高中英语掌握写作技巧，增添表达亮点

高中英语掌握写作技巧，增添表达亮点山东省高考英语作文各档次的给分范围和要求第一档（优秀） 26分 -29分紧扣主题；覆盖所有要点，内容充实；语法结构多样，词汇丰富，有效使用连接成分，显示出较强的语言运用表达能力；语言小错不超过 4个，不能有一处大错。第二档（良好） 22分 -25分紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，语言有少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达；大错不超过 3个。第三档（一般） 18分 -21分紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，能够表达基本内容；语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确。Dear Tom , It has been a long time since I met you last time . I miss you very much . How are you ?Im very grateful to you for your help with my English when I studied in your country . I wouldnt speak English so fluently now without you . So now I cant thank you enough .By the way , do you keep in touch with Mr. Smith ? Is he fit ? Im very concerned about him . If you could visit him , please remember me to him . Furthermore , would you mind making me know how to contact him ?Eventually, Im glad to tell you our Spring Festival , the most important one in China , is coming . And I remember you once told me you like China . Would you like to come here and enjoy the Chinese traditional customs and culture ? I will expect your coming .Best wishes ! Yours, Li HuaGroup I like reading while my brother likes watching television. I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.Group There will be an increase in the number of peoples jobs There will be an increase in the number of jobs for people in Beijing.availableGroup It will have an important effect on the development of Beijing. It will have a(n) effect on the development of Beijing.Group It is very useful to practise English every day . It is to practise English every day .of great value /of great help /of great importancesignificant /far-reaching /profound / vitalof great/vital useGroup 5 He told me that the question was now being discussed. He told me that the question was now .Group 6 Suddenly I had a good idea. Suddenly I a good idea. A good idea me.came up withoccurred tounder discussion. under repair / control /consideration/constructionGroup 7 He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up. He has to be a teacher when he grows up.Group 8 Last Sunday we had a good time in the park Last Sunday we in the parkenjoyed ourselves / had funmade up his mind /determined At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we sang and danced. We played happily. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing.have fun doing2.他站在那儿，什么也不干。 He stood there doing nothing .He stood there and (he) did nothing .3.人们说 中国每年有 成千上万 的人 死于吸烟 . People say that tens of thousands of people die from smoking every year in China .（宾语从句）Tens of thousands of people are said to die from smoking every year in China .（被动语态）Its said that tens of thousands of people die from smoking every year in China . （主语从句）4.青岛是一个美丽的城市 , 它 有百年的历史 .Qingdao is a beautiful city and it has a history of one hundred years. （并列句）Qingdao is a beautiful city, which has a history of one hundred years.（非限制性定语从句）Qingdao is a beautiful city with a history ofone hundred years. （ with +宾语）Qingdao is a beautiful city （ dating back to/dating from) one hundred years ago.（ 非谓语）Voices from experts阅卷老师在评阅时最注重的是文章中的亮点，根据语言使用情况，亮点的多少而定出档次，所以考生在书面表达上的亮点是取得优秀的关键，亮点主要包括：一、语言地道、词汇丰富；二、语法结构多样；三、文章连贯自然。*不要刻意追求高级词汇和复杂结构。注意Experts:个别考生片面追求花哨文字，结果造出一些错误百出的句子，这是写作的一大忌。高考写作时应尽可能运用自己熟悉的词汇和句式，尽量避免错误的出现。一篇文章即便用的词汇再高级、语法结构再复杂，若是满篇小错，阅卷老师也不会给文章一个较高档次的分值的。the China Pavilion2010年世博会将于 5月 1日 -10月 31日上海召开，请根据以下要点描述上海有关情况。（请用一句话描述每一个要点）1、上海是一座有着 700多年历史的城市， 占地面积 为 6340平方公里，是我国最大的城市。2、上海位于黄埔江畔 ，交通便利。3、中国馆由中国国家馆、中国地区馆、港澳台馆三部分组成，是世博园中 最引人注目 的建筑。4、上海 市民 正 积极准备迎接 全世界人民的到来。参考词汇：世博园： the Expo Site 中国馆 ： the China Pavilion 中国国家馆 : the Chinese National Pavilion 中国地区馆 : the Chinese Provinces Pavilion 港澳台馆 : the Pavilion 0f Hong Kong、 Macao and Taiwan市民： citizen 1、上海是一座 有着 700多年历史 的城市， 占地面积 为 6340平方公里，是我国 最大的 城市。Shanghai , the largest city of China , which covers an area of 6,340 square kilometers , has a history of more than 700 years .2、上海 位于 黄埔江畔 ，交通便利。Shanghai lies on the Huangpu River , making /which makes it convenient for people to arrive .Shanghai lies on the Huangpu River with a convenient transportation.3、中国馆 由 中国国家馆、中国地区馆、港澳台馆三部分 组成 , 是世博园中最引人注目的建筑 。The China Pavilion, the most attractive building in the Expo Site ,is made up of / consists of / comprises the Chinese National Pavilion、 the Chinese Provinces Pavilion and Hongkong,Macao and Taiwan.4、上海市民正 积极准备迎接 全世界人民的到来。Shanghai citizens are doing what they can to welcome the people from all over the world .Shanghai citizens are doing all / everything they can to welcome the people from all over the world .陕西卷假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上，你看到一个名叫Grown-up 中学生发帖（ post）寻求帮助。请根据帖子内容、写作要点和要求回帖。Grown-up Post at 18-5- 20:08 1Hi , everyone, Im 17 years old and I am going to university this autumn . But my mother continues to treat me as a seven-year old kid .What should I do ? TOP(last topic / next topic) + Reply + New 写作要点：1、告诉 Grown-up要理解父母； 2、给 Grown-up 提出解决问题的具体建议。Version 1Hello , Grown-up, Im sorry to know that you have difficulty in getting along with your mother . But I can understand you just because the problem you are facing is very common among our teenagers Version 2Hello , Grown-up, After reading your post , I understand your trouble because Im also a boy of your age . Its necessary to do something to solve the problem between you and your mother . Here are some suggestions for you .范文开头句 范文结尾句Version 1I believe you will send us the good news that you are expecting before long if you follow my advice .Version 2Good luck to you !Version 3Try your best and Im sure you will get on well with your parents . 好的开头和好的结尾会首先吸引阅卷老师的注意。1.开头要紧扣主题，开门见山。2. 尽量用一到两句话引出主体部分。3.结尾要短但要具有鼓舞、激励或建设性。 如果中间内容抓住要点表述正确，再恰当地使用一些过渡性词语，使文章结构严谨、自然流畅，文章的总体档次就上去了。Voices from experts09年全国各地高考范文开头句统计09江西Everyone knows that a good mood is very important for us whoever we are or wherever we are .09湖南 1How eager Im to share my experience of my first class in the middle school .09湖南 2I cant wait to tell you my experience of my first class as a teacher .09福建Im very glad to receive our letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well .09湖北Im writing to you for the mobile phone I bought on 20th April ,2008 at Tele Mall .09全国Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street . Here is something about it . 09重庆Im a Chinese student from Xin Hua Middle School , and I have learnt your website is collecting topics .09年全国各地高考范文结尾句统计 09全国 1Try your best ,and Im looking forward to your outstanding performance .09江苏To make matter even worse ,it might also have a bad