专题35 书面表达 考点3 咨询建议类-中考英语真题分项汇编（全国通用 第01期）

2023年中考英语真题分项汇编专题35书面表达考点3咨询建议类强国有我！作为祖国未来的建设者和接班人，青少年学生要努力成长为堪当大任的栋梁之材。请根据下面提示，以“Howtobegoodstudentsinthenewera”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何做一名新时代（era）的好学生。要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；词数80—100；文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。Howtobegoodstudentsinthenewera____________________________________________________________________________________________健康对每个人都很重要，我们应该学会如何保持健康。请以“Howtokeephealthy?”为题，写一篇英语短文，向学校校刊投稿。要求：1．文章必须包含以下表格中的至少4个要点信息，可适当发挥；2．文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名等信息；3．词数80左右；文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。should(√)shouldn’t(x)dosportseverydayrefusetoexercisekeepabalanceddiethavejunkfoodeatfruitandvegetablesstayuptoolatehaveenoughsleepplaycomputergamesalotkeephappysitforalongtime......Howtokeephealthy?Nowadays,peoplepaymuchmoreattentiontohealth.Itisnecessaryforeveryonetolearnsomewaystokeephealthy.____________________________________________________________________________________________王梅的英国朋友Tony要来中国学习汉语，下面是Tony给她发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容，以王梅的名义回复。Youknow,inEnglish,givennames(名字)comefirstandfamilynames(姓)comelast.HowaboutChinesenames?AndcanyouhelpmechooseaChinesenameandtellmeitsmeaning?注意：（1）回复邮件须回答所给邮件内容中的两个问题，可适当发挥。（2）回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名，所起名字只限于备选名字。（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。备选名字：王健（WangJian）；李聪（LiCong）；张友好（ZhangYouhao）HiTony,I’mveryhappytoknowthatyou’llcometoChinatolearnChinese.____________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoseeingyou.Yours,WangMei假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困扰；自己体型微胖，想通过节食减肥，以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对这问题的见解。参考词汇:diet(v.节食),appearance(n.外貌),innerbeauty(内在美)DearLiHua,IhavebeenabitlargerthanothergirlssinceIwaslittle.Foralongtime,thisreallytroubledme.IfeelmoreworriedbecauseIwillstartmyseniorhighschoollifesoon!IamafraidthatthestudentsinthenewschoolwilllaughatmebecauseIam“big”.Idecidetolookmorebeautiful,soIwanttoloseweightbydieting.Whatdoyouthinkofmyplan?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Amy要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2—3分；4.80词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearAmy,

Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyousaidyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.____________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua假定你是李平，请你对英国朋友Jack的邮件进行回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。TO

LiPing@SUBJECT

CUsoon!HiLiPingNextweekI’llbewithyouinHangzhou.Ican’twait!It’sgoingtobesocool!Wecandolotsofexcitingthingstogether!Ineedtopackformytrip.WhatshouldIbringwithme?Isthereaswimmingpoolortenniscenternearby?I’dliketogetyouagiftfromwhereIlive.Whatwouldyoulikemetogetyou?I’msoexcitedaboutthetrip!Seeyousoon.JackHiJack,____________________________________________________________________________________________LiPing通过阅读理解A篇我们感受到户外活动的有趣。本月底你校将举办一次户外活动，为了更好地开展这次活动，校英语社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是张华，请根据表格内容写一篇短文（先介绍你喜欢的户外活动，再说明理由，最后就活动安排提出合理的建议），向社团投稿。写作要点参考句型1.Whatoutdooractivitydoyoulike?We’dbetter…Maybewecan…It’llbebetterif……2.Whydoyoulikeit?3.Howdoyouarrange(安排)it?(when,where,whattodo…)备注：如果出现地名，请以East________代替，例如：EastMountain…要求：1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数80-120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearSir,I’mhappytoheartherewillbeanoutdooractivityinourschoolattheendofthismonth.____________________________________________________________________________________________Hopemysuggestionshelp.Yours,ZhangHua漫漫人生，有得有失。幸运的是，我们拥有许多美好。活在当下，请珍惜身边的一切美好。假如你是李华，你们学校将于下周举行以“珍惜”为主题的演讲比赛，请根据以下图示完成一篇英语演讲稿。要求：1.字迹工整，书写规范，包含全部图示要点，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称；3.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；4.请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上的相应位置。参考词汇：value

(v.珍惜)

respect

(v.尊敬)relatives

(n.家人)

safety

(n.安全)ValueImportantThingsAroundUsGoodmorning,everyone!IamLiHua.Lifeiscolourful.Therearemanyimportantthingsweshouldvalueinourdailylife.________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforyourlistening.你校英文报就“网络安全”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示，以“StaySafeOnline”为题投稿。注意：1.请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格(一空一词)；2.须全面反映图文信息；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.词数80左右。________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案例文Howtobegoodstudentsinthenewera.The21stcenturyisatimefullofchallengesandchances.Itisimportantforustoknowhowtobegoodstudentsinthisnewera.TodayI’mgladtosharemyideasabouthowtobegoodstudents.First,weshouldloveourcountryaswellasourfamily.Wemustkeepourpromiseandbethankfultopeoplewhohelpedus.Weshouldbefriendlywithourclassmates.Second,weshouldstudyhardandbecreative.Weshouldhelpeachotherandlearnfromeachother.Third,weshouldtakemorephysicalexercisetokeepourbodyandmindhealthy.Weshouldalsodohouseworkfrequentlyandlearntobeindependent.Aslongasweworkhard,wewillbeexcellentmiddleschoolstudents.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步，从品德方面介绍如何成为好学生；第二步，从学业方面介绍如何成为好学生；第三步，从生活方面介绍如何成为好学生。[亮点词汇]①aswellas以及②helpeachother互相帮助③learntodo学习做[高分句型]①Wemustkeepourpromiseandbethankfultopeoplewhohelpedus.（who引导的定语从句）②Aslongasweworkhard,wewillbeexcellentmiddleschoolstudents.（aslongas引导的条件状语从句）例文Howtokeephealthy?Nowadays,peoplepaymuchmoreattentiontohealth.Itisnecessaryforeveryonetolearnsomewaystokeephealthy.Weshoulddosportseveryday.Weshouldn’trefusetoexercise.Runningforanhoureverydayisgoodforhealth.Weshouldkeepabalanceddiet.Eatmorefruitandvegetables.Weshouldn’thavejunkfood,becausetheyarebadforhealth.Wehadbetternotstayuptoolate.Gettingenoughsleepishelpful.Weshouldn’tpalycomputergamesalot.Itisbadforoureyes.Sittingforalongtimeisalsobadforourhealth.Wemayfeelpaininmyshoulderandback.Weshouldhaveahappymood.Wecankeephappybylisteningtomusicandtalkingtoourfriends.【详解】[总体分析]题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，引出本文“如何保持健康”的主题；第二步，根据提示材料提出建议。[亮点词汇]①payattentionto注意②keephealthy保持健康③refusetodosth.拒绝做某事④keepabalanceddiet保持均衡饮食⑤bebadfor对……有坏处[高分句型]①Itisnecessaryforeveryonetolearnsomewaystokeephealthy.（动词不定式作主语）②Weshouldn’thavejunkfood,becausetheyarebadforhealth.（because引导原因状语从句）例文HiTony,I’mveryhappytoknowthatyou’llcometoChinatolearnChinese.ThereisnodoubtthatitisveryimportantandusefultolearnChinesewell.Wealwaysputourfamilynamefirst.Theyarefromourfamily,andit’ssurelyourChinesetradition.Thengivennamescomelast.Secondly,IpreferLiCongasyourChinesename.Ithinkthisnamerepresentsintelligenceandcleverness.Justlikeyou!AsfarasIamconcerned,thenamesarethecultureofacountry.Agoodnamestandsforagoodluck.Lookingforwardtoseeingyou.Yours,WangMei【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求针对邮件内容给出答复，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明学好中文的必要性；第二步，介绍中国的姓名文化并为对方推荐一个名字；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①importantanduseful重要的和有用的②Chinesetradition中国传统③standfor代表[高分句型]ThereisnodoubtthatitisveryimportantandusefultolearnChinesewell.（Thereisnodoubtthat...句型）②Ithinkthisnamerepresentsintelligenceandcleverness.（省略that的宾语从句）例文DearAmy,

Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyousaidyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.Asyoumentionedintheletter,Ihavesomeadviceforyou.Firstly,thereisnoneedtocareaboutwhatothersthinkofyou.Themostimportantthingistobeconfidentandpositive,asitwillhelpyouhavecouragetofaceandovercomeyourtrouble.Innerbeautyismoreimportantthanappearance.Secondly,keepahealthydiet.Stayawayfromhigh-fatfoodandeatmorefruitandvegetablesinstead.Abalanceddietisveryimportantforlosingweight.Thirdly,doingproperexerciseisnecessary.You’dbettergetupearlyinthemorninganddosomesportsregularly.Themoreyouexercise,thehealthieryou’llbe.Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.Yours,

LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据邮件内容提出建议，并适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，提出要给Amy的建议；第二步，具体阐述给Amy同学的三个建议；第三步，总结全文，表达期望。[亮点词汇]①thereisnoneedtodosth没必要做某事②stayawayfrom…与……保持距离③havecouragetodosth有勇气做某事[高分句型]①Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.（宾语从句）②Stayawayfromhigh-fatfoodandeatmorefruitandvegetablesinstead.（祈使句）例文HiJack,Iamsogladtoreceiveyouremail.Ican’twaittoseeyou,too.ItwillbeveryhotinHangzhounextweek,soyoushouldbringsomeT-shirtsandshortsaswellassomesunscreen.Thereisabigswimmingpoolnearmyhouse.Wecanswiminitforfree.Inaddition,thereisatenniscenterthreekilometersfrommyhome,sowecanalsogotoplaytennis.IlikeEnglishlocalproductsverymuch.Ifitisconvenientforyou,pleasebringmesome.Iamlookingforwardtomeetingyou.LiPing【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步，首先表示自己很开心收到对方的邮件；第二步，具体阐述他需要带的东西以及介绍家附近的游泳池或网球中心；第三步，最后介绍自己想要对方带什么。[亮点词汇]①can’twaittodo迫不及待做②aswellas和，以及③lookforwardto期待[高分句型]①ItwillbeveryhotinHangzhounextweek,soyoushouldbringsomeT-shirtsandshortsaswellassomesunscreen.（so引导并列句）②Ifitisconvenientforyou,pleasebringmesome.（if引导的条件状语从句）例文1：Dearsir,I’mhappytoheartherewillbeanoutdooractivityinourschoolattheendofthismonth.Ilikeclimbingmountainswithmyclassmates.Wecanenjoythebeautyofnature.Wecanalsomakefriendsandhelpeachotherontheway.Tomaketheactivitymoreinteresting,IhopetogotoEastMountainonJune25th.Sinceit’salittlefar,we’dbettermeetattheschoolgateat7:30a.m.andgotherebybus.Wecancollectsomehistorystoriesaboutthefamousmountainsothatwecansharethemtogether.It’llbeniceifwecantrysomelocalfoodforlunchthere.Intheafternoon,wecanpickuptherubbishtoprotecttheenvironment.Thenwecangohomeat4:30p.m.We’resuretohavegreatfun.Hopemysuggestionshelp.Yours,ZhangHua例文2：Dearsir,I’mhappytoheartherewillbeanoutdooractivityinourschoolattheendofthismonth.Iliketravellingtothecountrysidewithmyclassmates.Icannotonlyenjoyfreshairbutalsotakeexercise.It’sagoodexperiencetolearnaboutnature.Tomakethetripmoreinteresting,I’dliketosharemysuggestions.Firstly,IhopetogotoEastFarmonJune25thbecauseit’snotfar.Secondly,we’dbetterdosomefarmwork.Wecantalkwiththefarmerssothatwecanknowaboutdifferentplants.Afterthat,forlunch,maybewecancookandeatthevegetableswhichgrowthere.Finally,it’llbebetterifwecanmakefriendswiththechildreninthecountrysideintheafternoon.I’msurewewillhaveanicetime.Hopemysuggestionshelp.Yours,ZhangHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍你喜欢的户外活动。第二步，说明理由。第三步，就活动安排提出合理的建议。[亮点词汇]①thebeautyofnature自然之美②hopetodo希望做某事③pickup拾起，捡起[高分句型]①Sinceit’salittlefar,we’dbettermeetattheschoolgateat7:30a.m.andgotherebybus.(原因状语从句)②It’llbeniceifwecantrysomelocalfoodforlunchthere.(if引导条件状语从句)例文ValueImportantThingsAroundUsGoodmorning,everyone!IamLiHua.Lifeiscolourful.Therearemanyimportantthingsweshouldvalueinourdailylife.First,weshouldvalueourlives.Weshouldstayawayfromdangerousthingslikefire.Weshouldpayattentiontooursafety.Second,weshouldvalueourhealth.Weshoulddomuchexercisetomakeushealthy.Weshouldalsogetenoughsleepsothatwecandoeverythingwell.Thirdly,weshouldvalueourrelativeandfriends.Weshouldshowloveandrespectfortheelderly.Wehadbetterspendmoretimecommunicatingwiththem.Forfriends,weshouldtrusteachotherandhelptheminneed.Weshouldgetonwellwiththem.Finally,weshouldvaluethetimeandmakegoodplansforourstudy.Don’twastetimeonuselessthings.Thanksforyourlistening.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；②时态：时态为