatshewoulddoaftergraduation,shetoldthereportershewouldworkedinarteducationasateachertoteachchildrenwithconditionslikeher.Andwhenaskedwhatmadehersucceed,shesaidthatwherethereisawill,thereisaway.

Arayofsunshinecrossedherface,asshesaidthat.下水文：Afterdaysofconsideration,Bazanmadeabigdecision.Drivenbytheloveforpainting,shedecidedtoquitherjobasasaleclerkandreturnedtoUniversitytochaseherdream.Toherrelief,hersonnoddedgreatlyafterhearingwhatshesaid.Inthefollowingdays,shemadeeveryefforttoconsultlocalcolleges,hopingshecouldbeadmitted.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.Shesucceeded.Here,shestartedherfouryearsschooling,andwasimmersedintocollegelife.Sheattendedlotsofexhibitions,receivingnumeroushonors.Newsspread4yearslaterthatBazangraduatedfromcollegewithhonors.M