高中作文提分技巧PPT演示课件

.,1,方向正确,努力才有意义.方向正确,目标才能快速到达.,.,2,成功作文之我见,准确的审题清晰的提纲规范的语言仔细的检查整洁的书写,.,3,准确的审题,内容:即写什么,对中英文提示,图示要认真思 索,明确要求.形式:即用何种体裁,要清楚几种文体之间的区别.细节:字数、人称、是否要标题等。,.,4,清晰的提纲,文章要有层次，各段的主题句是否合理，是否紧扣主题。 常见的结构有：,表达意见,客观陈述主题内容,一部分人的观点，另一部分观点,自己的观点,分析问题结构,是什么,为什么,怎么办,.,5,清晰的提纲,不要遗漏 任何信息要点句与句之间，段与段与段之间注意过渡，并且过渡符合逻辑。,启、承、转、合四步骤,启-创造良好的开端,承-承上启下,转-巧妙转折过渡,合-完美结束全文,.,6,启-创造良好的开端,常用表达启的过渡词语和词组In the first placeFirst of all Firstly Generally speaking To start with To begin with,常用表达启的句型有As is known to all As we all know As the proverb saysIt is said that As a new way of It is clear /obvious There have been many changes,.,7,承-承上启下,常用表达承的过渡词语和词组Secondly, in addition ,Besides ,furthermore Moreover,whats more ,for example ,In other words,obviouslyAt the same time,常用表达承的句型有Compared with thatAs far as I know It is true that It can be easily proved that The reason why There is no doubt that It is no wonder that Whats more serious is that,.,8,转-巧妙转折过渡,常用表达转的过渡词语和词组 But however on the other hand on the contrary in any case or While in spite of Regardless of, instead,常用表达转的句型有Every coin has two sides.But for Another example is that Taking everything into consideration Thats why I feel that,.,9,合-完美结束全文,常用表达合的过渡词语和词组In a word in general In short above allFinally ,in conclusion At last as a result On the whole In summary,常用表达合的句型有Something must be done to It can be safely concluded from -thatIn my opinion We can draw the conclusion thatIt can be briefly summed up as follows,.,10,规范的语言,用自己熟悉的句型和词组:保证所写句子的正确,尽量使用常见的单词,短语,同时,避免生搬硬造汉式英语,避免原创英语,避免使用偏词.在正确的前提下,尽量使用高级表达:使用高级词汇,必要的情况下使用从句结构,同一个词避免重复,学会变通.,.,11,作文中常见的错误,两个典型错误,There be 结构后加动词(应改为从句或非谓语动词)More and more 的正确表达(better and better),其他常见错误,帮助 with the help of表发生不能用被动 happen break out take place实现realise come true倒装 only后加状语才能倒装,.,12,常见的高级变通,1.They swam to the bank of the river .(toward)2.I like swimming best. (My favorite sport is swimming.)3.You can find my house easily. (You will have no trouble finding my home .)4.I like listening to popular music. (enjoy)5.In our school ,there are 26 classrooms. (Our school is made up of 26 classrooms.),toward,.,13,常见的高级变通,6.I decided to be a doctor when I grow up. (have made up my mind)7.The boy doesnt like to clean his room. ( is unwilling to )8.My hometown is in the south of China (is located in) 9.There are many trees and flowers in our school. (Our school is covered with trees and flowers.),.,14,常见的高级变通,10.One summer holiday, my parents went to shanghai .They took my sister with them. (One summer holiday ,my parents went to shanghai ,taking my sister along.)11.My brave dog saved my little sister.( It was my brave dog that saved my little sister.)12.My father sat in the sofa. He was smoking and reading a newspaper. (My father was smoking in the sofa with a newspaper in his hand.),.,15,例文赏析,Today nothing special happened .I really have nothing to write about .As a result ,I decide not to write anything today .Im afraid that our English teacher wont be happy and perhaps he will scold me for not finishing my assignment.,.,16,仔细的检查,体裁格式是否正确合理.内容是否有遗漏.语言是否有规范,准确,时态是否正确一致,主动被动是否混淆.句子是否缺少成分,特别是动词.动词,名词的形式是否正确.单词拼写,大小写,标点符号 是否正确,字数是否合乎要求.,.,17,整洁的书写,书法口诀横平竖直点要圆,笔画流畅点丰满,先直后弯写好撇,斜度一致才美观,连笔书写速度快,点画横画最后添,书写到位很重要,慢中求好讲规范,好中求快多多练,书写高分笑开颜.,卷面书写整洁,一目了然做到左齐右不齐,尽量少用连字符.首字母大写要明显,分段要清晰.字母大写适当,单词之间隔一字母左右的距离.,.,18,持之以恒的积累和训练,多背例文,学会欣赏例文.把不同的文章类型分清,并了解每种文体的写作要求及特点,做到有的放矢.勤动手勤创作,可多尝试同学之间相互监督,批改,共同进步.,.,19,成功是追求完美,勤奋工作,从失败中学习,忠于职守和坚持不懈的综合结晶.,.,20,高考专家预测高考英语作文,高考英语作文题目经常与考生直接关心的社会热点话题无直接联系，但仔细琢磨，又会发现一些联系，就是说“热点归热点，关键找角度”。 不要身陷逐字逐句“英汉对号”式的字面翻译，要把表达的主动权始终握在自己手里。,.,21,高考专家预测高考英语作文,有关“跨文化”话题 例：假设你叫李华，你的外国朋友John想了解中国的春节，请根据以下提纲，给他写一封短信：1、春节在中国人中的地位2、春节前，人们3、春节期间，人们参考词汇：对联couplet 爆竹firecracker,.,22,How time flies! Four moths have passed since we saw each other last time. I cannot helpbut miss you. You asked me about Chinese Spring Festival. Now I would like to tell yousomething about it.The Spring Festival is a Chinese traditional festival. It is the most important and enjoyable one. A few days before the festival, houses are cleaned and red couplets are put up on the doors of every household. They are said to frighten away the ghosts. On that day, people are dressed up. Firecrackers ring out in the air, which adds to the atmosphere of the festival. People after a years hard work begin to relax and visit one another. Presents and dinners are given to celebrate the happy reunion of friends and relatives. Families get together. They have jiaozi and enjoy the New Year TV show. Customs may vary from place to place, but the same happy atmosphere is to be found everywhere in the country.Now, I hope you have some idea of Chinese Spring Festival.Best wishes,.,23,有关“财富、健康、幸福”话题,根据下面提示，写一篇财富与快乐的短文。(1)一些人认为财富能带来快乐。 (2)另一些人认为钱多了不是一件好事。 (3)提出自己的看法。 注意：单词数120个左右。,.,24,Some people think wealth can bring happiness to them. It is true that most of them try to acquire wealth by means of honest labor. They work hard and overcome many difficulties. After doing this, they feel very happy and pleased. Even their spending money is a kind of happiness。But some people believe wealth cant bring them happiness. For example, when one gets a fortune, the family members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth with him. And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more. And sometimes even appear bloody fight and killing. What a terrible result!In my opinion, I think there is no doubt that wealth brings happiness, especially in the modern society. If you have money you can lead a comfortable and colorful life. But we should take a proper attitude towards wealth. Remember： money is not everything。,.,25,有关“教育、校园类”话题,假设你叫李华，你将作为高三毕业生代表，根据以下要点在毕业晚会上用英文作一简短的告别演讲：1、对三年高中生活的怀念；2、对老师的感谢；3、对母校的祝福。,.,26,My teachers and fellow students,In a couple of weeks, well say goodbye to our mother school. How time flies! Now Its really hard for me to put my feelings into words. The past three years has been really a wonderful journey with you guys, full of laughter and tears.To make the journey safe and fruitful, our great teachers contributed their time, energy, love and the whole heart. Here, we are extremely grateful for all that you, dear teachers, have done for us.Itll soon be the time for us to depart, though unwillingly. But it is not the end. It just means that were going to begin a new journey.Finally, on behalf of all the graduates present here, let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers. Thank you!,.,27,有关“环境友好型、资源节约型社会”话题,近日你所在的学校开展了“为建设节约型社会献一计”主题活动，同学们提出了许多建议。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文向English Horizons杂志编辑部投稿：有人建议你的建议 1。不浪费粮食和纸张2。尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋3。毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用？注意：1。不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节；2。词数：120字左右，开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数；3。参考词汇：方便筷disposable chopsticks,.,28,Recently，there has been an activity of “doing your bit for an energy-saving society” in our school. Our schoolmates are highly concerned about the increasing lack of energy and provide their own suggestions.Some students suggest that we shouldnt waste any food or paper, though they appear very easy to get. Meanwhile, some other students think it advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. Besides, it is also strongly recommended that those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates, which are still in good condition, not be thrown but recycled.Actually, there are still quite a lot that we can easily do。Such as, try to take buses or ride bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. All of these will definitely help to build an energy-saving society.,.,29,低碳生活 low -carbon life,地球温室效应是全世界人类共同关注的 焦点，如今世界各国都在倡导低碳生活以减少二氧化碳的排放，请写一篇关于从我做起的英语文章。参考消息：1每周有一天吃素 2不使用电器，关掉他们，包括灯。 3尽量使用自己的杯子等餐具。 4不要购买不必要的衣物。 5外出尽量走路或骑自行车 6取消不必要的打印工作,.,30,Every one of us is responsible for the greenhouse gases we give out in our daily life.Therefore ,fighting against climate changes is going to take efforts of everyone on the planet. In my opinion,choose one day each week when you dont eat meat,for meat uses up lots of energy and it takes a long time to produce .And switch off all appliances when you are not using them,including lights.Meanwhile ,we should try to use our own cups ,bowls and chopsticks instead of those made of paper or wood.Dont purchase unnecessary clothes,and be careful about the materials you buy.When we go out ,walking or cycling is the best choice.Only print things out when necessary ,and print double-sided paper to reduce the gases. Last but not least, make it our duty to live a low-carbon life and try our best to protest the earth,which is what we should always keep in mind from now on.,.,31,； / BT下载 nih83qfi 湖广！不明真相的福晋直接就将责任推到了年二的头上，令他刚刚提出的所谓年氏不守妇道的理由根本就站不住脚。可是，不寻到年氏的错处来他岂肯善罢甘休？“不管亮工是否跟爷禀报，年氏作为爷的侧福晋，她