高考二轮复习英语课件满分练11短文改错书面表达

满分练(十一)短文改错+书面表达ⅠⅡ短文改错(2023四川内江三模)Lastsummer,IwenttoDjerba,Tunisia.ItwastrueoneofthemostattractivedestinationIhadevervisited.ImustadmitthatIhaveneverseensuchabeautifulcoastlinebefore.Ispentmostofmydayswalkingonthebeachbutenjoyingthesunandthepeacefulsoundofthewaves.Onmyfourdaythere,Itookatourandvisitedsomelocalattractions,includedtheElGhribaSynagogue.Andthatwasunforgettableexperience.Overall,IfeltsoluckytobetherebecauseofeverythingwasgoodthanIcouldeverimagine.I’mlookingforwardtoexploremoreofthisbeautifulcountrynexttime.ⅠⅡ[语篇解读]本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要描述了作者去杰尔巴岛旅行的经历。1.第二句:true→truly

考查副词。分析句子结构可知,此处要用副词truly作状语,修饰be动词was。故将true改为truly。2.第二句:destination→destinations

考查名词的数。根据“one

of

the

most

attractive”可知,后面加名词复数,表示“最……的之一”。故将destination改为destinations。3.第三句:have→had

考查动词的时态。根据句意可知,“承认”是过去的动作,“看见”这一动作发生在“承认”之前,故用过去完成时。故将have改为had。ⅠⅡ4.第四句:but→and

考查连词。分析句意可知,“walking

on

the

beach”和“enjoying

the

sun

and

the

peaceful

sound

of

the

waves”是并列关系,不是转折关系。故将but改为and。5.第五句:four→fourth

考查数词。根据句意可知,“在第四天,参观了一些景点”,用序数词表示。故将four改为fourth。6.第五句:included→including

考查非谓语动词。句中已有谓语动词“took”和“visited”,因此include应用非谓语形式,“local

attractions”和“include”之间是主动关系,故用现在分词。故将included改为including。ⅠⅡ7.第六句:unforgettable前面加an

考查冠词。泛指“一次经历”,要用不定冠词修饰名词,unforgettable以元音音素开头,需用不定冠词an。故在unforgettable前面加an。8.第七句:because后的of删掉考查连词。根据句意可知,because引导了原因状语从句,because

of后只能跟名词、短语等作宾语,不能接从句。故将because后的of删掉。9.第七句:good→better

考查形容词比较级。根据“than

I

could

ever

imagine”可知,要用形容词比较级。故将good改为better。10.第八句:explore→exploring

考查非谓语动词。look

forward

to

doing

sth.表示“期待做某事”,用动词-ing形式作宾语。故将explore改为exploring。ⅠⅡ书面表达(2023四川自贡二诊)假定你校英文报正在以“养成好习惯,促进我健康”为主题开展征文活动。请写一篇短文,向报社投稿,内容包括:1.介绍一项你的好习惯;2.该习惯对健康的影响;3.呼吁养成健康习惯。注意:1.词数100左右;2.请在相应位置作答。ⅠⅡGood

Habits,Good

Health

ⅠⅡGood

Habits,Good

HealthNowI’veformedagoodhabittoimprovemyhealth.Thatis,Iplaybasketballwithmyfriendsontheplaygroundfor40minuteseverydayafterschool.However,ayearago,becauseoftheheavylearningtasks,Ialwaysstayedintheclassroom,notparticipatinginafter-schoolactivitiestorelaxmyself.Asaresult,IfoundIcouldn’tconcentrateonmyschoolworkandalwaysfelttired.IrealizedIhadtoadjustmylifestyle.Then,IbeganplayingbasketballsinceIlikethissport.Now,Ifeelenergetic,andmylearningefficiencyissatisfactory.Astrongnationisbasedonitsstrongyouths.Asseniorthreestudents,weshoulddevelophealthyhabitsandhaveahealthybody.ⅠⅡ1.词汇积累养成:form→develop任务:task→assignment因此:asaresult→asaconseque