金榜2018高考英语写作素材超级资料包

-精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 1 金榜 2018 高考英语写作素材超级资 料包 高考英语书面表达分类模板 all the time.What a wonderful weekend we had! 叙事类 We enjoyed ourselves very much. 外出活动、欣赏美景 Through these out- of class activities we can We decided to go out for a picnic. learn a lot of things that cant be learned I had a pleasant outing with some of my in class. classmates today. Although we were tired, we felt very happy. Early in the morning, we set off for the farm I think its our duty to cover our country for a visit. with green. When we reached the farm, we were given a warm -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 2 意外事故、天灾人祸 welcome. I was walking along the street when a They showed us around the farm , where we saw many kinds One day something unpleasant happened.of plants. The girl fell off her bike and was badly hurt. We caught sight of a stream with green grass Fortunately, the injured people were sent to and beautiful flowers on both sides. hospital without delay. We were completely amazed at the wonder and An elderly man was hit by a car while he was the greatness of nature. He fell down to the ground with a cry. We jumped and shouted like innocent children. It was soon found out that the driver had Once on the top of the hill/The moment we got drunk too much wine before driving. to the top of the hill, we were deeply The accident delayed all the traffic for an struck/attracted by the beautiful scenery. hour and caused the -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 3 damage of $80,000 How we enjoyed the beautiful views from the Lots of people lost their lives in the top ! floods. After being divided into groups, we set to The big floods, which occurred in 1998, work at once. caused great losses. Some of us were getting water, some A big fire broke out in an office building cutting the meat and vegetables, and others in a busy street. The cause of the fire has sitting on the grass enjoying music. been unknown. It is being investigated.Birds were singing sweetly in the trees and The fire lasted about two hours and was butterflies were dancing gracefully in the finally put out in the afternoon. garden/fields. As a result, the three-storied building was When lunch time came, we sat on the grassland, destroyed, 50 people were killed, and more eating and drinking happily. than 200 were injured. -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 4 The meal was so delicious that we enjoyed it Up to the present, the cause of the accident very much. is still unknown. We sang and danced together to the music. 助人为乐、 舍己救人 Three hours had passed before we knew it. Without thinking about her own safety, she The time passed quickly before we knew it. rushed out and pulled him back. It was time for us to go back when the sun He hurried to school, reaching the started to go down. schoolyard quite out of breath. I spent the whole afternoon with our cousins, She told the teacher what had happened to her enjoying the fine scenery and fresh air in on the way to school. the country. The blind man was out of danger, but she lost At about four oclock in the afternoon, we her life./got injured. said goodbye to them He was praised for what he had done. -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 5 At four oclock in the afternoon we had to She offered us some gifts, but we refused to return. accept them. They came out to see us until we disappeared They all thanked him for his help. in the distance. Wondering what to do, Tom saw a policeman. On the way back, we were laughing and talking We hurried to the policeman for help. He will always be remembered as a hero. Miss Zhang is such a good teacher that we all 人物写照、生平事迹 love her very much. He was from a poor peasants family. Such was Elbert Einstein, a man of great He is about 1.72 meters in height achievements.By the age of 14, he had taught himself 议论文 advanced mathematics. 规劝恶习、见解评说 She is already in her fifties, but she -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 6 looks Different people have got different younger for her age. attitudes towards failure. He is short and thin with a pair of thick Different people have different opinions glasses. about smoking. She is tall and slim with big dark eyes and Opinions are divided on the question. black hair. 60% of the students are against the idea of My English teacher, Miss Zhang, is a entrance fee. middle-aged woman. On the other hand, 40% think that fees should She often helps those who have difficulty in be charged. doing their homework. There are always two aspects to any With her help, I have caught up with my situation. -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 7 classmates. Everything lives with opposite forces. The At the age of eight he became a member of the same can be said about modern technology, diving team in Guangdong Province. A few such as Internet. years later, he won a gold medal at the 11th Some people seem to Asian Games and became a world Champion. think/believe/hold the view that smoking isHe has his own way of teaching. an enjoyment. But in fact, smoking does great He has much knowledge and good at teaching. harm to peoples health. All these years he has been working hard. We must try to persuade people to give up Many times he has been praised for his smoking. excellent work. -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 8 It is investigated that 30% of the computers He gets on very well with us students. are used to play games. He is not only our good teacher but also our According to a recent investigation, ?good friend. Playing games on computers can be a waste of He is honest and always ready to help others. time. That s why we made him monitor. Its been proved that early rising can make We all considered her pronunciation to be the people full of energy. best of all. Early rising helps to keep fit. He is a worthy person for us to learn from. As the English proverb says, “Early to bed He graduated from Qinghua University in and early to rise, make a man healthy, 1982. wealthy and wise.” An American company wanted to -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 9 employ him with Experts suggest that people should have high pay, but he refused. regular sports every day. He received a doctors degree in 1988. Study shows that cigarette smoking can cause He is strict with us and careful in his work. cancers. In addition to health problems, there are other reasons to give up smoking. From the above, I come to the conclusion that smoking does great harm to our health. From now on, we ought to break away from the bad habit and form a good one. Millions of smokers die from illness caused by smoking tobacco. My suggestions are as follows. As future builders of our country, we should make full use of our time to work hard ,and do things to -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 10 benefit our country. As we all know, spending too much time on TV may have bad effects on our work and health, especially on our eyes. Therefore, we should be aware of when to watch, how to watch, and what to watch. There are many ways of keeping good health. Nowadays, taxies bring people a lot of convenience, but also cause a lot of trouble. Regulations should be laid down for taxi drivers. Now more and more students are getting near-sighted in schools, because they have paid little attention to the care of their eyes. 写作的 七项基本原则 一、长短句原则工作还得一张一 驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一 个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到 画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句 放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题： -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 11 As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿 挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！ 强烈建议：在文章第一段用一长 一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分， 要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在 阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句 群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文 章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。主题 句原则国有其君，家有其主，文章也要 有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首” 之 感！相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意 把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们 稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉劝各位一 定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头或 者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无 事！ 特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒 -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 12 险的！To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer allthe questions correctly. 一二三原则领导讲话总是第一部 分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部 分、第一点? 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条 理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这 些关键性的“ 标签” 来判定你的文章是否 结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单， 只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的 几个要点前就清楚了。 first, second, third, last firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally the first, the second, the third, the last in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly 5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally 6）to start with, next, in addition, finally -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 13 7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least 8）most important of all, moreover, finally 9）on the one hand, on the other hand 10）for one thing, for another thing 建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平 时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！短语优 先原则 写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果 使用短语，有两个好处：其一、用短语 会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你 的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识 的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如 果发现亮点精彩的短语，那么你的文 章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维 短路，只有凑字数，怎么办？用短语是 一个办法！比如：I cannot bear it. 可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.I want it. 可以用短语表达： I am looking forward to it. 这样字数明显增加， -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 14 表达也更准确。 五、多实少虚原则原因很简单， 写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不 要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词， 少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那 些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的 时候，不应该之说 nice 这样空洞的词， 应该使用一些诸如 generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如：When to go, Why he goes away?走出房间， general 的词是：walk out of the room5） 附加但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room 如果有了老婆，总会遇到这 样的情况，当你再讲 小姐走出房间应 该说：sail out of the room 某个人的时候， 她会插一句说，我昨天见过他；小孩走 出房间应该说：dance out of the room 或 者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插 入到我 老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room 们的话里面，那就是定 语从句和同位语从句或者 所以多用实 -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 15 词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！是 插入语。多变句式原则 The man whom you met yesterday is a friend 加法 of mine. 都希望写下很长的句子，像个老 外似的，可就是 I dont enjoy that book you are reading.怕写错，怎么办，最保 险的写长句的方法就是这 Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is 些，可以在任何 句子之间加 and,但最好是前后的 easy- going.句子又先后关系或者并列关系。 比如说：其实很简单，同位语-要解释 的东西删除后不影 I enjoy music and he is fond of playing 响整个句子的构成； 定语从句借用之前的关键 guitar.词并 且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但 是如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个 超级句式：whom or that 关键词必须要 紧跟在先行词之前。Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also 6）排比 warm.文 学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如 果非要其它的短语可以用：让你的文章 -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 16 更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一 besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover 个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个 个的不定转折 式，一个个地词，一个 个的短语，如此表达将会批评某人缺点 的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说使文 章有排山倒海之势！ 说他的优点，然后转入正题，再 说缺点，这种方 Whether your tastes are modern or 式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较 容易让人接受。traditional, sophisticated or simple, there 所以呢，我们说话的时 候，只要在要点之前先来 is plenty in London for you. 点废话，注意二者之间用个专这 次就够了。Nowadays, energy can be obtained throughThecar was quite old, yet it was in excellent various sources such as oil, coal, natural condition.gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.The coat was thin, but it was warm.We have got to study hard, -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 17 to enlarge our 更多的短语：scope of knowledge, to realize our despite that, still, however, nevertheless, potentials and to pay for our life. 果要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非 用排比不可！昨天在街上我看到了一个 女孩，然后我主动搭挑战极限原则既然 十挑战极限，必然是比较难讪，然后我 们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后的， 但是并非不可攀！ 我们成为了朋友? 可见，讲故事 的时候我们总要原理：在学生的文章中， 很少发现诸如独立主格追求先后顺序， 先什么，后什么，所以然后这个的句子， 其实也很简单，只要花上 5 分钟的时间 词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的 是先后或看看就可以领会，它就是分词 的一种特殊形式，因果关系！分词要求 主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如： The snow began to fall, so we went home.The weather being fine, a large number of 更多短语：people went to -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 18 climb the Western Hills.then, therefore, consequently, accordingly,Africa is the second largest continent,hence, as a result, for this reason, so thatits size being about three times that of 失衡句 China.如果您 可一些出这样的句子，不得高分才有些 人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小， 身怪！ 三、文章主体段落的三大杀手 锏体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子， 可如果真一、举实例思维短路，举实例！ 提出一个的是这样了，也就必然会吸引 别人的注意力。文观点，举实例！提出 一个方案，举实例！而且者章中如果出 现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你也 是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何 情况的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从 句，表语从句，下，只要我们无法继续 文章，不管三七二十一，宾语从句的变 形。尽管举例子！举例：This is what I can do.In order to attract more customers, Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.advertisers have adopted every -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 19 possible 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改 成如下的复杂成分：simulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.更多句型：To take?as an example, One example is?, Another exampleis?, for example 做比较 方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的； 又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的； 世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树 叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会 发现二者的相同点和不同点。下面是一 些短语：相似的比较： in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较： on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead,nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 20 with?,?三、换言之没话说了，可以换一 句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或 者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解 你的观点。实际就是重复重复再重复！ 下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者 上面我们举过的例子：I cannot bear it.可 以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.因 此可以这样说：I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短语： in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply. 雅思写作常用单词-常用的连 接词 常用的连接词: 1)表层次: first, firstly to begin with further in the first place second, secondly to start with still furthermore third, thirdly what is more last last -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 21 but not least also and then next besides and equally important too moreover besides in addition finally 2)表 转折； in next yearin daughter？What things are in other homes，by contrast although though yet First，let me tell you somethingmore I wonderHowat the same time but despite the fact that about myselfmoreEvening came downdownWe practise for three times every week 为需删去的词） in contrast nevertheless even though for all and often watch football match on TV 连词及与并 置问题 that togetherfor 连词连接的前 后两部分是否合乎逻辑；并列连词 notwithstanding on the contrary however